From Brothers to Lovers: After He Transformed, He Spoiled Me Rotten

The writing is very good, but it was originally about two male protagonists, but unfortunately one of the male protagonists disappeared in the second chapter [laughing][laughing][laughing]

The rhythm is quite good, and the descriptions are sweet, but a little too little. Also, I always feel that I can't write much if I write like this. I hope the author can work hard to update ~ 5 stars o>_<o

To be honest, let me talk about some shortcomings first. When it comes to changing marriage stories, it is better to pay more attention to emotions. There are too many things in this company, so it can be reduced appropriately. After all, the biggest protagonist should be the heroine. Sometimes I feel a little bored while watching it, and I just want to watch this boring clip quickly, but sometimes these boring clips add some light embellishments to the disgusting candy, but sometimes these "embellishments" are a bit too much. However, this is not a big deal. As for the plot development being too slow, it doesn't matter. It's the same in novels, animations and TV series. I was very moved when I saw the success of my cultivation. I like the fact that the author writes it out of hobbies, because if I am just a hobby, I won't mind if I keep books haha, and the content is of higher quality, and it doesn't matter if updates are slow, since I keep books anyway. Finally, I am not very talented, so I only offer 3 milk teas to the author. I hope you won't dislike it~

It's a very interesting story about changing marriage, you can follow it with confidence. (Ke expert certification)

Although this is the author's first time writing, and it's a little strange to change gender after sleeping, the content is very rich. Among the novels I have read, this quality should be considered the best. It is sweet but not greasy. The plot is up and down, and the interaction between the male and female protagonists is just right. Finally, I wish the author a happy day every day. ૮ ´͈ ᗜ `͈ ა♡Author, come on!

I'm interested in writing a story with twists and turns. Although the plot is a bit cliche, I still think it's interesting. It's really well written and leaves a lot to be desired. In fact... Author, your work is my online writing. I hope your work can improve step by step [shy]

In fact, I have always been curious about the gender of the audience for marriage-changing articles... Will boys feel a sense of substitution when reading this kind of article [face covering]

I don't know why I suddenly wanted to cry when I read the chapter about the car accident, and I remembered something. I have read a book about changing marriages in a similar style to this book before, but it was blocked. It's very beautiful, but why aren't there many people watching it?

It looks good, but I personally feel that the content of the work is divorced from the main line. It would be better if more details of the male and female protagonists are portrayed.

There is also a bit of humor in the sweet article about getting married. I always like to see this kind of [flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss]