Best Friends Transmigrate Into a Book Together! Marry a Rough-and-Ready Man! If You Leave, I’m Leaving Too

🌵Four stars. I have read 218 chapters so far. I skipped some chapters and am still reading. Let me comment first. 🌵The biggest problem in this article at the moment is the "sentence making" problem in "Words and Sentences": The first is the problem of sentence segmentation. There are too many commas. Sometimes an ordinary long sentence can be clearly described and has to be broken into several short sentences. 🌵Secondly, the content of the word "" is too high. The end of many sentences can end directly with a period, and the word "" must be added. For example, the heroine ran to the classroom immediately because she was afraid of the smell. It has to be written as "I ran to the classroom immediately." Etc. Many sentences are like this, ending with the word "". 🌵The third one is that some sentences have word order problems and they don't look very smooth. 🌵The highlight is that the heroine's way of dealing with the best is very delicate, circuitous and direct. On the surface, they are roundabout and seldom directly make noises or fights. At least they don't seem so noisy and upset. In essence, it is quite direct and decisive, such as dividing families to build houses and grab money. 🌵Although the heroine always thinks that she is green tea, I don't think she is pretentious or aggrieved. Instead, I think the heroine is quite intelligent. The author writes quite well on this point. 🌵Still reading, see what you can see, and see if you need to change the score or make a follow-up review later. 🌵Four stars ~ four and a half stars, I read more than 400 chapters, and skipped some chapters along the way. This article is still being serialized, so I probably won't follow it anymore, because I can easily lose interest in serialized articles, unless one day I am really short of books. 🌵After reading it, I feel that the biggest problem in this article is the "sentence making" problem mentioned above. The rest of the writing is okay. The male and female protagonists are well portrayed, especially when it comes to dealing with the best family members. They have a clear division of labor, crisp and clear cooperation, and a tacit understanding. The female protagonist does not overdo it and become hysterical, and the male protagonist does not whitewash it and pretend to be stupid and watch the fire from the other side. 🌵 Let's talk about a small problem that is not a problem, that is, the pronunciation of the heroine's name is similar to "Shen Mu". When I listen to the book, I often hear it as Shen Mu, Shen Mu. Every time, I have to remind myself that the heroine's name is Shen Wu. 🌵Another point is that I find it very awkward to write about best friends who are jealous of each other's husbands, who disagree with each other, steal each other's people, and sometimes even give each other cold looks. Just like when I saw some authors writing about fathers and sons, mothers and daughters being jealous of each other and competing for favors, it was childish, awkward, and outrageous. 🌵It's not impossible to write this kind of plot occasionally or write it cleverly, and it may even be good to watch, but if it is written too many times or written too bluntly, it will make me feel very awkward, and it will not add much to the character, and it will play a role in reducing the charm of the character.

Super pretty! Best friends wearing double wear are true best friends! Every time I see this setting, I worry that the two of them will turn against each other for the man. This is true! So much love! The two of them also handle things neatly and never suffer losses. They are also men, responsible and responsible, and their thoughts are normal!

I am a person who loves reading chronicle stories and farming stories. This one is really, really good. The two best friends and the male protagonist are matched with each other. Some old ladies in the village are also mentioned throughout the whole text. A very interesting point is that from the early years in the village, the heroine relied on words and the strength of the heroine's best friend to thrive in the village. The male protagonist is also very fond of her. The heroine, the heroine doesn't want to go to the fields, so she lets them stay at home. The heroine also loves money very much, is a money addict, and makes a lot of money. Because she traveled through time in the modern era, she knows some background, went to the city to do business, opened a company, and some good relatives and friends in the village also moved here. She made money and was harmonious, and had a sense of community, which is also very refreshing. I have been reading this for a whole summer, and I am very grateful to the author for being able to read such a good article. I also want to have fandom. I hope the author can come back and add some extras to give us some little surprises. I originally came to read it after seeing Maomao Little Theater on Douyin. After reading the novel, I felt really, really, really. I just finished reading it now, and I cut it off a little bit. I have to go to school tomorrow. Thank you so much

It's so funny, I'll watch it during dinner time. I almost choked to death from laughing, but at 2:00 in the evening I couldn't help but burst out laughing. My wife kicked me out of bed, oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo... Situationsss, cans I ask the author to pay for it with my life? Woo woo woo woo It's not that good in the back, I don't want to give it five stars.

The setting is quite good. The two best friends cover for each other, and the married men are also attracted to them, but the heroine is too loose. In those days, everything needed to be paid for. The white rabbit was quite expensive, and it was considered an expensive gift. The heroine would give the white rabbit to everyone she met. The key is that the heroine and the two are from rural areas. The locals are well aware of the local conditions. Rich educated youths from out of town are not loose with the heroine.

Old bookworms think it's very interesting to watch. Everyone is unique. From Wang Hua to Chen Tian in the back, the female characters in it are all great. They go beyond those previous plots. They see women standing up to break the stereotypes of that era and break through new lives. The protagonists are also great. They support and accompany each other and are always by each other's side. , The most satisfying thing for me is that it doesn't match up with the protagonist. It's not like the protagonist is matched by a few people around him. I finally finished reading it today and it just happened to be finished. I love to see you again. The world is so big. I wish us peace and success in different time and space. I also wish the author a prosperous career [Send my heart][Send my heart]

It's really good-looking. This is the first book I've seen about wearing clothes with my best friends! ! It's really beautiful! ! This kind of getting better together is like the kind of portraits of people in alleys, which are also a large group of people. Each person's personality is well portrayed, as if there really is such a large group of people who have experienced the changes of the times, and all kinds of things have become better! I'm short on words but it's really beautiful [crying][crying][crying]

Finally, finally finished watching it Overall, it's okay. There's nothing particularly big. After all, my best friend is right next to me. Let's talk about it. And the character creation is also very interesting. It's good to watch it when you usually use it to pass the time for leisure and entertainment. The two heroines' personalities complement each other very well and they have a good relationship with each other as besties! Then the overall direction of the protagonist is very sweet without any knives. Then, although the villain was also jumping around, he didn't cause any serious damage. In terms of characters, the eldest son of the original heroine in the original book left a deep impression on me and made me feel very distressed. The biological mother changed the core when they were born, and she treated them like they were raising gu since they were little. Only those who performed well would be rewarded. If there is no true love, it is all fake. Then I slowly recognized this reality and relied on my own efforts to achieve success. Typical coward father, jailed mother, dragging second brother and broken him Then about Cheng Ye: It was also a family of four who were all murdered by an adulterer. They endured the humiliation and burden of being next to the murderer of their father for many years, and finally avenged their father and reached the peak of their lives. But it seemed that he had won, but in fact he only survived. He lost his eternally happy family. Lost the life that should have been bright and brilliant Secondly, I won't talk about the protagonist Xiaowu. The real family is indeed not that good. However, Xu Marriage is actually more curious about whether they died in the wave? How are his parents? It's just that modern things are not explained. Hahaha, there is also the mess caused by the third child with Xiaowu going to the third child without Xiaowu. How did you deal with it in the end? Haha Finally, I hope that the characters in the book will always be happy, and I hope that you in front of the screen will be too. Finally, to borrow Xiaotian's words: Never give up on yourself. Even when the whole world treats you badly, you have to be kind to yourself. Maybe the next moment there will be a bright future. Goodbye Jianghu

It's so exciting. I tied it in just one day. Big boost, author. This book is relatively new recently, and what attracts me the most is actually the sisterhood of best friends. They cherish each other very much, and the protagonist is also very capable and does not suffer any loss. It is very enjoyable to read. The couples are quite sweet, there are sensible people in them, and they don't engage in things like female rivalry. They also have a lot of laughs, and the emotional value is quite high.

If nothing else, this novel ranks first among the novels of the era. Although there is no space for golden fingers, it is really good-looking, even better than Lin Yuzhu (this book has many wheels, many emotional dramas between the male and female protagonists, the plot of the parents' shortcomings is super refreshing to watch, and it is breast-friendly)