The Journey of Bai Xian

This book has gained momentum in the first two volumes. Although it is not as exciting as the later volumes, it still has the author's own considerations and chapter positioning. Prepare appetizers for three or four rolls. It would be better to say that the feeling of surprise will be more. Overview of the book: The book is not only systematic and time-travel-free, but also omits the common fantasy novels of being humiliated after a setback and looking for allies and then looking for opportunities for revenge. It directly transitions from confrontation to success to self-improvement. It also adds delicate emotional descriptions of male and female characters, which extremely truly reflects the characteristics of contradictions and leaps in emotions. It is not like ordinary novels that focus on bit by bit daily companionship and grand redemption, but describes the emotional ups and downs in extreme tension. Personal Thoughts: I really like the character setting of the protagonist. The highlight is that unlike the "travelers" who speak modern or even absurd language, they often make comments that are modern and ridiculous. It reflects the author's standardization of the terminology of the fairy world. Secondly, the characters are extremely subjective. It embodies the "exaggerated" control that the protagonist of fantasy novels should have, instead of being repeatedly suppressed in the virtual world, having to endure and hibernate, and being forced to fight against the world; this also reflects the benefits of not being someone who has traveled through the system. Growth comes from the fruits of one's own harvest or the help of the family, rather than following the rules of a systematic plan. Although "good wind relies on force", it is not the passiveness of "send me to the blue clouds" but the control of "I will rise to the blue clouds". In the end, character growth starts from scratch. This reflects the advantage of not being a reborn person. No matter how powerful he was in his previous life, this world is just following the same trend, and the character's lack of growth makes it less of a so-called sense of substitution. Keep up to date with the author's current writing progress. The book describes emotions, that is, there are much more emotional scenes between the male protagonist and the female partner than there are battle scenes. This is what distinguishes it from ordinary male videos. To use a sentence in the book, the "conquest of ten immortals" was changed to a family matter. In fact, it was already written in the introduction. Instead of writing about how the hero passed the five levels and defeated six generals in the conquest, more words were spent on how to walk the "nephrite bridge" on the road of conquest. Many people are more concerned about where the heroines in volumes one and two have gone. In fact, having multiple heroines is nothing more than a matter of allocating pen and ink, and after volumes three and four are actually unfolded, the heroines in volumes one and two may not be able to keep up with the rhythm. It is not bad, but it is actually good to leave more stage space to newcomers who are more descriptive and delicate, and can better capture the hearts of readers. The setting is still very eye-catching, the Immortal Concubine, the Road to the Ten Immortals, the Celestial Clan Imperial Clan, Heavenly Creation... The "tall vests and piles of materials" given to the female characters are definitely enough, it is worth watching, and some chapters are definitely worth reading more

I have to say, this Eastern fantasy novel is awesome. Bai Huang caused public outrage in Tiandaoyuan, and his identity was shocking in the end. The multi-female setting is very interesting. It can be so exciting without time travel and systems. It is worth reading.

It's a very good book. I just read the early stage and thought it was the same as most cool novels. The background strength is mindless and cool, and the climax begins when the protagonist returns to the fairyland. Some of the settings are also very novel. The story has twists and turns, and you can't guess the ending. The writing is very delicate, the emotional drama is brilliant, and the world view is also very grand. I just don't know if my thinking is a little restricted. I don't like the protagonist to use force first. Conquer the body of one of the heroines, and then start to develop feelings. Although this method may be the fastest way to cultivate feelings...

After reading it twice, I can say that there is nothing wrong with the writing level and the characterization, but it is very awkward. It can be seen that the author wants to improve the writing technique of "pretending to slap someone in the face". The early "Emperor" was also the same way. Newbies who read this kind of book at the beginning will feel that it is very awesome, and old bookworms will also think that the protagonist is very powerful, but they will feel awkward. Mainly If you read too much, writing with this core enjoyment point may cause the upper limit of the work's performance to stop there. Also, there are too many high-end combat powers in the early and middle stages of the work, which will cause readers to have no sense of expectation for the protagonist's own progress, creating a sense of "that's it anyway, it should be done. It doesn't matter whether you have strength or not, just rely on your family." This situation may also make some readers think that it is better for the author to spend space describing the protagonist's own cultivation in hydrology, or to focus on personal improvement or power improvement. However, you are already like this, and it is not easy to change. The books I have read in the past ten years are too big. Your basic skills and imagination are all fine. Whether you can make a hit depends entirely on how you set the theme and rhythm when designing the book. I estimate that this book will not be particularly popular among the audience. Come on. I had a different feeling after watching it for the second time, and now I have refined it! Right! It's "Shen Hao: I Have a Super Family (Fantasy Version)", which is the fantasy version of Shen Hao Wen [Chigua]

This book is really good. If Lu Bu hadn't fought Sun Wukong for Diao Chan for 300 rounds, Nuo Shou was scratched from the outside + guillotine and Xiao Wu used the invincible golden body to sustain 100% damage. This wave of 98k eight-fold mirror shot the head in seconds. But Tang San didn't believe in evil, so he said, "Resurrection, my beloved, if you dare to hurt Xiao Wu, you already have a way to die." He used Blue Silver Coil, activated Yao's passive, and mounted the god Zhuge. Zhuge pointed at Huaguo Mountain 1 08 The monkey said, "Let's play, let's play, don't joke in front of your brother Liang", in order to repay the anger of being beaten to death by the monkey with three sticks. Who knows that Zixia is not happy anymore, and she is a big sinus to the young master, Jiang Yan In order to vent his anger on the young master's family, Jiang Hu collected 7 dragon balls for more than 10 years and summoned Xie Jian to ask for help. When Sesshomaru heard this, he immediately brought Guanjiangkou 72 Grass-headed God to besiege the Gray Wolf. In desperation, the bald head could not be strong. Carefully taking away the axe, he performed a caesarean section to rescue Nezha. The snake spirit and the scorpion spirit also escaped. The Dragon King grabbed one in each hand and slapped it fiercely. With a slight smile at the corner of his mouth, he said soy milk braised noodles like a devil whispering. It can be seen that the author has a good imagination and the subject matter is very new, but it is less and slower and not enough to read. If only 30 chapters a day would be perfect.

I have been following it for almost 4 months. From my personal point of view, I can only say that this novel is the ceiling of Tomato. The plot is very exciting and exciting, but it doesn't feel formulaic or routine. At the same time, the characters are three-dimensional and full-bodied, such as my Gushe Fairy, the best in the world [snickering] [snickering] [smirking]. When reading this book, not only is the mindless fighting exciting and there are many female protagonists, but more importantly, there is the word "love" in it. It is not an industrial product with formulas and questions. In short, you will switch to this book after reading it!!!

This novel is very delicate in depicting the characters' personalities and emotions, allowing people to feel the inner world of the characters. The writing style of this novel is very beautiful, every sentence is carefully crafted and every paragraph is full of emotion.

This book is definitely the best one I have read on Tomato for so long. The protagonist, the heroines (multiple heroines, don't criticize if you don't like it) and other supporting characters have obvious personality traits. The writing is very good, and the swordsman is also very good. The only drawback is that Linglong's update speed is too stable. Can there be an update [make faces][make faces][make faces]

Good book, to be honest, it's actually very good. The various geniuses in the struggle in the prosperous age have different fates. The characterization is really great. Liu Ruyan's involvement in the game made me cry. Yes, there are so many perfect wishful thinking in the novel. The son of genius who really fights against the sky has the domineering and arrogance of the genius. There is no right or wrong, only the position, which really leaves a scratch on the protagonist's preconceptions. Not only these, but also the elder brother who paved the way for the pearl with his own life, the female prodigy who was humiliated as a plaything of Taozi in the fairy world, the mother and son of the He family who were tired of all the relief of embracing death, and the He family mother and son who were unwilling to face their fate and faced death fairly, and Xing Ruyan who had no choice but to choose the wrong path again. The portrayal and description are really great.

I have just finished reading nearly 400 updated chapters. I read books very carefully, and what I say is good, bad, or bad. I have basically read all kinds of masterpieces by great masters, so I can comment responsibly. Book friends trust me. Of course, reading preferences vary, but this book is non-toxic and can be consumed with confidence. It can be seen that the author of this book has really put a lot of thought into it. From the writing, it can be seen that the various ideas and writing styles are all good. The level is at the top of Tomato, especially the plot is relatively delicate, and the design is really good. I think if you don't have a certain age of reading, or a certain amount of reading experience, ordinary novices may not be able to read it, because the popular genre is I have read too many Shuangwen or assembly-line books and I can't read this one. Anyway, I like this book very much. The beginning of this book is very good. I originally read it with the mentality of trial reading, but I didn't expect that I discovered a book that is worth reading. People who look carefully at the setting can see that it is very attractive. No matter what aspect you look at, it is a great book and everyone can read it. Of course, I personally feel that there are some uncomfortable places. The boundaries between hundreds of chapters are not very clear. This can be felt when reading clearly, but it does not affect the reading. The over-feeling between plots is not quite in place, and it is a little imperfect. It is normal for me to read the plot, but the connection points are not so comfortable, and the emotional lines are a little stiff, because I feel that there are more contradictions. Some solutions are very good but some are not very good. You can feel it if you read carefully. I won't go into details here. Of course, these do not affect the overall look and feel, but if you read too much, some settings will make you feel uncomfortable. Of course, I hope the author can write well. It's hard to say on other platforms, but there are not so many good books on Tomato. Of course, the writing style cannot be said, but sometimes the writing may not be so smooth if you are not in the state! This book has a low rating from me because it looks and feels so good. Bookworms or old bookworms can read it without any worries!