I Can't Keep Playing the Protagonist

It's really good so far. I was too lazy to write a review, but I was afraid that the author wouldn't write it anymore, so I just kept mumbling. Advantages: The rhythm is okay, not laggy; the skill design is good, it has the flavor of a meat pigeon game, and it is full of imagination; I think the distribution system is a big improvement, which is good. Disadvantages: The storyboard is not very good, and sometimes it looks very messy; the emotional line can be said to be enough at the moment, so I will write it slowly at the moment, not too much, otherwise it will be messy and weird; In summary, it's not bad (PS: Please change the cover, Picasso's style is not something ordinary people can understand [laughs awkwardly], AI can do it)

See the beginning of Volume 2 and comment The first volume is very well written, both in terms of plot and overall control. There are no poisonous points. It has been strengthened after the return of the protagonist. The world view and plot have also opened a new curtain. It is novel for the time being and makes me look forward to it. Then in the second volume, you have a sister at the beginning. Good guy, just because of "an inexplicable emotion", you directly use the red potion to save people. You give her a little drink and her life is restored. When she wakes up, you give her another half of the bottle. When playing a dungeon like this can really kill people, and you only prepared two bottles of red potion, are you a bit too much? Some people said that I didn't look carefully before starting to complain. Let me go back and take a closer look. It said that the protagonist inherited the memory. I went back and watched it several times. There was no memory, only an inexplicable emotion. Anyway, that's all. It would be disrespectful to read any further.

The book is quite provocative, but the author's writing is smooth and the emotions are drawn to the end. Especially Yu Yuanbao has an abstract character, and everyone says that the word "" has a knife on his head. However, the system content in the book accounts for a large proportion, which is a bit more extreme. Anyone who likes it will like it.

It's interesting that the first world attracted me, but the second world is an apocalyptic world similar to nuclear winter. Children who survive independently in this environment can't kill people. Their morals need to be lowered.

The protagonist has super upright views and is also a very dedicated person, and Jenny and the protagonist really match each other. I really like a heroine with such a personality, affectionate and dedicated, as light as water but unwavering until death. From the plot point of view, the SCp world is quite good. The most important thing is the power armor battle in the second world. The shortcomings are that I always feel that the combat power is about to collapse, and the system between the real protagonist and supporting characters seems to be nothing special, and it cannot highlight the uniqueness of the protagonist.

The first world line is quite attractive. I don't know if it's because I like American TV series. The author's first world line has the style of American TV series. And it's not just about the plot, it's about the dialogue that is full of a sense of déjà vu.

This is the author's first time writing a book on Rotten Tomatoes, and his writing and IQ are both online. If he writes online in the future, the results should not be bad.

Hao Kan, the numerical protagonist, is not a damn antisocial personality, but some people may not be able to accept the protagonist's abilities that have negative effects (such as reducing the gain and increase the numerical value). Also, the protagonist's ability development is not very good, but that's okay, since he is Mangzi after all.

It's been a long time since I've seen such a wonderful and correct novel. I've always felt that traveling through the heavens shouldn't just be a passer-by on quests. Each world shouldn't and won't have just a few quests and only a few characters. What you should be facing should be an independent biological individual rather than just a mere NPC. What you're fighting against is not mobs but living opponents with flesh and blood, souls and thoughts.

As for the first copy, it looks pretty good. But it's a pity that the Peanut's containment items I wanted to see didn't appear. I hope I can open this dungeon after I become stronger. As for the second copy, the front and back are pretty good, but the middle part is a bit boring. Anyway, I just flipped through it, stopping wherever I was interested. The third copy is not finished yet, but overall it looks pretty good. The writing is quite fluent. Come on, the author [learned it] (I hope this book will become more and more popular. Anyway, I am the author who keeps updating and I will not give up, but I know how to maintain the book. After all, the author is still a bit slow in updating [laughs evilly]) Summary: Excellent work