Tomb Raiding: One Last Job Before Retirement

It can be seen that the author really loves Zhang Qiling. I have read so many fan stories. This is the only one who blinks and stares at people pitifully after the official becomes Zhang Qiling. It is exactly what a child surrounded by love will look like. I am really happy to see different Zhang Qiling. If our official is around Baima, he will also have this kind of character🥲

The setting of the protagonist is very novel. The game system allows two accounts to be played. One account has a very high force value but a fragile body. The other account has improved physical fitness but a much lower force value. Think about how exciting the protagonist will be in the future if he develops in this way (ಡωಡ)hiahiahia

Let me show you my real thoughts, hoping to attract more people to see it. This year is the New Year, this is the Year of the Snake. First of all, I wish you all a Happy New Year! Although I didn't know the author for a long time, this article left a deep impression on me. From beginning to end, I saw Zhang Congxuan. He is a thorough, sincere, and very beautiful person. Like a little angel, he redeemed everyone. As the plot continues to advance, the character of the male protagonist is gradually enriched. From the beginning, the male protagonist only faced the characters with a playful mentality. However, as the plot continues to advance, the male protagonist gradually realizes that even if it is a game, everyone in this game world has his or her own character. Where true feelings lie. The male protagonist really treats everyone with his heart. This fanfic really left a deep impression on me. Why? Because of his setting, the male protagonist is a very full-fledged person, a very different and outstanding person. Moreover, he has loved the male protagonist and has upright views, which is in line with my values. (And the most important thing is the setting of beauty, strength and misery, which also stabbed my heart hard, and rubbed me repeatedly. I really like this setting of beauty, strength and misery, but misery is an illusion.) In many fan articles I have read in the past, the male protagonist is often a very miserable person. Either he has been deceived by the world, or he has lived a long time, lost his memory, and forgotten that he is actually a member of the world of tomb robbers. But this article is different. He gives the author a very warm background. The warm heart is due to the male protagonist being able to redeem everyone with his very kind side. And he did not suffer any substantial or fundamental harm. Of the many fanfics I have read before, I couldn't bear to read half of them when the author revealed that the male protagonist was actually part of the fabrication of the will of the world, because I couldn't admit that for such a beautiful male protagonist, everything he faced was an illusion. When I was halfway through watching it, I realized that the author had promised everyone that the game would be a game world. I was really shocked and very moved. I decided to pursue him from that moment on, because I really liked the male protagonist. His feelings were so fiery and warm, and he would neither burn others by getting too close nor burn himself out by warming others. Perhaps the most grateful person is the author, because the author works so hard to update. Regardless of wind and rain, holidays, whether he is sick or not, he insists on not asking for leave and working hard to update the article. Because the author has such a flexible and vivid writing style. Only then can we create such a vivid and lifelike person as the male protagonist. I believe that the author must be a very warm, kind and upright person in real life. Because there is a saying that goes well, the protagonist is the epitome of the author in real life. Or it's the image of the author's beautiful longing. It is precisely because the author has a very warm place in his heart and a very soft heart that he can create such a beautiful person as the male protagonist. In the new year, I hope the author can continue to update it. I will always support you silently in my heart. It's really hard to find an article you like that matches your hobby.

Let's talk about the advantages first: the writing is good, the characterization is even better, the protagonist's character is also interesting, the multi-line narrative does not seem confusing, the plot is good, and people are attracted to it at once. I stayed up late to watch it. Another point is that the children written in it are very natural and cute, unlike some articles that describe children as stuttering, greasy and cute machines with clear logic, full of artificiality. Then there are the non-advantages (not considered disadvantages): Whether it is the protagonist or the supporting role, there are too many psychological descriptions and demeanor descriptions. Many scenes are a large amount of psychological/demeanor descriptions mixed with a small amount of dialogue. The protagonist makes an action, A begins a long period of psychological activity, and then A responds, and the protagonist continues a long period of psychological activity... It is obviously not a slow pace, but the progress of the conversation turns makes me very anxious [face covering] Of course, psychological description is a necessary means to supplement brain flow, and the description of facial expressions coupled with the author's writing style will also make the article more delicate. However, if the amount is too large, it will cause repeated stacking of information. It can be streamlined appropriately. Overall, I can score 9.5 Points. I will take this book with me everywhere [I learned it]

It's so good to watch. I love the reunion the most, even though I've already confirmed that we're not the same person in terms of age, but my heart can't help but pull closer🥰. I can't wait for all the students to meet the teacher. The half-hour moment when the protagonists cut numbers, it turns out to be a reunion after decades of separation.

It's very interesting, the writing is good, I'm not a novice, and there are no big problems with the logic so far. After searching for gold in tomatoes for so long, I finally found a good book [crying]. The content is almost all original. Although the general direction is that of Tomb Raiders Notes, it does not follow the original work. The butterfly in Qixinglu Palace is missing, and the Xisha Undersea Tomb is completely different. Even the things related to the original work have been briefly mentioned, and pheromones have appeared here. The Wang family was discovered early because of Cong Xuan, and the Zhang family is still there. They have not fallen apart, but have gone into hiding (once the identity of Teacher Cong Xuan is confirmed, they will probably be dispatched [sneaky laugh]). It really wrote a lot of details about the Zhang family (which makes me, who likes the Zhang family, really love it [admiration]). After reading this book, I felt like I was reading a novel on the level of Tomb Raiders. The characters are well portrayed and the emotional descriptions are very delicate. The changes in emotions are not sudden, but have reasons, and the actions of the characters also have internal logic. This book generally revolves around the students coming back to Congxuan one by one (large size), and occasionally interspersed with stories of getting to know the students one by one (small size). It feels like the main line is emotions, and the anecdotal detective agency is just a cover. I feel that the story in the small size is more attractive to me at present. I really like the story of recruiting students and teaching students one by one. The Zhang family children and younger brothers are very cute in their childhood [heartfelt]. Cong Xuan's trumpet has the highest strength value of 99, but his will value is low and his physique is also poor. Isn't this just the combination of sick and weak Bai Yueguang + beautiful and powerful, completely stepping on my xp and dancing disco on it. The large force value is about fifty, the will value is high, and the physique has also improved. The difference between the two phases and the brainstorming that the students will have later, it is really delicious [shy] (recently, I don't know where the Haike's ideas in the new chapter have gone, haha). In short, this kind of game + teaching students + dual-player + Bai Yueguang + beautiful and powerful misfortune, I have never seen it before. The focus is on teaching students. I really like this kind of life mentor setting [admiration], and it is so beautifully written and written so well! ! ! I love the author Ah Bai to death, please keep updating, this book will definitely become popular [blowing kiss]!

It's hard to get away with it. The protagonist, as a gamer who doesn't know the book Tomb Raiders, solved many things with very logical actions and avoided bad endings. The setting is very interesting. The writing is smooth but it seems like the author needs to write more!

The male protagonist opens a vest, with a large version and a small version. During the period when the large version opened the store innocently, the trumpet version was the teacher who raised Zhang Qiling. He is a member of the Zhang family and has a gentle personality but good martial arts. The male protagonist is as deeply rooted in people's hearts as an ink painting, with beautiful memories of Bai Yueguang.

I stayed up for a few nights to read it. The content is quite good. There are some nanny stories, but there is nothing particularly frustrating about the whole story. In my personal opinion, Chen Pi is a bit off-putting, which makes me a little uncomfortable. It's a pity that he is still there at the end. I feel like there is nothing particularly tolerable about him. , First of all, it was because he was unwilling to go back with the teacher. Secondly, even if the teacher failed to keep the appointment, he did not owe anything. Later, he insisted on going his own way and wanted to go out. There were many misunderstandings. It really felt like he had saved a white-eyed wolf. The rest was very OK, and every line was pretty good.

Huge! Good! Look! I haven't read Tomato for a long time and I unexpectedly came across this beautiful book. I'm so lucky. 🍀🍀🍀 In short, I like the male protagonist's character very much, and the plot setting is also very interesting! Comrade Zhang San's damn charm! October 28, 2024 Ahhhhh it's so sweet. November 7, 2024 Absolutely. November 18, 2024 It's as good-looking as ever, and it lit up a bright light on my way to review for Level 6. (Little six-year-old, please be angry!) December 5, 2024 There are three classes today, no hehe. Also, it's really beautiful. December 20, 2024 Several days have passed since the completion of the Level 6 exam. And now I'm starting to prepare for the final exam. [Stare] May 6, 2025 After saving for a long time, I suddenly remembered to watch it, and I saw that the critical moment was gone www August 31, 2025 Finished spreading flowers! I didn't expect to get to the ending in just one chapter. I love this book so much!