Myriad Worlds: The Era of the New Ultraman’s Super Evolution Begins

The opening concept was good, and the writing was quite good, but the later transition to other worlds was a bit confusing. Why go to these different worlds, and then have your own power forcibly drained? Absolutely ridiculous. Four stars for the opening.

I know why there's no female lead anymore; she died 60,000 years ago. They used some of her energy fragments to create a daughter. Sigh! The Ye family can't kill her, so what can they do? They can only lock her up. Put her in hibernation. Or use lots of music and love to turn her into a benevolent version.

Since they've already used someone else's light to create a daughter, why not just have a female lead from the start? She's powerful enough to go back in time and resurrect her anyway.

The Ultraman world was alright, but the witch story felt rather pointless. And the world travel itself felt meaningless; it was just going through the motions. Forget about getting stronger; you were supposed to be practicing some kind of mental discipline before, were you? The important thing is to have a goal, to travel with a purpose, not just like clockwork.

The introduction should be concise and clear, introducing the novel's basic information, including the author, title, and brief background information. The purpose of the introduction is to attract the reader's attention and stimulate their interest in reading.

It's not bad, mainly because the concept and creativity are quite good. The idea of traveling back to the Land of Light before the people became Ultraman is a nice touch. However, the details and writing style definitely need improvement. Aside from the creative idea of dressing up as people from the Land of Light before transforming into Ultraman, everything else was very ordinary, really quite ordinary, a waste of the creative idea.

They've lived this long, and even have a daughter, but if there's a female lead, the whole thing feels different!

Regardless of what others think, I personally feel this book is excellent. Keep up the good work! I wish you even better writing for your next book, and I hope you don't stop updating or abandon this one. Finally, I'll say, keep going! ✊

The subject matter is good; I hope it can be explored in more depth, and not just written in a rambling style.

Great, it's Shaflin, the Cosmic Superman!