Dual Cultivation: From the Start, I’m Matched With a Mommy-Type Yandere Campus Beauty

It just happened to be 7.8 From zero, which seems to be stable so far. However, some sections can be smoothed and more gradual. For example, when the heroine slaps Lin Tongtong, the heroine's high level of anger is a bit too much for the emotional development increased by all the events she has experienced before. Of course, feelings are not excluded. To such a radical girl, but objectively speaking, if there was at least a plot before this where both of them were in crisis, and the male protagonist risked a large amount of his own health to save the female protagonist's life and then narrowly won, the emotional changes in this section would be smoother, and it would make people feel that such a level of anger is worthy of the previous experience. Taking such emotional ups and downs as an example, I hope the author can improve better. Of course, the places I refer to may not represent everyone's preferences. I rarely comment on such a long essay and ask the author to revise the sentences, because I feel that this subject matter is a bit outstanding compared to the recent dozen or so recommended books. It suddenly comes to nature and I want to express my opinion. If there are more experienced reviewers, you are welcome to discuss it.

The author has never been in love before, and the writing is a bit green. In fact, relationships are not all cultivated bit by bit. They may take big steps as they go, or they may naturally make some intimate actions in the process of getting along, and then the two of them tacitly agree to a relationship. It is direct. I hope the author can write better and not be too green, and put emotions into it. The storyline is better designed to make people want to read.

Please give me good reviews and suggestions. If there are any mistakes, the author will make corrections. I will try my best to read your comments. Thank you~

The writing is okay, don't worry about those who rated it low. They feel that everything in the novel must go smoothly, move forward unrivaled, and maybe they have not even read Luotuo Xiangzi [shocked]

The person who designed this virus probably once had a girlfriend who urged him to shut down his phone and go to bed at 11:37 in the middle of the night. However, this person broke up with his teammates for a long time and ignored his girlfriend. When he was sad, he spread the virus. All the behaviors of the virus you see are the behaviors of his girlfriend: she is a foodie (animal food) She was so stupid that she thought she had deleted the icon and uninstalled the boy's game (only eating desktop icons). When she was angry, she would take pictures of the boy's monitor (the desktop would shake) and move the boy's mouse (the window would move as a result). The girl did this and he still ignored her. Later, the girl gave up and left, and the virus also left. The girl's last words were just like a virus: I will never touch your computer again, I won't say "I'm hungry" next to you and ask you to accompany me to dinner, I won't get angry when you play games in the middle of the night, I won't pat your computer and grab your mouse to make you Stay with me, and I won't pretend to be stupid and delete your game icons. I just want you to eat on time, go to bed on time, and spend a little time with me. Now that I'm tired, I'm leaving and I won't disturb your world, your computer, and your games😭😭

So far, there is nothing toxic about it. The heroine is very lovable, independent and understands that love means giving to each other. As a book written by a female author, it is very rare for the character's outlook to not be completely distorted. The story is also considered mainstream and unfolds slowly. Not to say it's exciting, at least it's not boring. The main reason is that it is difficult to find novels about cultivating immortals that have both emotional and main plots. The story written by the male author is okay, but the emotional line is either missing or shows up after getting married and there is no role for it. It's really rare to find this kind of novel about cultivating immortality that has its beginning and ending tied together.

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It meets the requirements very well. It has a single female protagonist. The female protagonist is more decisive than the male protagonist. The male and female protagonists have a good relationship and are not slow. They are a bit slow in cultivating immortals, but they are still good in daily life. The male protagonist is not a holy mother, and the female protagonist is not a holy mother. The heroine is still a yandere

It's beautiful, I love reading it, I like the author, I want to take the author away, lock her in a small dark room, lock her on the bed, and let her write a novel for me.

At least what the author wrote is very consistent with the character. The male protagonist is really a pure dog licker, and he has a girlfriend every day.