The Sickly Beauty’s Gentle Wife Is a Cool and Aloof General

I really like this book. I felt very comfortable reading it. Jun Ming gave me the feeling that he is an earth sign. He will find ways to solve problems when encountering them. He is flirtatious, gentle to his lover, and considers his lover's feelings very much. He is a typical guiding lover. I really love this book and it gives us Atal a sense of security. Atal makes me feel that he is innocent, sensitive, very insecure, very cautious, wants but dare not ask for too much, which sometimes makes people feel cute. It's sweet but a little bit sharp, but it's not a problem because the two protagonists are very sweet. Ahhhh, this book really touched me! ! ! ! The writing style is also very good😍😍😍😍😍😍 I love this book so much. ꒦ິ^꒦ິ

Why is the rating of this book so low? ! ! ! ! ! ! The writing is really great! ! ! ! It's the best Zerg novel I've read. Many of the Zerg novels written by Red Persimmon are really stiff and have a strange flavor. They are too sweet and sweet, so that the plot and many parts are unreasonable. But this one, I came in for the ending point, and I finished it in one day. Well, I actually saw it. Zero into two points and twenty-four, and then leave my comment, the protagonist did not misunderstand Shuangqiangtian, other CPs are very to my liking, an unexpected pair, the rebel leader and his little male insect, I originally thought that their relationship would be difficult, painful and full of misunderstandings, but it was not at all, in what I thought When I wanted to be abused, I was stuffed with candy. In the end, the author's thoughts made me understand that books also have lives, and love between men and women also exists. After all kinds of pain and suffering, they never let go of each other. There are not many descriptions, but I still shed tears when I read it. The story of the male protagonist's younger brother and the female insect's former comrade-in-arms. It also made my eyes wet when I read it, the two-way redemption, the interaction between the protagonists is full of love, there are not so many twists and turns in the process, the world view is complete, there are not so many brain-burning plots, and many pitfalls have been filled in. It is a book that I love, and the layout is also great. Thank you to the author [blowing kiss]

Delicate, different from many plots of the same type, it is a process of slowly opening your heart step by step. I hope it will be like this later and never collapse. (I am scared of collapse) The author has updated it a lot.

It's clear that most parts of the emotional line are connected, but the progress is very slow. I've already seen more than half of it, and the protagonist is really about it. And it's because of the stimulation of the differentiation period. Otherwise, I wouldn't know it would be the Year of the Monkey and the Horse. I prefer to watch Beloved, or the two-way arrow comparison. Thick, in my opinion, this book has a thicker arrow of attack vs. Receiving, but it is much better than those novels about pure pampering, because I feel that the wife is very attractive (look at some novels, blindly doting on females, and the charm of females is lost)

It's so good to read. The author's description of emotions is very delicate. You can feel Jun Ming's care, love and redemption for Atal. He gently separates Atal from the darkness, and gradually allows Atal to accept Jun Ming's love and learn how to love others. It's just too little and not enough to read. I'm waiting for the author's follow-up updates! ! ! ! !

I want to say that I focused on the main CP at first, and then I really started to enjoy the secondary CPs. The secondary CPs in my family are very delicious, and a sweet interaction made me twist like a maggot on the bed👉🏻👈🏻It can be said that the secondary CPs made me cry and laugh at the same time. I don't watch that kind of sadistic stuff (so I skipped the part that the author marked "be" in a big way, forgive me!!!), But I finished reading the story of the deputy CPs without any regrets. It was really sweet and sour, and I felt sorry for every insect, but in the end, I lived a good life! This is the life they should live! You have to give me sweetness! Later, in the big photo of our main CP and the female and male fathers, I mentally included Dundun in it! After all, Dundun is also a very important member hehehe! (Dundun is so cute, I want to take it away) ps: What if you find out? The content of this comment is so similar to a paragraph in the book circle. Don't doubt my family, I copied it from Gagaga and I wrote it all myself! Why copy it? ! Finished spreading flowers! My family is destined to see you in the next book

I really like this book, it's not that deep in my opinion, but it's memorable enough. It is also very different from the novels I have read before. According to the routine, it seems that Jun Ming should rely on his own uniqueness to become a leader who leads everything to change this deformed world. However, this novel has the power of the so-called supporting characters. Everyone cannot be defined. You cannot say that everything in this world is as bad as you imagine. There are always some people who have not been polluted and retain that purity.

This book is pretty good. In fact, I really read it as a sweet article at first, but as I went on, I found that it has its own special place. It is not a simple world background that is imposed on it. It has origins and logic. The most important thing is that I saw something that shocked me, that is, the author was promoting and protecting the environment. At this moment, this book in my mind is not just a mindless sweet article, it has a more profound purpose. However, this article also has shortcomings. It does not describe the action too much and lacks a sense of picture. There are not many words that make people feel beautiful. The psychological analysis of the protagonist is there but not very complete. I feel that Jun Ming's character is not fully displayed. Moreover, the character of the general, the protagonist Shou, became too fond of talking, and in the early stage, it seemed that it was easy I just accepted his hero, with not much entangled psychology, a little less ups and downs, and not more prominent. The protagonist hated those males at first, and hated marriage. Among them, the setting of the cold protagonist Shou is not very obvious, so in general, the author's portrayal of the protagonist is not comprehensive enough, but overall, for a sweet story, it is already settled, and it is recommended to watch it! ! ! [Eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon]

I've finished reading it. It's well written, the plot has ups and downs, and it has a suitable rhythm. Overall, it's very good. There are no setting problems or basic errors. It's pretty good. But speaking of it, I think the main character is a sick beauty, so I could have made her body a little sicker. The entire story should have been untouched except for the beginning (I know she got better later, but the main character is coughing, and Atal's heartache wouldn't be nice). In addition to this, there is the issue of traveling through time and space. 1. The male and female fathers accepted this directly from the beginning. 2. More space could be added to write about the scene at that time. 3. There is a slight sense of separation (it cannot be said to be split, or I think it is not particularly necessary). Overall, the writing is good. Please keep up the good work, the author [currently working on the manuscript]

This book is really worth it. For the time I spent, there will be some critical comments in the early stage that will affect your viewing. It's OK if you don't read it. The plot is really great. Every couple of CPs are super brilliant. The relationship between the main CP is also step-by-step. It's really good. Jun Ming is really well shaped by the author. He is a very good person. He takes relationships very seriously. He doesn't want to start with Atal in a hurry, so he has been waiting for Atal. Atal himself is also a very good person. He will not resolutely join the rebel army just because this society is too harsh on females. He will resolutely join the rebel army when he overthrows the king's rule. There are also efforts made by other vice-CP males to improve their mental strength. The personal charm they exude really makes me unable to take my eyes away [almost crying]