For Fu Xuan, Qingque Enters the Divination Commission

Well, how should I put it, just read it as a fan fiction, it brings the characters into it and doesn't write too much about the original plot, so it's pretty good. But I have an immature idea, what if the ending is "the little bird lies in Fu Xuan's arms, and then uses his last strength to say "I'm sorry, I can't go on with you"".

The writing style... It is best to use more vernacular in the previous chapters (novels are not suitable for writing like compositions). Overall, it is good (except for updates ^∧^). Come on, author! That year, I was 9 years old and she was 11 years old. I told her that I would marry her in the future, and she replied naughtily: Okay! That year, I was 12 years old and she was 14 years old. She was a head taller than me. I raised my head and said that I liked her. She listened blankly and said nothing, then turned her head and stopped looking at me. That year, I was 18 years old, she was 20 years old, and I was already at the construction site. I have been carrying cement for a year, and she is still in a key university. I can no longer say that I like her, because I feel that I am not worthy of her at all. I keep what I want to say to her to myself, and I will tell her everything when I am worthy of her. In the next four years, I never had the chance to see her again. I heard that she was already working. I was more concerned about whether she was a wife and a mother. My career was gradually getting on the right track. I was also a small contractor, taking on some construction sites, and I was no longer embarrassed by money. When I saw her again, it was in Dongguan, in a dim room, just the two of us. After a long silence, she spoke: 800, seeing that you are an acquaintance, I will charge you 500. I tried my best not to tremble anymore, and said, "Come with me." Her eyes glazed over for a moment, then flickered, and then like a fire extinguished, she said, "I'm not worthy of you, I'm just a lady, I have guests, nothing happens, I'll leave first." She left in a hurry. Later, I saw her on TV. She was being held by two policemen, with a look of horror and distress on her face. The TV did not even cover her face, letting her dangle in front of me, letting her bump and bump in my heart until it shattered. The last time I saw her, she came to me. She was on the roof, and I looked up at her from downstairs. I just looked at her for a long time, and he left without leaving a word. The next news about her was a year later, when her mother called me, saying that she was ill and could not be treated, and that she wanted to see me one last time. I can't accept it. Anyway, I feel very depressed. When I arrived at the hospital, I looked at her pale face in front of her bed, looking much thinner than before. I smiled at her, I don't know how ugly that smile was, and she smiled at me as innocently as she did when she was seven years old. She raised her hand, and I hurried over to hold her hand. The tears couldn't help but fall down. She opened her mouth and said in very soft words: You know... You know... I burst into tears at this time, and immediately said: I know, I know your heart, and my heart has never changed. I will not dislike you. We... She suddenly shook it off excitedly, interrupted me, and only listened to her weak voice and said: No... I want to... Ask you... Update... Hurry up... Okay?

Please don't forget, this is Xianzhou! Star Dome Railway Universe! OK, you are right! Also, the Xianzhou people are immortal species.

Well written, props to the author. [Smile]

Qingxuan CP Eternal God

I like double heroines

It's so beautiful. If I hadn't learned Chinese well and had no education, I would have praised it a few times.

Good looking. I like it. I love watching it.

I saw Fu Qing who had a different flavor [thoughts]

Very bold, very bold