I Hit the Demon King with a Heavenly Tribulation and Left Him Stunned

To be honest, I quite like this kind of thing, that is, the protagonist is not constantly fighting and killing. It has a feeling of being aloof, yet very approachable [Chigua] Apart from some problems with the writing style, I quite like the rest [Chigua]

You are a bit too innocent, too much like a college student who has just entered society. Unfortunately, with the current level of hostility on the Internet, you are still too innocent.

Great critics comment! There are flaws, but it's okay. The protagonist's character is too good (after all, he is a true fairy, not a poisonous one), but in order to improve the tomato environment, I can only give you four points (it is better not to read a novel without the dark wind, Liu Bei's hypocrite, and the Journey to the West conspiracy theory are all spread by you) I've finished reading it. It's not a real immortal, it's an immortal. I didn't read it carefully. Keep going.

It's done well. Only the strong will have a Madonna who is almost arrogant. To put it bluntly, she is decisive in killing. She must have said to her friends, "Is this your problem?" And then trade friends for benefits to enemies.

Update it quickly, send out all the inventory quickly, or I will die for you [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry]

I saw the latest chapter and my review is Cool! Cool! Cool!

@ Unhappy Most Tired Come on and update~ Although there are not many people who are optimistic about you in the comments, I can only say that everyone has their own preferences. I can read it in one breath in the middle of the night, which proves that I like your book. It's just that the frequency of reading your book is a bit low. It's a pity. Come on~ Mention the amount and speed of updates.

I really like this kind of thing. It's better than the mindless articles that primary school students like to read.

The writing is lively and interesting

Intelligent and refreshing article