I Refuse to Be a Femboy!!!!!!!

Why am I posting now? That's because I forgot before. Most of the content in this book is the author's own story, and the author is the same as the protagonist in the work, both! Yes! Small! Nanliang! ! Yeah! Cute shark~

But even though I didn't read much of the short story, I still felt that the storyline was a bit rushed. Like the previous book by Ye Li, the beginning will show everyone Aikang's "Southern Liang and Northern Dynasties" plot to attract readers. This is very good and can lock readers' interest in reading. However, in the following story, I did not first tell the background of the world, the protagonist's life experience, and how the bond between Lin Ran and the protagonist was formed, and then quickly wrote the next incident: Lin Ran forced him to dress up as a woman to sing, and Nanliang's identity was exposed... The content is indeed quite attractive, but readers have no idea about this world. There is also less affection between other characters in the world (it is best to make up for it later. For example, when the protagonist goes home to be with his family, write about the protagonist's life experience in this world; when he is alone with Lin Ran or when Lin Ran has a very outstanding performance, you can write about how the relationship between Lin Ran and the protagonist is formed) And you can't always use reverse order. At the beginning of Chapter 6, I even thought that I missed something. When I added the explanation later, it was not too detailed, so it felt very rushed. The continuity of events was strange, and it returned to the storyline problem that the author is often criticized for. Reading the book written by the author Ye Li, you can see that he is very good at describing the actions and images of characters. He can portray the characters vividly in just one scene. But the author is lacking in plot planning and story coherence (there is also a very slow update [face covering]), but it may be that the author does not have spare time to write an outline of the story, and it is really hurtful to have no time. I hope the author writes better and better [love] [love] [love]

Real and objective, multi-dimensional description, clear structure and substantial content

Nanliang, hey (ºº) my Nanliang

Big cheers for the author! ! !

Good-looking, good-looking

The characters are very vivid, especially the psychological changes, which allow us to see a living Nanliang