The Supporting Female Character Awakens! The Spoiled Childhood Friend Sees the On-Screen Comments

On the surface, it looks like a novel with a female protagonist and a female protagonist, but I haven't seen the inside yet "because I haven't read too much." The main reason for this book review is that I felt a little uncomfortable when I saw the plot where the female protagonist and the second male protagonist appeared. In a plot where the female protagonist is happy, does the appearance of the male protagonist have to be that the heroine is in danger and a hero comes to save her? They can have a more natural encounter, such as meeting at the heroine's grandmother's house. "Also, the heroine's dress and temperament should be more eye-catching and noble. Generally speaking, kidnappers should avoid this kind of behavior. Unless they want to kidnap the heroine for ransom, otherwise it should be more troublesome to kidnap such a girl. It may also be because the heroine is not a native of the country.

If you like big heroines, please stay away. This book feels like spoiled wife literature, abstract.

Oh my, really, every couple is sweet, who knows, but every time I see it, my heart feels sour. If there were less misunderstandings, more understanding, and more courage, could the heroine have a 1v1 line with them? I am a heartthrob and don't like to read 1v1 because I think there will be regrets, but this novel is not 1v1 and I will regret it..., The heroine baby The characters are very lovable. Really, I would shed tears when watching some plots. My tears are really low. When I see the heroine getting along with each of them, I will sigh, "This is love! (Sichuan dialect)." I hope that the process will be np and the ending will be a 1v1 line for each of them, otherwise it will be too uncomfortable [I will cry]

Give yourself an evaluation. First of all, I would like to thank you for your positive reviews. Thank you for your affirmation. I will work hard to continue updating (I love you). Next I would like to share some of my thoughts on negative reviews. In fact, I haven't been writing books for too long. I used to write books on a standalone machine and write down my favorite jokes. So I admit that I may not be that proficient in my writing craft right now. Again, I would like to thank everyone for pointing out the logical bugs in my book. I will reflect on the shortcomings and strive to do better next time. But one thing I hope everyone will not doubt is that my love for the heroine is unquestionable. She is my child, my treasure, the most cherished work that I have devoted my efforts to, and my golden branch. If there is any, I will correct it, if not, I will encourage you. Thank you all for watching. I hope I can bring you better works next time and contribute my strength to originality. Keep writing, orange and grapefruit seeds As for infantilization, I actually don't want to defend myself. It's really what I say: in the grandmother chapter, I assumed the identity of Zhizhi's grandmother. From my perspective, I put on a little filter to see her. The last point is that I personally am currently not very good at writing about machinations, business wars, and slaps in the face, so in many places I may have sacrificed logic to describe more of the emotional pull that I am better at. In short, it will continue to improve, and everyone is welcome to invest.

Super pretty! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Now I am very optimistic about Young Master Chi! ! ! ! ! Can you replace the bamboo horse of one of the male protagonists with Song xx? (The heroine Zhu Ma's former friends, I feel that he is better than Zhu Ma!!!) Or you can change it to Jiang Senior [Shy] Zhu Ma should chase his wife in the crematorium, but he can't! ! ! ! ! ! !

It's very beautiful. The heroine is very sober and has a good family background. She is not wronged and can get out in time. Although the original male protagonist cannot let go of the female protagonist, he has barriers to emotional cognition. If the female protagonist does not withdraw, there is a high probability that the things in the dream will be repeated. After all, the original male protagonist does not realize that he likes the female protagonist. This is very good. Although Xiao Min likes the female protagonist. The main character, but he is very awkward and cannot make the heroine who has just ended her love for Xiao Xie (the original male protagonist) feel a sense of security. There is also a Xiao Xie brother. Hehe, the scene where the brothers are fighting is also very interesting. Now Xiao Chi, Charmander is so cute. He expresses his feelings straightforwardly and passionately. It is really good. The sense of security is enough. Let's see how the plot develops [Cool]

After reading it, I found that there are still some shortcomings, which I can tolerate a little more. Overall, the writing is pretty good. Well, to be honest, there are some shortcomings that I still can't accept.

In terms of content, it would probably be rated ③-④ stars, because it felt like it ended a bit abruptly. Although everything that needed to be explained was explained, it was just a bit uninspiring. And it feels like the heroine doesn't talk much (thinking) ! ! ! But! ! ! The characterization is very good (especially) the heroine! ! ! Jin Xiaoguai! You are a pampered but very upright little girl! I won't look for a mistress when I'm in love. "If I don't like him, then I'm off course and I'll change my route." There will be no internal friction but it will not hurt other people's babies either! As for the male protagonist, (thinking about it) I jumped into watching it, but I preferred the Nian Shang group, mainly because the ex-husband is delicious but be, Charmander is silly and sweet but has a good life, not as good as the two Nian Shang's dank characters. Good writing! There is no sense of a running account, and there are no embarrassing words such as "sweating dripping with fragrance". It is very normal language! There are no females, males are everywhere, seconds! In addition to love, there is family and friendship!

It must be NPC. If it develops to the point where there is no CP or 1v1, I will sue the central government! ! ! Our Zhizhi is worthy of everyone's love. She doesn't need to struggle with choices in relationships. She is the best little girl.

I feel that none of the male characters appearing so far have any interesting points, and the female protagonist is also super cute. I have accepted all my expectations. It's just a few [I learned it] [I learned it] [I learned it] [I learned it] [I learned it]