
Naruto: The Ultimate Rookie, a Human Pokemon from the Start
火影:开局真新人之人形宝可梦
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Explore more →Looking for a Novel With a Male Lead Who Has Feminine Features and Stunning Beauty! A Real Beauty
I'm terrified of authors describing the hero as having a cold, handsome face chiseled like a blade. I love novels where the hero is breathtakingly beautiful! I love the section on Tomato Novel that helps readers find their next book so much! Book lovers, please throw your recommendations at me!
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High-quality anime fanfiction, preferably over 500,000 characters.
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There Are No Masterpieces in Naruto Anymore (Except Dave, the Artist, Sister Juan, and Divine Soil)
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So Fired Up It Won't Even Be Brought Down by Boruto!
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New Naruto Fanfic With Excellent Writing That Takes the Original Story in Fresh Directions
Are there any new Naruto fanfics on Tomato Novel with fresh, unusual, surprising content, smooth prose, and substance? Don't bother recommending anything under 300,000 characters. Fellow readers suffering from a reading slump, please help me out!
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Please Recommend Naruto System Novels, Including Ones Where the Protagonist Transmigrates to Another World With a Naruto System
Preferably something long, featuring transmigration into epic fantasy works like The Great Ruler, Panlong, and Stellar Transformation.
Pokemon: Zeraora, With a System, Never Gets Caught
Looking for books like "Pokemon: I Became Zeraora."
The Protagonist Looks Like a Girl, Has Delicate, Androgynous Features, and Is Always Mistaken for One
Looking for Naruto Stories, Female-Oriented, No Male Transmigrating Into a Female Body. I'm Having a Book Drought
A Male Lead with Feminine Features So Androgynous That No One Believes Him When He Says He Is a Man
No cross-dressing, no gender transformation.
Naruto Novels, Come One, Come All! The More the Better, I’m Not Picky
Some urban cultivation novels, too. I haven't read one in ages. The kind where only the protagonist cultivates, with a super-satisfying plot and a protagonist called Wu Di.
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It's good to watch^ω^ It's a very interesting combination, the plot progresses reasonably and doesn't drag out, and the protagonist is also quite fun. Although I really like the plot of the early stage and the third battle, after I watched the whole incident of the Kyuubi Rebellion, I felt an indescribable helplessness. The relationship between Kyuubi and Kushina has obviously eased a lot, but in the end they were still controlled by Obito. I can understand this, but after the control, can't Kushina's body be sealed back? (PS: I went back after seeing other envelopes) In the end, the Yondaime couple were as good as the plot. Although it is said that he can be resurrected later and the chakra of the Yondaime couple's consciousness is sealed in Naruto's body together with the Nine-Tails... But I want to say that even if he is resurrected in the future, the companionship he once lacked will still be missing. Even if he can accompany Naruto in the form of consciousness later, it will still be different after all. I want to know why the Watergate couple died in such a dramatic way? Is it to make the protagonist become Hokage in the future? But the protagonist doesn't seem to have that intention, or is he forced to become Hokage in the future as a foreshadowing? Or is it that the author simply doesn't want to change these key plot points? Do you want to mainly follow the original route? In this case, what does the existence of the protagonist change? Maybe small things have changed, but the big events seem to have not changed so far. Although I don't know if there will be a Boruto plot in the future, I feel that the four battles are inevitable. In addition, there is another point that makes me personally uncomfortable. In the latest chapter, the protagonist seems to have some information about the plot of the original story. They can receive this information. In other words... Why didn't the protagonist tell Minato what the protagonist knew before the Nine-Tails incident? Although it can be said before that the source of information cannot be explained, there are also other factors such as world consciousness and you cannot tell them. But in your latest chapter, you directly predicted that Sasuke and Sakura will be together in the future, holy shit! You are not very scientific at all. Your sources are talking about foreknowledge and prophecy? Ah, didn't you say that they could hear it? Why didn't you disclose the information before? I don't understand, since he can reveal some information about the plot that he knows, he just doesn't tell it, he's just playing. This makes me feel that the Minato couple can survive and have an information gap with Obito and the others, but the protagonist wants to be a lone ranger, and no information is shared at all. Then it appeared not long after this. The highlight for me was that the protagonist seemed to deliberately match up Naruto and Hinata. Although I have no feelings for Naru and Hinata, I don't even like them that much, but the protagonist's intentional matchmaking made me hate it. It makes me feel as if your parents are referring to you as a baby relative, and they intend to bring you together to become childhood sweethearts and cultivate a relationship so that you can be together naturally. Although he didn't explicitly say that he was a baby, this kind of intentional matchmaking was very annoying. Moreover, in the plot of setting up Naruto and Hinata, the protagonist's words seem to be scorning Sakura, saying that Naruto doesn't want to see Sakura, just treat him like a licking dog or something, isn't it you? 😥No matter how you put it, it just makes people feel very uncomfortable.
I still hope that the protagonist will cut her hair short, as she already looks like a woman, and keeping her hair long feels like she is deliberately leading in that direction.
The writing is very good, so I give it five stars, but how can I put it this way? I have to be on tenterhooks every day while reading this novel, for fear that in the next chapter the author will start to stir up trouble and write about the love between the protagonist and Lucario. . . Regardless of whether Lucario is a male or a female, its image is still male. If it becomes a human being, it will not only be a human being, but also a male. . . How to speak? I kind of want to give up, but the author has never given up on the life of Nantong. As a straight person, watching this plot is very uncomfortable.
I want to see Kushina put a beautiful little dress on Hiko, put on beautiful makeup, and take it to the street to enchant everyone.
Gkd, I want to see the story of Xiaolan giving birth to an egg and everyone in the Leaf Village being confused [please read it carefully]
I'm just curious about one thing. The template given is obviously that of Pikachu. Why does it look more and more like Zeraora as it goes into the later stages?
Let me ask you, if you have a super new body constitution, will you never grow up at the age of ten?
The update is too slow but there are no other issues so far. Don't pay attention to what they said about clearing Orochimaru's name. Everyone has their own understanding. That kind of person just applies mechanically. What he uses is not the one that many people recognize. What he uses is the theory that he understands and has not yet explained clearly. Just write normally, just add more, otherwise you may not be able to retain people.
Very good, just pay attention to the typos. The pressure is too severe.
The writing is quite good, but I have a question about the part about practicing the Immortal Technique of the Shigu Forest. In high school biology, the human body has three lines of defense. The skin is the first line to block most bacteria. Will it cause infection if the skin melts while practicing the Immortal Technique? [Think]