The Secret Shore on a Strange Path

There is a familiar flavor in the expression of the location, and it contains more classic Dihua elements, which are more or less common in works of the same type. It is remarkable for its description of suffering. (We live in a peaceful age. Although we can imagine suffering, it is difficult to express it without personal experience. This is why it is difficult for some people, including me, to describe suffering.) The update frequency is also guaranteed. Maybe I have inherited the "stingy" characteristics of some male protagonists in Western fantasy novels. Of course, this kind of characteristics is more friendly to me, and it may be a bonus for me. (The author should have read a certain author who is better than Wu Xiu Er) Generally speaking, at least the parts I saw are good, and it is worth recommending if you are not in a book shortage.

The advantage is that the story is very strong, and it can be seen that the author is carefully trying to tell a complete story. Slow-burn style. The male protagonist's character is quite good, and he doesn't need to upgrade himself. Even though he has 400,000 words, he hasn't gotten a single believer, and he hasn't gotten a single believer from someone else's family! The disadvantage is that the extraordinary system is not complete, and the classification of high-ranking and status people, and the classification of categories is not clear. It is best to focus on the story aspect and write it briefly. When you see the battles and extraordinary events, there is no sense of picture, and it is possible that this part has not been written yet. It has a feeling of deep sea and mystery. The male protagonist should not be a time traveler. As the controller of memory, he can choose the memories left to him at will. It is speculated that he has predicted the impending doomsday and wants to seek promotion methods from the old days or pillars. The article mentions the shortcomings and length of promotion from the past through mowing grass and plundering. Perhaps the protagonist wants to try whether he can break the conventional promotion by possessing all the humanity. Remember to come on, there are very few long comments, don't cut it, it's an encouragement!

First of all, it looks pretty good Secondly, this article should draw lessons from "Lord of Mysteries" and "Deep Sea Trek" on the platform, but overall, it is a good imitation.

It's a very good western fantasy novel with Dihua. The clone vest and Dihua + the powerful protagonist completely made me interested in reading. Unfortunately, the protagonist is more kind than I thought, which makes it uncomfortable to read... I wish this book will continue to prosper.

I have been listening to it for the past few days, and I originally wanted to finish listening to the update before commenting, but today I suddenly heard that the book Next Door is finished... I can't help but say that this book made me feel more like when I first listened to The Mystery. I would rather read this than watching The Mystery... It looks like I have to write a lot of words, please hold on, author~ (I have seen that the author has also read The Mystery, The Deep Sea, etc. Before, so I said this, I hope it will not make the author feel rude [laughing and crying] I am definitely complimenting

So far, there are no problems. It's just that I often forget what many of the characters do. The characters are not unique enough. The current plot is a bit too bland. I feel that it could be a big, multi-line narrative. If it can be written well, this is it👍. The description of the hotel is still a little lacking, and pollutants appear. There are too few, just a few. Maybe you don't need to describe each one too comprehensively, just write how it works. The characters that appear now feel a bit "frivolous", and there are no characters that are too serious until now. I feel that the appearance of this kind of character must be very unique [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

Let's give a book review and give it a score [I'm about to cry]

The subject matter is good, and I like the worldview very much. The characterization is quite profound, but there are some problems with rationality. It is still a good book without in-depth research.

It is one of the few good novels with good style.

It looks great, author!