After My Best Friend and I Transmigrated into a Cultivation World

When I wrote this story, I had one idea in mind and no routine. Therefore, I have discarded many traditional contents in articles on cultivating immortals, hoping to give everyone a novel experience and create a real world of cultivating immortals. Of course, when I first wanted to write about this subject, it was because best friends in many novels on the market have become synonymous with vicious backstabbing, but the female friends around me are very friendly, and I wanted to break this stereotype. Therefore, I wanted to capture their shining points. There is also friendship and passion between girls. Finally, I hope all readers can give me a good review, thank you very much🙏 The cultivation systems of Xi Hanyu and Su Moli are different from those of the branches at the beginning. It is impossible to talk about each chapter. I wrote them directly in separate lines. I don't think there is anything more detailed than this about Su Moli's cultivation path. Various breakthroughs. If you are confused, you can search the full text for Su Moli's name and you will know that I have written quite a lot. Thank you. Originally, the plot of this book would be very long, and I had a lot of time to portray the two girls. This is my last response to this matter, and I will not respond or read any more comments until it is finished. After it is completed, I will give a small gift to the friends who have completed it, and you can check the details in the circle.

I read books very quickly, but I probably finished this novel. Let me talk about the highlights first. First, the plot arrangement is very normal. Many times, I never imagined that the story would develop like this. It's actually quite good, because it gives me a fresh feeling when I read it. Moreover, the previous and subsequent plots can be brought back together. I admire the author's ingenuity in this regard. The second is the change of perspective. Dividing it into two sub-lines can add a lot of plot. We can also see the obvious difference in the attitudes of the two best friends towards things. Because of the development of the plot, we can also see the same thing described differently from two perspectives. This is rare. Few authors consider that different people will have different feelings about the same thing. Generally speaking, it is not an upgrade stream in the traditional sense, nor does it have excessive cheats. Overall, it looks more daily, as the author has also said. Not many shortcomings have been discovered yet. There may be some languages ​​​​that the author needs to improve a little. Maybe the flaws are not concealed.

It's very beautiful, has many hooks, and makes me cry again when I look back on it. Fortunately, the book leader has had some food recently. Xi Kunyu is really a good person, and the two best friends have been together from the beginning, and neither one has given up on the other.

As a long novel about two-parter's besties, this novel really gave me a big surprise. The most poignant core highlight of this book is the 100% pure friendship between besties, which completely breaks the common stereotype of female antagonism in ancient Chinese novels and fairy tales. The heroine Xi Hanyu and her best friend Su Moli travel from modern times to the dangerous and unknown world of immortality. There is no golden finger from the sky at the beginning, and there is no halo against the heavens. They are just two ordinary modern girls, and they enter the world of immortality where the jungle is strong and the human heart is treacherous. Throughout the story, they relied on each other and never strayed from each other. Unlike many bloody plots in which the characters of the two heroines are separated and alienated due to misunderstandings in the later stage of the story, Xiao Yuzi and Momo always go in both directions and support each other. The two people have complementary personalities. One is calm, delicate, thoughtful, and can calmly plan when encountering problems; the other is lively, enthusiastic, magnanimous and brave, daring to venture and fight. They supervise each other and make progress together on the road of cultivation, comfort each other when they are at low points, and stand up when they are in danger. There are no suspicions and calculations, no backstabbing, and no unnecessary female competition for the male protagonist, opportunity, and power. This pure and firm two-way relationship between best friends has become the warmest and most touching background of the entire novel. Let me ask, who doesn't want to have such a good best friend by their side? In terms of plot setting, it also takes into account the relaxed, sweet and progressive plot tension. There is no mindless plot about breast hyperplasia that just makes people feel sick and then solves the problem. The two of them went from being ignorant, weak, and struggling every step of the way when they first entered the world of immortality to finding their own path. Everyone has witnessed their counterattack and transformation along the way. At the same time, there are many emotional lines in the book, and the CPs of different characters have their own characteristics. The settings such as Bai Yueguang, the gentle redemption of the year, and the two-way affectionate rush are super enjoyable. The emotional line complements the main plot, without taking over the main role or being boring. The character creation is a major bonus of this book. All the characters are three-dimensional and vivid, and the characters are not broken. The characters of Xiao Yuzi and Su Moli are very full-bodied, with both advantages and disadvantages, and are real and down-to-earth. They have gradually matured from ignorant modern girls into independent, strong, and well-intentioned immortal cultivators, and their character arcs are very full. The supporting characters in the book are by no means tools to set off the protagonist. Whether they are supporting characters with positive or negative positions, or characters from various immortal sects, they all have complete characters and exclusive story lines, with clear stances and reasonable actions. What is finally presented to us is a vivid and three-dimensional world of cultivating immortals. Personally speaking, I don't like to criticize it. Overall, this novel is really wonderful.

The plot is very interesting, and the friendship between girls is so beautiful, but when I watched Xi Kunyu, it brought me a faint sadness, or a "bright sadness" feeling. The world kissed her painfully. She is used to it, but she will To put the pain back, I really like the character Xi Kunyu, and even fall in love with her, but I think she's quite uncomfortable, and I can't tell where it's uncomfortable. The things she's been through are so rough, but she's still like the sun, warm and warm. I read that there is a "villain" in the introduction. Will she be the opposite of the "decent" later on? I hope the author will not abuse me too much. My little heart can't bear it [crying]. Please🙏🏻, I want to read something a little more exciting later (a little bit will do) ) And sweet🍬, I hope Xiao Yuzi won't get hurt again in the future🙏🏻, and finally, the author, please don't stop updating [I'm about to cry] I'm very, very looking forward to the subsequent plot [licking the screen], and I give you five-star praise [laughing]. (The content of this comment only represents my personal opinion, please do not criticize, thank you [love] [love] [love]) In fact, I rarely write reviews, especially long reviews. The author writes the plot very well and portrays the characters very well (Xiao Yuzi made me cry in the early stage [maybe it's because I have a low tear point🤐])

Author, I will always support you, it's so beautiful! The two lines unfold in the early stage and then converge in the later stage. The training systems of the two girls are also completely different. It is introduced in more detail in this way, and there is no problem at all if you look at it alone. The overall world view is grand and more complete than other similar books, and the portrayal of the two girls is complete. Xi Hanyu and Su Moli are the best babies in the world. They are kind and cute. They don't have strong golden fingers, but only two shining souls. I especially like their vitality as tough as weeds.

Some parts are really well written and very real. It feels like ordinary people like us have traveled through time. It is not exaggerated when reading, and the psychological dialogue is also very suitable for the identity of the characters. Like 😍

Let me also write a book review. It may be very long, so I hope the author won't find it objectionable 😉 Let me start by saying that I like to skip reading articles, so my current understanding of the characters and plot may not be that deep. However, I do not want to discuss this article only from the perspective of characters and plot, but it may be involved in the discussion later. I hope you can forgive me for any mistakes [send my heart] What I mainly want to praise is roughly divided into three points: The first point is the writing style. I have to praise the author for this. The writing style is really very lively. How can I say it is not gorgeous, but it can be regarded as simple and genuine. It does not mean that the writing style is very plain. It means that it looks solid and not artificial, making people feel comfortable to read. Let me briefly talk about my feelings. First of all, the author writes in the article It incorporates a lot of interesting Internet memes, but it doesn't make people feel stiff or awkward. I personally think that the appropriate integration of Internet terms can help make the article more lively and approachable. However, if you use memes for the sake of jokes, it will make people feel very stiff and embarrassing. Obviously the author did not do this. The memes in the full text are very Natural; secondly, the author's writing does not have a strong sense of human-machine. The human-machine here does not mean writing with AI or assisting in creation. It means that many articles will look weird because of the author's insufficient writing power, with a sense of splicing or talking in sleep. However, this book can be seen that the author must have put a lot of effort into it. Husband, the content is coherent and there is no self-contradiction in the setting. The third is that the author actually does a good job in dividing the chapter into chapters. Each chapter is broken and broken, and the endings of some chapters are very graphic. In addition, the author will incorporate some thoughts into the article. This integration process is very natural and will not make people feel abrupt or excessive. The second point is about character creation. I have a problem. I don't like a single protagonist because the author's writing is too focused on one person. This character will inevitably have the shadow of the author and reflect the author's three views. When there is a generation gap between the character's identity in the book and the author's three views in reality, there will be a serious OOC and separation, but writing With multiple protagonists, there is also the risk that the bowl of water will be uneven or the character description will be insufficient and the image will be flat. I like to identify a character at a glance and then search for her chapters. I focused on Su Moli first. I have to say that Xiao Su is indeed a good and motivated baby. I feel that what the author said is very appropriate. Su is like a cup of tea. It is light in the early stage but has a sweetness in the later stage. , There seems to be a slight shift from flat characters to round characters, but the amazing thing is that when watching Su, I will also pay attention to Xi. Xi currently feels like chocolate, it is sweet at first, and then a little bitter. She is a weed-type heroine, tenacious, unyielding and progressive; she also writes some supporting characters (again: I think it's just my personal opinion!) The author's writing is very interesting. There are both flat characters (such as Yu Lisong) and round characters (such as Bai Manman). Both have their own characteristics and are not good or bad. The complex relationship between the supporting characters also fills in and supports this world view to a certain extent; The third point, which I appreciate very much, is that the author does not shy away from describing NPCs (NPC here refers to marginal characters who have a certain role in promoting a certain storyline rather than just describing passers-by). In order to ensure the narration of the protagonist and to consider the length of the article, many authors tend to reduce the portrayal of NPCs. This is not wrong, but to a certain extent, it will lead to the center of the story being too concentrated, and sometimes it will appear that the characters are too self-centered. Readers may feel confused when reading from a God's perspective. Feeling uncomfortable or discovering the flaws in the character's personality faster, but using ink to describe NPC is also a test of the author's writing skills, because it is not easy to sort out more character relationships, fill in more settings, and write in a non-chaotic manner. I personally feel that this book is NP C is handled well. Lin Xun, Xiaoyan Cancan, etc. Are very memorable and vivid, which makes people think of their subsequent stories. In short, one thing that can be felt in this book is that the protagonist in the book is certain, but the protagonist outside the book is not. I'll write it here first. Some parts are not strictly expressed. Just have fun watching it. Red bean paste is a private Marseille! 😢😢😢I may write character analysis later, but I won't say it until I have a closer look at the whole book [Sending my heart] All in all, thank you for your hard work, the author [Blowing a kiss][Flowing a kiss][Flowing a kiss] Thank you for writing such a good work! 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Ahhhh! Dear author, you are so good at writing, [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] I must highly recommend it.

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