A Concubine’s Son’s Road to the Imperial Exams

I've roughly read the first fifteen chapters, but I personally don't like it very much. The character collapses and spins and jumps. The protagonist is a time traveler. His predecessor lived silently for more than ten years. His biological mother died. It's hard to protect yourself, and your life is worse than that of a slave. Even if the protagonist hadn't traveled through the halo, he would have died. After the protagonist traveled over, he repaid evil with kindness. He was comparable to a saint, but saints are also human beings. People have distracting thoughts and selfish motives, and the seven emotions and six desires are at work. No matter what happens in front of you, you will live silently and silently, even worse than a slave. I will be grateful if I show some care later. This character is really like a saint.

Si, well, I always feel that this is written in the third person like a composition! I feel like there are too many gorgeous words. Well, I think the details can be included but not too many. I felt a little uncomfortable while reading it. The novel should be written in the first person and from the perspective of the male protagonist. It doesn't work. The more I listen to it, the more uncomfortable it becomes, but the continuity is okay.

Skip the death of the original owner and read the cool text at the end. After reading the death of the original owner at the beginning, you will feel suffocated to death. The original owner was tortured to death. The food and drink were worst than human beings. There was no doctor to see him when he was sick. After the time-travelers came, I tried to please them in every way. It was so uncomfortable that I quit.

After traveling through time, the male protagonist forgot why the original protagonist died. Crazy to please the direct or indirect murderer of the original owner, just so that he can rise to the top and obtain resources.

Tomato is the strongest saint

It's poisonous, some rewards forget about the life of being worse than a servant for more than ten years.

Author, you have written one less provincial examination. After the hospital examination, it is the provincial examination instead of the general examination. But the content of the book is overall okay. This article was so enjoyable to read that I almost couldn't stand it anymore. I hope the author will add some ups and downs of the plot in the follow-up, so as not to make the article too exciting.

Great article, very interesting

All I can say is that the original owner was really miserable.

The protagonist can be forgiven even if he kills his predecessor, but the protagonist still has to ask others if their hands hurt when they hit him.