One Piece: It's Time for a Raid. Whoever Wants to Be Pirate King Can Have It

Why do I feel like I'm licking my white beard? It is possible to clear the level by clearing the dungeon, but you don't have to be able to clear every level, right? If you fail once, can you pass it a second time? Do you play those difficult games and beat them all in one go? It's obviously impossible. Later, we will form a group and download a dungeon to reflect the role of the protagonist, otherwise it will only be useless in the main world. Pure tool man

It's really frustrating to write about. It's okay to be bullied by a little pirate earlier. The empress came to cause trouble, but she let it go just because Rayleigh came forward. Moreover, the protagonist is so useless.

First of all, this type is still good, and I would like to say a few points. The author's book should be based on a different world dungeon in the early stage, followed by the real world guarding the other world war, but the dungeon type design is too high, because basically only those who have entered the Grand Line are qualified to fight in the first dungeon. The second and third must have captain-level combat prowess, the third and fourth must have Shichibukai-level combat prowess, and the fifth must have the strength of a general. Although there are indeed many strong people in the pirate world, these are the top ones. You have just a few dungeons and are about to end it. Do you need to add equipment to increase your strength and pass the level? In addition, there is a flow of funds. The navy can use the money from world conquest, and the world conquest can use the country's money, but the pirates can only use their stronger strength to burn, kill and loot. In addition, those women are really a failure. Just write the dungeon and Pirate World. They also come to play the harem. In the latest chapter, I will start writing the stories and things of those women. My reading experience is this: it was good and interesting in the early stage, but lacked freshness in the middle stage. The slave women who were bought really couldn't tell their identities, and I lost interest in reading in the later stage.

Well written, five stars~ First of all, I don't know if there is a female protagonist before I read it. It doesn't matter if there is a female protagonist, as long as she doesn't show off her affection too much. Otherwise, if the heroine writes about opening a store, the heroine will appear too prominent... Um... How to put it... I'm at a loss for words... But it's still five stars - - By the way, I want to complain in a low voice. I just saw the three characters "Jinbaolai". I consciously ignored the word "come"... When I saw Jinbao... I remembered the one in the second part of the underground traffic station - -I almost had a stress reaction and quit... Yes, I sometimes decide whether or not to read a book based on the name of the protagonist.

Hancock had 4-5 stars before. Where can Hancock get 1 star directly?

The story is okay, but the bad points are: the threshold for unlimited daily access to the dungeon is too low; and the fee is too cheap. Tickets should be exchanged for high-value treasures or devil fruits, and the number of resurrections is more than once a day; and the dungeon is too simple for the major forces, and they can be cleared casually. The worst plot is when the empress comes to cause trouble. After the protagonist wins, he puts forward conditions, and then Rayleigh comes forward to save his life, and the protagonist obediently obeys. It seems very frustrating. Either don't mention the conditions, but do it if you mention them. I believe many people will give up after seeing this place.

After reading ten chapters, I didn't want to read anymore. The plot setting was okay at first, but after reading a few chapters, I felt that there was something wrong with it. Firstly, the protagonist is not invincible, so what will happen when the world government comes to arrest the protagonist? I don't think that no one will come to arrest the protagonist until the protagonist develops to invincibility! The second point is that charging the protagonist feels weird. If you can use money to exchange things, or use money to improve the protagonist's strength, then you can continue reading. However, the protagonist's payment feels like it is not written well. Fifty thousand for one person is understandable, and fifty thousand for a dungeon. There is no specified number of people. It should be set up as one, two, five, ten, 50, and 100 people. The charging standards are different, and the rewards are at different levels. And then those who fail the first level will not be able to pass the second level.

The first pass reward is too perverted. How to chase the people behind?? The rewards for the first pass of the third dungeon all increase the damage to monsters by 100%. Real strength plus ten percent!! The first pass is full of white groups. If this continues, after the fifth copy, Whitebeard will be able to tear Yimu apart.

The writing is good but there are two problems. First, the money for each copy of the game is too little, only 50,000 🤔 🤔 Or in the future, the money can be doubled with each new copy. Second, it can give the male protagonist invincible power in the store

DNF, the plot is good. The writing is so uncomfortable to watch. It doesn't matter what your preference is. It doesn't matter if you have a harem. The dialogue is too white. I even accepted the swear words. The more I read, the more uncomfortable it becomes.