The Monster Legion: Starting with the Whitebeard Pirates

Let's just say that the child in my cousin's family feels like he has been reborn. My cousin is from Wuhan. She has been married for 7 years and has always wanted a child. The health of both of them has been checked and both are fine, and local methods have also been used. She just wasn't pregnant, so I found an old Taoist priest behind me. The Taoist priest took a look and He said that he was destined to have a child and was waiting for it. Then last fall, I finally got pregnant. Everyone in the family is happy now. Food and drink are good and they are taken care of. I made it two days ago. Color Doppler ultrasound revealed that the child had abnormalities, and his mouth and nose were constantly moving. All kinds of tests were done, but no cause could be found. Later, I found an old man Traditional Chinese medicine, the old Chinese doctor said that this child had something on his mind in his previous life, but his mouth was actually Keep talking. Later, I found a professional to watch the color Doppler ultrasound video. While recording the mouth shape, I know what the child said: "Update quickly." When will it be updated? Hurry up! Hurry up! !

The writing is okay, and the description of One Piece is also good. However, the author's protagonist's behavior is logically chaotic, and his animality is greater than his humanity. Similar to Kaido, he insists on making himself the enemy of the world. The pirate novel I remember most is "The Pirate Code". The protagonist William's charisma makes me want to read it a second time after reading it once. As for this book, you can read it, but you may forget it after reading it.

The writing is very good, but the protagonist's strength at the beginning is already very high, and it feels difficult to break the million-word mark. At present, the plot is not falling apart and is very smooth, but I feel that it is a bit problematic to keep writing and teasing Blackbeard. What is better is to write a lot of the inner struggle of the protagonist whether to leave the white group, to pave the way for the future.

Whitebeard: My ten thousand silks are family, whoever touches them will die, Roger? He is not good, I appreciate him, even if he killed my son, he is still my good friend, I should attack my good son with my friends, hahahahaha

The protagonist's personality is a little twisted after being assimilated, but the fruit is well developed. To put it bluntly, the speed of thunder is the speed of light that does not move in a straight line. I don't believe those who say that flashing is faster than thunder. Yamata no Orochi will not comment. The development of Menmen is the highlight. Those who don't know how to play can only install things and run away. Those who know how to play can install the world of One Piece. The cutting, dislocation, twisting, extension, jumping, decomposition, expansion, compression, connection, isolation of space... Which one is not a T0 level ability? There is nothing wrong with time being supreme and space being king. Tuntun is also a god-killing fruit

It's very awesome. I can only say that it doesn't conform to the mainstream values. But I want to say that in a world like this, force controls everything. It's right for the protagonist to put everything he has into pursuing what he wants. The author is so awesome that it touched my heart. Come on.

It is very realistic, and the personality and ideals of the protagonist are written out. The domineering character of self-centeredness and the power of Whitebeard to protect the love of his family are very vividly displayed. This is the real world of pirates. Please update it quickly and look forward to the following content.

The update is slow and I'm not happy. Shanks is gone and I'm not happy. My personal suggestion for the follow-up is that Roger is gone. After the protagonist takes revenge, he has gone through some things and can become a normal person. After all, One Piece is flesh and blood. Be more aggressive in the early stage, and be more x-y in the later stage. Be more stable and feel the One Piece. It's okay to let the main story run for 500 chapters. Walk slowly. If you go too fast, you may run out of things to write. There are too many charming stories about the main characters, such as the drinking party where you met Whitebeard, such as paving the way for the main line, and establishing your own island country. There are too many things to write.

This book is indeed outstanding among Pirates fics. If the number of words and plot reaches a million words, to be honest, it can compete with Farmer Sanquan [Like] (I have read most of the fics on the market, and this one is truly worth recommending) [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love]

The phantom beast I grabbed must be the Yamata no Orochi. It has eight heads and eight hearts, which makes sense. If I write further, I would like to make some suggestions. The author hopes to listen to them. He will set the protagonist as a user with eight devil fruit abilities, learn from the eight magical skills of the alien next door, and simplify and modify them: The Dark Dark Fruit extracts other fruits, Surgical Fruit Immortality Surgery, Yamata no Orochi Fruit divides the soul into eight, Soul Soul Fruit divides and stabilizes the soul, and the Thunder Fruit activates the body, and can also divide the body into eight independent areas. There is also the supplementary Tun Tun Fruit, which is a special swallowing oneself, which is simply a plus version of Life Return. The original Five Old Stars will age slowly if they don't spend all their lifespan. The Tun Tun Fruit can replenish the weaknesses. The last of the eight fruits can fill up a space. The fruit can expand to all the worlds and open storage space, or other regular fruits can also be used. In addition, because the physique of the doctor protagonist can be selected from the ghost race, Oz giant, fish man, Bakania, and Neptune (this one is available), the Celestial Dragon bloodline can also be expanded into the key to the ancient weapon King (written in a novel), the Lunaria race is okay, but it seems a lot useless due to the flying ability Thunder Fruit, and the ability of the green "flying dragon" in the original work to turn into a stone statue and be reborn can appear as a foreshadowing after death. If you have a short-term physique, you can choose a fishman and transplant the gills to your body. It will be the only way to return to the fishman island in the new world. Finally, I sincerely wish this author's novels to become popular, come on! ! !