The Monster Legion: Starting with the Whitebeard Pirates

My cousin's child seems to have been reborn. My cousin is from Wuhan. She's been married for seven years and always wanted a child. Both she and her husband had medical checkups and everything was fine. They even tried traditional remedies, but nothing worked. Then they consulted an old Taoist priest, who said she was destined to have a child and just had to wait.

The writing is decent, and the depiction of One Piece is good. However, the protagonist's behavior is illogical, with bestiality outweighing humanity, similar to Kaido, who insists on making himself an enemy of the world. The One Piece novel I remember most vividly is *The Pirate Codex*, with its charismatic protagonist William; I wanted to read it again after the first time. As for this book, it's readable, but you'll probably forget it afterward.

It's well-written, but the protagonist's strength is already very high at the beginning, making it difficult to reach a million words. The plot hasn't fallen apart yet and flows smoothly, but constantly focusing on teasing Blackbeard feels a bit problematic. The good thing is that it shows a lot of the protagonist's internal struggle about whether to leave the Whitebeard crew, laying the groundwork for his future path.

Whitebeard: My sworn brothers are family. Anyone who touches them dies. Roger? He's no good. I admire him. Even though he killed my son, he's still my good friend. I should attack my good son with my friend, hahahahaha!

The protagonist's personality is somewhat twisted due to assimilation, but his Devil Fruit development is quite good. Lightning's speed, frankly, is the speed of light that doesn't travel in a straight line; I don't believe anyone would say Flash is faster than Thunder. I won't comment on Orochi. The development of each fruit is a highlight.

It's incredibly awesome. I can only say it doesn't conform to mainstream values, but I want to say that in such a world where force controls everything, the protagonist is right to do what he's doing, risking everything to pursue what he wants. The author is amazing; it resonated with me. Keep it up!

It's very realistic, capturing the protagonist's personality and ideals vividly. His domineering, self-centered nature and Whitebeard's protective love for his family are portrayed very well. This is the true world of One Piece! I'm looking forward to more updates.

Slow updates are upsetting. Shanks is gone, which is also upsetting. My personal suggestion for the sequel is that Roger is gone, and after the protagonist gets his revenge and goes through some events, he can return to being a normal person. After all, One Piece characters are fleshed out. Let him be strong in the early stages, and then show off a lot later on.

This is truly outstanding among One Piece fanfiction. If the word count and plot were to reach a million words, it could honestly rival Farmer's Three Punches. 👍 (I've read most of the fanfiction on the market, and this one is genuinely worth recommending.) ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

The mythical beast that was stolen should be Yamata no Orochi, right? Eight heads and eight hearts make sense. If you're going to continue writing, I have a suggestion that I hope the author will consider: make the protagonist a user of eight Devil Fruits, borrowing from the eight extraordinary techniques in the anime/manga series *Under the Inhumans*, but simplifying and modifying them: