The Immortal Venerable Keeps Trying to Overstep His Bounds
仙尊他总想以下犯上
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 100k Words
- Genre
- Two Male Leads
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- Fanqie
Synopsis
10Chapters
2Reads
883Reads · all time
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Not bad, but there is a slight lack of foreshadowing in some places, which makes a small part a bit inexplicable. You can add some character descriptions to the book, but the writing style is a good advantage. If you want to write about knives, you need more foreshadowing [Send my heart][Send my heart][Send my heart]