Quick Transmigration: Saving Girls Starts with Sun Xiaojing

It's good to read, especially the second part, the part about Chu Qiao. I have never read Chu Qiao's biography. When I read what the author wrote, it seemed like I was reading a brand new and exciting story. Although the author said that he is not good at writing about power, it does not affect the perception of the story in the second part about women regaining their power. By the way, I feel that the author has the potential to write group portraits. Although the article is short, each character is well portrayed (I have watched the original drama for the first story, and I already have the original image of each character, so I didn't realize that the second story really feels like the characters are three-dimensional). I hope the author will achieve greater success, and I also look forward to the author becoming a leader in feminist literature in the future. Finally, author, you must keep writing. I really like your works. When I watch many movies and TV shows, I feel unfair to the female characters in them. I feel that they are coerced by men and forced to become "qualified" pendants, such as the main female characters in Qing Yu Nian and the girls in Baoyuelou, and the equality pursued by the protagonists is "male-male" equality, and many others in Zhifou. There are many women who not only fight each other in the arena created by men, but are also brainwashed and oppressed by feudal ideas (fans, please don't scold me, I have been scolded for a long time, whether it is a good drama or not, and the actors are good, but there are real problems with the spiritual core). There are also many film and television characters who are not aware of the oppression of "patriarchy". At most, the ones I have seen are just "spiritual patricide".

The idea is good, I have a loving daughter, and it is a story about strong women, but the writing is not very good, it is a bit like a report from a government agency. Then I listened to the book, and the article described the emotional words in the eyes too many times. I hope to continue to work hard!

It can be seen that the author has just started writing, so there are many long paragraphs that are declarative sentences, and it is a bit too smooth. The scumbag who hurt the heroine and took away the child didn't choose to call the police? The heroine's business start-up went a little too smoothly, as if she was cheating. The author can write more conflicts and describe more character traits. For example, how can a wary child trust someone he has met once? Will a girl who has always been suppressed and bullied subconsciously do housework when she lives in a stranger's house? How can the heroine help her overcome this? Like this, you can write more, describe more, have less descriptive paragraphs, have more storylines, and it doesn't matter if the pace is slower. However, there are really very few female-centered articles on love for women. The author's courage to write and publish is already very impressive!

Nice! Although the writing style is a little immature, the female-oriented perspective is very worthy of recognition and support! I hope there will be half the utopian world in this novel in the future! I hope all women can have the life they want, even if they have no dreams and like an ordinary life ~ it is still worth it

It is truly female-centered, and I have learned a lot of expressions and thinking that a first-rate person should learn. Although the article is like writing a composition, I still learned how to think about the world from a female perspective. Come on, author.

The redemption between women Xiang Shuang's novel has a total of five worlds. The first two are characters from well-known TV series (Sun Xiaojing of the Xia Family's Three Riches, Yuan Chun of Chu Qiao), the last two are self-created worlds (80s era novel and apocalyptic superpower background), and the fifth is a world of cultivating immortals that is briefly mentioned. In addition to the main characters, the protagonist also helped many women in that era escape from their original miserable situations. They finally held real power and high positions, and gained a life that truly belonged to them. No insulting///female words, no derogatory phrases containing female radicals, and the use of neutral words is also correct. There are no too many male characters (if there are, they must be negative and promote the plot). The author is very obedient and has changed many inappropriate details.

The subject matter of the author is very novel and the connotation is also very good, but the writing style is a bit immature. I hope you can continue to work hard! ! ! [Sending Hearts]

Love for Women is a heart-warming story about women helping each other. The shortcomings are that it is too bland, with too many cumbersome and useless descriptions, too few exciting points and not enough conflict, so it lacks some appeal.

Support, come on! Hope to go further. However, you can hone your writing skills more. The words used are a bit repetitive and there are too many modifiers, which is a bit like writing a composition.

Flaws do not hide the faults, but loving a daughter is so good. In the world of Chu Qiao, the princess and other women are really tragic. Our motherland tells us that wherever there is oppression, there is resistance.