Stay Away, Target! I'm Straight!

First of all, let's make sure that the plot is rich and attractive. The first aspect is understandably very good, and it is relatively novel among period novels. The long-lasting emotions are handled very well. Key comments, the second side, I don't want to dislike it. First of all, I have watched a lot of fast-paced movies. 1V1 and slices are very common. Usually, it is the first world. It is the first time you fall in love and the only attack you meet him is this kind of person who is looking for a lover. Basically, there will be some special signs like birthmarks, taste, roses, and other flowers, you understand? Or kiss something that feels like an electric thing, and then feel the heartbeat again, and then fall in love again. It can be said that the theme of Miao teenagers is very novel. , I personally think that the scene before Wu Yao fell in love with Shou and almost fell in love with him is the most interesting, and the subsequent plot is also not satisfactory. The first drawback is that Shou lured the Gu worm out at that time, but did not directly kill the villain. There were worries about the future, and he was forced to pull for a while, which disgusted me (the result of Shou Wei Gong) In fact, that section can be regarded as a highlight and a perfect ending. If you engage in a little more daily life, Tiantian will be OK), but when Gongshou came to the outside world, the real society, he was kidnapped by the villain, and the blackening value was added abruptly. It can barely be regarded as torture for the sake of the plot. Add a few more chapters, and then what? After finally getting rid of all these miscellaneous people, it turns out that Shou is a very affectionate and pure person, which is good. In order to describe Shou's struggle in the whirlpool and the love that penetrates his bones, the author does not hesitate to hypnotize Shou to deceive himself and others, which is acceptable, but what is the shortcoming? It's just that Shou knew that Gong was his lover in the past life, and he changed his face quickly and accepted it well. Gong must still be worried and worried about gains and losses. Anyway, he didn't handle this point well, and about 1/3 of the plot was a bit confusing, and the writing style dropped a bit, but at least the ending was sweet, and maybe to make up for the previous pull between them, it was faster to confirm that Gong was the past life with his finger. Alas, I didn't feel that all the hardships were over, I just felt that it was the end of the world. It's a bit hard for me to stay up late at night and read novels. The first world was originally very enjoyable for me, but then the second world's plot was interesting and not bad, and the interactions were intriguing. It really stepped on my XP, and then they created a group of inexplicable things for me. No one is perfect, it's human nature, I hope the article will be better [Sending my heart] I don't recommend that you watch it too much. If you are a fast traveler, this is a high-level and medium-level game. Alas, you basically don't need to watch the next few worlds. The setting is interesting. Okay, I will withdraw first. Brothers [grievance]

It's very interesting to watch. The protagonist Chen Mingchuan is handsome and has a good personality. He takes his tasks seriously and treats the person he's tasked with sincerely. In the first world, Gong expressed his love very boldly after realizing his feelings (direct praise!), ["You are very good, Chen Mingchuan, you are very good. If others get to know you, they will definitely like you," Zhuang Ze said: "Just like me."] The plot from Gong's confession to Shou's gradual acceptance of emotions, the transition is natural, reasonable, and the daily life of the two people after they get together is very sweet. At the same time, there are also some foreshadowings related to the system, which are well received. I look forward to the follow-up plot ~

It's nice to read, and it's well written. I just have a suggestion, don't write about abuse for the sake of abuse. I know that you want to express the sense of redemption and the deep love between the protagonists, but don't write the abuse in a deliberate way. For example, the ending of The Strange Neighbor is the above-mentioned kind of abuse for the sake of abuse. It's too deliberate, and the latest one is the ruthless one. The writing of Dao Small World is okay but too cliché. It has a weird feeling, but it is much better than the previous writing style of Da Da Da. However, it is still too deliberate (although it makes me cry). So I hope Da Da Da Da will no longer be so sadistic when expressing redemption. After all, this can easily make an originally good world become bad, such as strange neighbors and other characters. In terms of shaping, what do you say about the protagonists Shou and Gong? I feel that the shaping is good and bad, and it is easy to lose the favor. Please pay attention to the Shou's younger brother in the Republic of China. I don't quite understand what you want to express at the end. It is a bit redundant. To be honest, it is very bad, so please pay attention to the shaping of the character and not to waste the readers' favor. Finally What I want to say the most is Dada [I'm about to cry] I like watching Tiantian's love, please stop abusing it, okay? Isn't Tiantian bad? [I'm about to cry] (The above only represents my personal opinion, if there is any offense, please point out that it will be deleted, thank you for your understanding) Also, thank you for your hard work [Send heart] [Send heart] [Send heart] [Laugh] Please give me more thank you, it's not enough [Please give me more] [Please give me more] [Please give me more]

Although I just started reading it, the writing is really good. The characters are very independent, flesh and blood, and the characters are not superficial. I can stand out among many old-fashioned fast-traveling articles^^

It's really good to read. I'm very picky about reading books. I basically give up after reading them. Even if it's not good enough, I'll skip reading. But I didn't skip a chapter to finish this book. The characters are well created, the plot is not ridiculous, and it is very close to reality. It really made me understand the sentence "Most novels are fictional, but there are shadows of life". Highly recommended!

I really like Chen Mingchuan's character, he is very normal and not so fancy. After reading several Little Worlds, I discovered that this one is written by the same author as "Straight Man..." And the plot is still very good. I am determined to follow this author's novel.

This is simply the most serious fast-traveling article I've ever read. The plot is not straightforward, the emotions are not instantaneous, and the appearance does not need to be piled up with fancy words. Don't be fooled by the cover, Chen Mingchuan has never been a weak and delicate person. In the first world, Chen Mingchuan is really straight. It is not an ordinary romance novel at all. You can really feel that Chen Mingchuan is indeed a man. Maybe it's because of the first impression. When I look at Chen Mingchuan now, I still think of him as a slightly muscular person with 186cm wide shoulders, narrow waist and slightly white skin. This is the best. Of course, in fact, in addition to the 186 and wide shoulders and narrow waist, Chen Mingchuan's fair skin, clear blood vessels, etc. Described in the article all change with the physical condition of the small world. The first world requires doing heavy work and taking care of others, and of course he cannot be too weak. This is a true two-way redemption story, and he is very favored. It can be said that he is in a leading position in this relationship, and no matter how possessive his partner is, he must obey him. The plot develops on both sides of the story, and the writing is very exciting. I don't agree with the hot reviews that the emotional line is not well written. The emotions are slowly progressing along with the plot. If you want to see a story about the protagonist's incredible appearance, everyone falls in love at first sight without any brains, then don't come to Huo Huo's serious story writing to maliciously give low marks. Other people's evaluations are other people's, and you will know the depth of it only after you experience it yourself. There is no doubt that this is a real double-powerful novel. Except for the fact that the protagonist in the supernatural plane is an ordinary person who cannot cause harm to ghosts and seems useless, in other modern and ancient planes, normal us Chen Mingchuan will never hide behind and let others protect him as long as he has identity and force. What I mean by "double strength" refers to force on the one hand and psychology on the other. Chen Mingchuan is very strong, tough and gentle mentally. The protagonist, Gong, seems to have a high status with force but is actually as fragile as a child. It can be said that he is completely blank in terms of emotions. He gradually became stronger through the guidance of Chen Mingchuan step by step. This strength is only possible because of Chen Mingchuan's survival. Once Chen Mingchuan dies, he will naturally not be able to survive. This article is really the best one I have read in the past 25 years. It is a love between a few normal people. There is no deception, no blood, and no nonsensical plot. You must always be happy. I successfully finished reading it in three days... I didn't read any other novels in the middle of reading this, which is quite rare. Why is it so good! The first five worlds and the last world are the most beautiful. The worlds after the Wuqingdao feel a bit downhill... The writing is not very heart-warming, and the amount of plot is not large. I feel a little bored watching it... But luckily I persevered. Also, the author really likes the suspense genre. The few modern worlds are basically all supernatural and horror. I feel a little tired of aesthetics. The best supernatural writing is the third world and the last world. Personally, I quite like the author's writing style, and I just love this kind of plain and flowing emotion.

The emotions are very delicate and the characters are well created. I like Shuangxue and Tianhei Don't Go Out the most! Mainly because of long-term love (and love from the depths of the soul in multiple worlds), the plot is very fast, not bad, and it cured my book shortage! ! Xql has always been happy! ! Of course, not everyone will like it, but I quite like it anyway (after all, I am not a super professional novelist, so there will always be flaws). The writing is also very good! Looking forward to the next plot! ! (Has read half of it) Finally finished reading it! ! I feel that the later world is more focused on plot description. The sweet daily life of xql is relatively less, but it is still very interesting. I really like the world of the Republic of China. It is very interesting! It's a pity that there is no extra story Recommended! ! [Love][love] Follow-up review: I've watched it many times, it's really good... Wow Why is it so beautiful? I really like Xiao Ming. Then I really like Tongshuangxue. I really like Nianxia (I have watched this world five times). Then I don't go out until dark. I also like this kind of feeling. Every time I see the world of cultivating immortals, it hurts. Ahhhhh, I am going crazy because of my book shortage.

I just finished reading the first world. It is really well written, with straightforward language and delicate emotions. There are no gorgeous words, but the story written is very touching. Super sweet! Love to watch [admire] I feel like the second world is so bad. It's so much worse than the first world. I've only read Chapter 22 of the second world. I can't stand the plot. I feel like I'm getting high blood pressure [Start][Start][Start] The first world is really good. I have been listening to the second world in full, and it is not very attractive. I'll take another look. If things get better by then, I'll change the score.

Many world settings and stories are very novel, the writing is smooth, and the writing style is also good. This writing style is indeed rare in Tomato and kept attracting me to read. Unfortunately, the pace is getting faster and faster. I really like the first world❗️ This kind of delicate emotional changes makes the protagonist's image more three-dimensional. But as the world grows, it feels like the emotional lines between the protagonists are like doing tasks. Although the length of the world is about the same, in the later worlds, it feels like it is self-defeating and destroys the sense of delicacy. In the fast travel novel, there are too many plot events in one world. If you want to maintain the same length, it will encroach on the space of other content, causing the impression to be inferior to the beginning. But actually I really really like this article. I hope the author can balance the proportion of plot and emotional lines. Oh my god, I finished watching A World again and found that the progress is even faster. Relying on the plot alone to promote the emotional line feels dry. A lot of content is skipped over and over again, just like the part where Neil died for the first time in "He is a Dragon". The pace is too fast. It gives people the feeling of a history book recorded by an official. I can't give up but I have no desire to continue reading.