Naruto: Why Did I Have to Die So Young?

So far, I'd give it five stars; the plot is good. It was pretty good at first, with a novel perspective that offered a different kind of Naruto fanfiction, but why did it suddenly fall apart at chapter 50? Jiraiya, who was easily defeated before, has had his power levels inflated to pad the word count.

It's pretty good, but the updates are so slow. Tsunade should be expelled from the clan, and the entire Chosen One clan should be gathered together. Kushina should also be expelled from the clan.

Congratulations, author! You've found a new path. You may not go far, or you may go very far. Keep up the good work and don't let (Asura) influence you. [Think about it carefully] Follow the will of the Party.

Chapter Forty-Four What does it mean that Ai became the Fourth Hokage? Isn't that the Raikage?

It's definitely a good book, but there are too many villains. And it can only be viewed through the lens of Naruto's logic; it wouldn't work with Boruto's perspective.

I should be the first comment. Hope the author will keep updating! Good content As long as I'm comfortable with it. This also has some drawbacks. But keep up the good work, author!

It's very imaginative, but the fanfiction aspect limits the book. A purely original work would likely have been much better. For example, you could write a Naruto novel that's not part of the original story, summarizing the Warring States period and reimagining the ninja villages.

I suddenly had a thought. Could it be that Tobirama Senju disbanded the Senju clan because his love for his brother was not acknowledged, and he made this decision in desperation? Another possibility is that Hashirama Senju's wife should have been Tobirama's, but he was taken away, so he wanted to take revenge on Konoha, which was created by his brother, and thus disbanded the Senju clan.

Well, this is a research-based novel; you couldn't write this kind of story without thinking! The author definitely did some research privately, and the overall style leans towards dark themes. The downside is that some of the original viewpoints won't be acceptable to everyone, and the overall tone is completely detached from Naruto! The average hot-blooded young person simply can't accept this kind of setting! Overall, it's good; it took effort to write.

How interesting! The original work does have many illogical points; the verbal sparring is unparalleled. The whole world revolves around the struggle between the two brothers, and the script has never changed!