Zenless Zone Zero: I Can Use Ethereal’s Powers!

The writing is great, and there are no bad points for the moment (except for the first meeting with Jane, which is a bit abstract). The plot does not exactly follow the one in the game, which is a good point! You won't feel bored watching the same plot over and over again, it's very novel. It just depends on how to deal with Fariy's ownership at the end (after all, it was Ling/Zhe who got it in the game. The main reason is that the protagonist can't use it much if he gets it at this stage, unless his ability to feel holes and cracks was given by Fariy, which feels unlikely). Overall, it's very well written! Keep it up! More updates [laughing evilly]

The protagonist's character is the highlight of this book. If the introduction can be changed, it will attract a lot of people, um, but I saw that the author previously said that he does not know how to make the protagonist lose control and then swallow the corpse, and then someone will come and quickly adjust the state to act. In this way, the two characteristics of the protagonist can be clearly shown, one is to swallow the corpse, and the other is good acting skills I was forced to finish it... I couldn't bear to let it go, I couldn't bear to let it go, because I had been receiving it from the beginning, alas.

Just by looking at the title, it seems that it doesn't make much sense, but when I see the content that is different from the original plot, I feel that the logic of the plot is clear, the concept is clever, and the protagonist is very clever. In addition, the description of the food is also surprisingly good. Bonus points. In short: it's great!

It feels pretty good, and I'm starting to feel more immersed in it, just like the book Lord of Ten Thousand Nights that shocked me so deeply. Of course, that book is number one in a certain novel, so it's still far from it, but I can vaguely see the shadow of that book in this book.

It's very well written, but your butterfly effect is too strong, I really can't stand it [face covering] [face covering] (Ling's worries are gone)

It's a pretty good novel. The protagonist's character is also my favorite type. Too many fan novels have protagonists who are too crazy and just put on the pretense. This novel is better written and logically clear. It's worth reading.

It has certain logic and writing skills. The rating may be too low due to the subject matter, title, and content of the first few chapters. If you have been exposed to Ju00 Zone, be patient and read a few chapters. It is the best work of Ju00 Zone. In the early stage of Tomato, the good swordsman is a big sacrifice. It may be better to change the data of Cave Thief. It can be done secretly to help her escape, which is better than death.

Give yourself a thumbs up for trying to write fan fiction for the first time!

Should we try to bring that (fairy spirit) back later qwq, otherwise it will be a bit difficult to handle. If the plot collapses, it will not be particularly easy to write, because if this robot is gone, it may lead to the loss of some main lines and branch lines, and some bonds will be missing qwq

It's good-looking, even though it doesn't have a high rating, but it's well-written. In addition, it may be a bit dissuasive in the early stage. You can choose to skip a part, but the later part is still very interesting. It's a pity that the later part is not finished. The subsequent plot is presented in the form of summary. I can't help it. There are too few people to read it, so I can't write it down.