The Sinister Neighbor's Ghostly Shadow

Very interesting, very down-to-earth, no stupid people, no emotional lines, a life experience of two funny women I originally wanted to write a short story, but as I was writing it, I couldn't stop it and it turned into a long story. The stories are interlocking, the plot is compact, and the character lines are not messy. I hope everyone can give me more opinions. This is my first time writing a book, and I will definitely finish it without interruption.