Back in the Modern World, My Immortal Master Won't Leave My Home

The content is good, but the plot still has many flaws. 1. When the heroine comes to earth and meets the hero, shouldn't she ask him how to get to the world of immortality? Then I went back in the same way, passing through so many chapters without even asking a question. 2. From the introduction of the subway, I probably didn't understand what the train was talking about. Shouldn't it be easier to understand something like a teleportation circle? 3. What about the storage ring that is a must-have for cultivators of immortality? Why don't we check our things after we put them on? The heroine's clothes can be worn together, and the communication jade pendant can also be worn. Shouldn't storage rings or storage bags be worn together? Even if it's useless, you still have to check it first. After all, every immortal cultivator's family property is basically in it. 4. In the world of immortality, mortals don't need chopsticks to eat? Or something else instead? What do mortals in the world of immortality eat? Even if you can't defeat those spiritual beasts, there are still mortals who can eat them. Even if the heroine doesn't eat them, she still has some understanding of them. After all, it's been hundreds of years. I won't lift the rest.

Most of the writing is about explaining various modern things, sometimes introducing the subway and sometimes introducing mobile phones. Does it take so much writing to introduce such things? Do readers want to see you introducing various things?

Personally, I think the first part is okay, but the second part has some shortcomings. Let a woman seduce you, and the second part makes it a bit ambiguous. The same goes for the female student. It's just a single heroine, so don't make any misunderstandings happen.

I have seen a few of them so far, and I think they are okay. I just want to ask you to call me Master instead of Master. Can you change your title? [Hold your face] Four stars.

Come on, give me a push

After reading it, I became familiar with it and took a look at the author. I found that it was written by the same author as Master Xianjun. I hope I won't stop updating this time. I personally like this kind of anti-travel theme. I will give it 5 stars to encourage it. The plot is okay, except for the chopsticks scene, everything is acceptable. I hope the relationship between the male and female protagonists is portrayed more delicately

The last book was a mess, I mean, why does this one look familiar? In the end, it's still you. Come on, author, I really like this.

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It's beautiful, I hope I can keep writing

Not bad, the plot in the early and middle stages is very good, but the final plot arrangement is a bit nonsensical and does not fit well with the overall plot and emotional progression. The ending is a bit poor, but overall it is good. It is worth watching if you like sweet stories with a single female protagonist. In addition, the author's update speed is too slow. If you are following his works, it is recommended to finish them in one go, otherwise it is easy to get into trouble.