Naruto: Why Did I Have to Die So Young?

So far, it has received five-star reviews and the plot is good. It was all pretty good in the first place, and it created a different Naruto fanfic from a novel angle, but why did you suddenly stretch your hips in Chapter 50? Jiraiya, who was easily manipulated before, has now lost all his combat power for the sake of the number of water words. Two wood escape ninjas (one of them is so-called, one or two Kage can be beaten) failed to win the sage mode Jiraiya. Besides, how could Jiraiya be so strong at this period?

It's pretty good, but the update is very slow. Tsunade should be expelled from the family, gather the Chosen Clan together, and expel Kushina from the family as well.

Congratulations to the author, you have embarked on a new path. You may not be able to go very far, or you may go very far. Keep working hard, don't be affected by (Asura) [you taste it carefully] and follow the will of the party.

Chapter 44 What does it mean for Ai to become the fourth generation "Hokage"? Isn't that the Raikage?

It is indeed a good book, but there are too many villains. And you can only use Hokage's logic to look at it, not Boruto's.

I should be the first to comment I hope the author will work hard to update it Good content As long as it looks comfortable to me There are also some disadvantages to this But the author should keep up the good work, come on!

Very thoughtful, but the fandom has limited this book. If it is purely original, it should have a good performance. For example, write half of the Naruto novels that are not Naruto, summarize the Warring States Period and then reshape the image of the Ninja Village. For example, it can be set like this. This book is the Tsukuyomi world that Tobirama entered after being resurrected. There is no war between Indra and Asura, only Tobirama is left, from Tobirama's perspective The fastest pacification of the world from the perspective of the ninja clan. Finally, Tobirama returned to reality and the protagonist of Tsukuyomi World broke through reality and came to the fourth battle to end the fourth battle. In the middle, Tsukuyomi World can use some of the author's ideas to make it more reasonable or directly abandon Naruto's world view and write a new novel. All in all, it is good-looking but not in line with the original work [face covering]

Suddenly I had an idea. Senju Tobirama disbanded the Senju clan. Could it be that he made the decision because his love for his brother was not recognized? Another possibility is that Senju Hashirama's wife was supposed to be Senju Tobirama's, but she was robbed of her love by Hengdao, so he wanted to take revenge on his brother for creating Konoha, thereby disbanding the Senju clan.

What do you say? This article is a scientific research article, and you cannot write this kind of novel without using your brain! The author must have done some private research, and the overall style is dark. The disadvantage is that some of the original ideas cannot be accepted by everyone, and the whole story is completely torn from Naruto! Ordinary passionate young people simply cannot accept this setting! Overall it's good, I put a lot of effort into writing it.

It's so interesting. There are indeed many unreasonable things in the original work, and it's so clever. The whole world is a fight between two brothers, and the script never changes!