Heaven Is Unfair, and the Unhinged Heroine Goes on a Killing Spree

After reading three or four stories, I can't wait to comment. It's so good. The score is absolutely, absolutely unreasonable. The heroine is strong and rational, with a super positive outlook on life. She strives not to let a bad guy go, blame a good guy, and retaliate in kind. Although the plot is too bloody because of the setting. , But the processing process is really enjoyable, because it is powerful enough, so I am not aggrieved, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good, don't care about the malicious negative comments, and miss this wonderful article, the author greatly cheers [Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore]

This is really a beautiful book, a treasure book! The three views are very upright. There is a world whose world view is somewhat similar to that of Bingshang's drama. I don't think it's a high score, so I don't know if it offends some people. The heroine Yun Gui slaps the face and abuses the scum very quickly and feels very good. The force value is max and she can be crushed directly. The plot is very smooth and the pace is fast. I personally think that the best thing to write about is how the original owner handles this matter. This type of book is generally divided into three types. One is that the female protagonist grows old in this world, one is that after the completion, she settles the people related to the original owner and directly leaves the world without aging (the first two are usually the original owner has no soul), and the other is that the heroine is returned to the original owner after completion (usually the original owner still has a soul). But it is very difficult to write this kind of story back to the original owner. If it is not written well, it is easy to have such a problem. The heroine is too powerful and does too much, far exceeding the original owner's ability. This will make people feel that the original owner is taking advantage and cannot inherit the company's technology and other things left by the big boss. It is easy to expose the secret or be deceived. After all, the person is still the same person with the same IQ and experience. It feels like a five-year-old child holding a gold brick. But this one! ! ! It really gave the original owner another possibility. Guiyun just put the original owner's tampered life back into order and helped the original owner get through this hurdle. He would not do unnecessary things to show his abilities. He only did things that the original owner could do. These original owners themselves were also very good and excellent people. In the last chapter of each world, I saw the "gift" left by Gui Yun for the original owner, and the original owner's gratitude to Gui Yun. I really felt an indescribable feeling in my heart, sour and swollen. Without the interference, tampering and entanglement of the so-called children of destiny, it was really great that they could shine and live their lives well. Gui Yun is the same, he is really a very strong and upright person, but he is also very careful and loving! After reading it, I felt very emotional. The author really wrote it so well! ! !

The only fast-travel novel that made me use my brain. Not only was it fun, but the plot development of each unit was also very good, especially the unit about real and fake daughters was very interesting. Good work in the article, recommended [like][like][like][like][like]

It's pretty cool, but I have a question, and that is why do you need a system to travel through the world? I saw this kind of cool article that requires a system to travel through the world, but you are obviously a boss but you can't travel through the world? Even if you can't travel by yourself, why not absorb the system and insist on bonding? Forget it, why should you be nice to it? This is the case with all the cool articles on this subject. I'm just asking, there is no other meaning. Big boost for the author! ! !

The author's writing is very good. I don't know why it is not popular. The writing style is also very good. She has her own unique ideas and concepts. The heroine in the author's novel is powerful, kind, and strong. She never gives up on herself and fights against fate. Even if she is stuck in a quagmire, she never forgets to save herself. After successfully saving yourself, you help others and help the collapsed world get back on track. You are a person with true love. It's so cool, I really recommend everyone to read it. This is my first time commenting on Tomato. I wish the author will be a big hit in the future, keep up the good work. [Love][Love][Love][Love]

It's good-looking, super invincible, good-looking, you can do it if you can, and you can't push it if you can, it's a cool story about a heroine who tortures a scumbag, and all the sins that caused the death of the original owner are deserved, and evil deeds are punished. One after another, they went to the 18 levels of hell.

It looks pretty good so far, you can enter it It looks good, but it has so many flaws that I can't stand it anymore.

The protagonist is decisive in killing, has clear logic, can point out the essence of things to the point, but does not lose his humanity. He respects, sympathizes and shows mercy to the weak, and has no tolerance for the perpetrators. A very good book!

I gave this book five stars after reading The Fourth World because every world gives extreme punishment to evil, especially hypocrites. Really, hypocrites are more hated and disgusted than truly evil. Crisp and neat, worthy of five stars! Come on

After reading it, leave a comment In my personal opinion, this book has both good and bad points. Let me talk about the good points first, because I think this book itself is excellent and I don't want to dissuade others just because it is not perfect. First of all, in the current fast-traveling writing routine, this book is considered novel and thoughtful. The author's pioneering new ideas and using new ideas to create an excellent work are enough to reflect the author's excellent level. The heroine of this quick-travel novel is neither a god or a demon boss nor a taskmaster. She is originally a cannon fodder villain, and she has indeed gained very powerful power in her own way. Basically, each unit story has 10-30 chapters. The author is sadistic and also describes the main plot very well. Unlike many fast-traveling articles, the main plot has almost no goal or a very general goal. It is necessary and important to describe the plot in a million-long article like this. Next is a point that has both good and bad points. The author basically needs 1-2 chapters to describe the experiences of the victim characters in each story. Not all of them are the content that makes people angry, but the proportion of this kind of content is not small. On the other hand, the heroine's methods can be considered very violent and crazy, and the revenge that many characters have to accept is a double high-pressure blow, both physical and mental. Another problem arises here. The tragic experiences of some original characters will be replenished during the torture process, which makes it difficult for readers to calm down their anger due to revenge against the villain. The anger will be repeatedly aroused, which will make the readers look tired and accept excessive negative energy. Especially in the second half of the unit story, the pace is obviously accelerated. The chapters of each unit story are obviously reduced, but introducing the tragic experience of the original character still takes up 1-2 chapters. Each of the first 20 chapters is a unit story, and the next dozen chapters are a unit story. This aspect has not changed at all. I think this is a serious overall construction problem. My personal guess in this regard is that the author did it deliberately, in order to arouse the readers' emotions, and not to be criticized or attacked because of the violent and crazy revenge methods in the book. I think the evaluation of this work may be polarized because of this. This is also the biggest problem I personally think this work has. As a refreshing novel, it is both qualified and unqualified, because it is refreshing, but the time spent on it is a little short, and the proportion of anger is too high. Finally, there are some minor issues. In the later period, some supporting background characters who should have been retaliated in a unit story were not retaliated in the unit story, but at that time there were already rules for punishment. But I think the author forgot about the background villains in that unit of the story. Then there are the occasional character names that are wrong, with more characters than others and typos, but these are actually the smallest problems. To sum up, I personally think this book is very well written, but you need a big heart to read it. Many of the original plots in it are indeed quite irritating. However, the heroine is still invincible. She is really ruthless in her abuse of the scumbag. But in terms of ruthlessness, the heroine really surpasses 99% of the protagonists in the scumbag abuse novels that I have read. So in fact, this book will definitely perform better if it reduces some descriptions that arouse readers' anger. To put it bluntly, it makes you angry and happy at the same time. Before one plot is completely satisfied, the next part that makes you angry may come again. The overall story is a bit heavy, so readers who cannot tolerate too many negative emotions should proceed with caution. Anyone who can accept the problems I mentioned is absolutely right to join the trap. Come on, author, I hope you can create more perfect works.