Zenless Zone Zero: I Can Use Ethereal’s Powers!

The writing is excellent, with no major flaws so far (except for the slightly abstract part about the first meeting with Jane). The plot doesn't completely follow the game, which is a great point! It avoids the boredom of repeatedly watching the same story, making it very refreshing.

The protagonist's personality is the highlight of the book. If the synopsis could be revised, it would attract many readers. However, I saw the author previously post that they didn't know how to do it. They suggested that after the protagonist loses control and devours the remains, someone arrives, and the protagonist quickly adjusts and acts.

The title might seem a bit silly, but as you read on, the plot's logic becomes clearer, the concept cleverer, and the protagonist quite intelligent. The surprisingly good food descriptions are also a huge plus. In short: awesome!

It's pretty good; I'm starting to feel more immersed in it, like that book that deeply moved me, *The Lord of Ten Thousand Nights*. Of course, that book is a top-rated novel, so it's still far from that level, but I'm vaguely seeing its influence in this one.

It's well written, but the butterfly effect is too strong, I really can't stand it anymore 🤦🤦 (Ling's cheat code is gone).

This is a pretty good novel. The protagonist's personality is also my type. Too many protagonists in fanfiction are too arrogant and just trying too hard to be cool. This novel is well-written, with clear logic, and is definitely worth reading.

It possesses a certain level of logic and writing skill. The low rating might be due to the subject matter, title, or the content of the first few chapters. If you are familiar with the Zero Zone (a fictional writing style), and are willing to read a few chapters, you'll find it to be one of Zero Zone's best works. Tomato's early game was a huge sacrifice for the good guys.

Give myself a thumbs up for my first attempt at writing fanfiction!

Should we try to bring that (Fairy Spirit) back later? Otherwise, it'll be a bit tricky. If the plot falls apart, it won't be easy to write, because if this robot is gone, some main and side quests might be missing, and some bonds will be lost.

It's good. Don't let the low rating fool you; it's very well written. The beginning might be a bit off-putting, so you can skip some parts, but it gets really good later on. It's a shame the later parts weren't finished; the plot is only summarized. Unfortunately, there weren't enough readers, so they couldn't continue writing.