Becoming Immortal Across Two Worlds, Starting with Alchemy

It's rare to find such a reasonable novel. When you encounter benefits, you don't just rush forward blindly. When you see a beautiful woman, you don't feel like you haven't seen a woman in eight hundred years. The fighting scenes are a little bit poorly written. The biggest shortcoming is that there are too few. Please add more. I need to read it up [Thinking][Thinking]

It's a very nice and huge modern cultivation system, each discipline is very complete, and the descriptions are quite detailed. A growth-oriented protagonist who forgets this and that in the past, but later learns to be an adult. The various human relationships and intrigues are quite interesting to watch. The special award in Modern Battlefield is the best. It's almost enough to read Chapter 666 in one go. After the protagonist reveals that his top-notch combat power is almost invincible and everyone wants to support him, it becomes meaningless. Moreover, the other world has also fallen into a cycle of grabbing, grabbing, killing, killing, and the ending can basically be seen at a glance.

Come on! Not enough👀, the writing is so beautiful I don't want school beauties. What kind of obsession does a male channel have with school beauties? It's better not to have a female protagonist in this school beauties. After all, it will be over once the two world pearls are discovered. Don't test people's hearts.

I read the current chapter after reading it for two days. I can give it a six-star out of five for the subject matter. Tomato is a novel urban modern fairy tale. The description of the two worlds is also very good. Will the two worlds be integrated in future plots? Quite looking forward to it. The author's writing style is okay, four out of five stars. Personally, I think the protagonist still needs to be careful about the relationship between friends. Some group portraits can enrich the book. Finally, let's talk about the poisonous points. First, the large amount of reselling resources in the two worlds of the protagonist will cause poisonous points. For example, in the early stage, he earned 10,000 spirit stones by selling talismans. Could it only cause small characters in the Qi refining period to chase them? Second, the function of clone is too high, it can do many things in place of the main body, and it will become a poisonous point later if you are not careful. I'm still looking forward to the author's subsequent updates. Overall, I feel pretty good about it and it's worth reading.

It's pretty good-looking. I don't think it's a hard lick. Why are there so many people spraying it? I feel like it's a small boutique in Tomato. I don't know why so many people spray it. The rating is also slightly lower. Come on, author.

The best thing about this article is that it accurately wraps up the collective memory of the college entrance examination and university in a fairy-tale shell, making it easy for readers who have just experienced the college entrance examination or have just entered university to relate to it. The author has a good grasp of the plot and mood of the two stages. He is most likely a sophomore or above majoring in computer science. This familiarity with campus life allows the setting of "testing alchemy, weapon refining, and formations" to seamlessly correspond to real-life physics, chemistry, and mathematics. There is no sense of dissonance in reading, but it feels like "it turns out that professional courses can be so romanticized." The highlights of the article are very prominent: First, the idea is novel, breaking away from the traditional fairy tale of fighting monsters and upgrading, with the dual core of "examination room/academic studies, and survival in another world", which is not only in line with the life experience of student readers, but also full of freshness; second, it is full of imagination, and the setting of "traveling between two worlds" expands more possibilities for the story, making the cultivation of the fairy world and the growth of the real campus form a clever echo, which is full of attractions. If we talk about minor shortcomings, it is that some of the plots are a bit long-winded, which slightly dilutes the main rhythm, but the flaws are not outweighed. Overall, this is an excellent work with both resonance and imagination. It is especially recommended to readers who have deep memories of college entrance examination and university life. It is easy to read their own struggles and confusions in the fantasy of Xianxia.

Let me first state that this is a review written after reading more than 1.4 Million words. The writing is really good. One is a normal world of cultivating immortals, and the other is a city where spiritual energy is revived. Throughout the whole process, both the protagonist and the supporting characters are intelligent, and the details are in place without any delay. It's a relatively cool story, and the male protagonist has never experienced any major setbacks so far. I hope I can keep writing well. I have basically stopped playing games and read novels for eight years. This novel surpasses 99.5% Of online novels. It is very good.

The plot is smooth, well-conceived and witty. The protagonist's IQ is online and the whole process is a battle of wits. There are many foreshadowings and pitfalls, so it is worth reading.

The writing is good. Keep it up and try to write five million words. It won't be a big problem, right?

This book feels good. Unlike the previous books, you can see the protagonist. It feels more like the growth of the author. Like many previous books, you can understand a lot of things when you are only 18 years old. Things like human relations and sophistication are outrageous. The protagonist comes from a not very wealthy family. Many things should be like this. I don't understand. I have to go through a lot of things to understand step by step. Moreover, the protagonist's cheats are not that outrageous. The protagonist has a lot of resources, but he also works hard. But sometimes the author may not be rigorous in connecting the front and rear, but I still support the author and hope that the author can write better and better and become more mature.