Honkai: Star Rail: Selling Strange Trash Cans on the Xianzhou

The main character in this book is weak in the early stage, but gradually gets better in the later stage, so I suggest you just skim through the first 200 chapters (you can also skip chapters), and then you can eat the rest with confidence [eating melon] The following content is a suggestion to the author 1. Get used to writing an outline first and check whether the content can meet the settings. 2. After updating the chapter, conduct in-depth reading to check whether there is any missing content. (If it's a little tiring or difficult, just use the outline to compare) 3. When writing a novel with a protagonist, except for sadistic stories, don't make the protagonist "dull", otherwise he won't be the protagonist. (After slowly adjusting later, I was so excited after reading the previous chapters that I would smile and say: Knowing your mistakes can make a lot of improvements [laughs]) There are only so many suggestions, I hope the author can take them into consideration and avoid making minor mistakes when writing articles [Sending my heart]

@Cover It looks good. Can Feixiao be the heroine? My Xiaoxiao is so beautiful, sassy and beautiful, doesn't it smell good?

The protagonist had better kill an emissary to intimidate him, or directly kill the Star God, otherwise he would feel uncomfortable.

This book is very good, but I feel that not many people have read it. Do people have such high standards for reading books now? This is Free Tomato, not a paid novel software [face covering]

No, the protagonist is really a Buddhist? Are there none now?

Hey, I have an idea. Is it possible to open something similar to a duel arena, and fill it with characters from other anime, games, and novels? If you win, you can get the corresponding rare items. For example, defeat Uchiha Madara and obtain the Samsara Eye (Uchiha Madara version)... Of course, these characters must be strengthened, and it's time to give Beng Tie some comprehensive comic shock!

An ordinary one. The blind box lottery article is a very cool one. Well, if I read it next, I will evaluate it at any time. It seems like that at the moment. The protagonist may just like to tease people. Then there are also the very popular scenes of companies being slapped in the face. It's that kind of cool writing. But I feel like he shouldn't be able to do this. For harem people, I think if you like to watch the protagonist group, it's Star Train, and The Fairy Boat and Luofu. They're getting better and better, these things. You should like it very much. And after all, the quantity is quite large and filling. Even if he just. From now on, this book stuck with me, and I felt that this much was enough.

Overall, it's good. Although I only read twenty or thirty pictures, I can still feel that this book is still good. But the only shortcoming of this book is that it was too useless before chapter 30, but it gradually got better after chapter 30. If the protagonist is very strong before 30 pictures, then your book is at least 8:05 or above. After watching me for a long time, my evaluation is very credible [Like]

Now that all the props from Jackie Chan's Adventures have been released, , the purple ghost mask can summon the ghost army of the corresponding mask. It has side effects and can bring out the evil side in people's hearts. Only the wearer can take it off at any time. , The golden ghost mask can summon the shadow corps of the corresponding mask without any side effects. Only the wearer can take it off. Wearing it on the face can make the mask invisible without affecting the appearance of the face. The fragments of history books of the years can modify a small part of the history, so that Bai Heng can be resurrected, and the Five Figures on the Cloud will be complete.

I'm now curious if it would be interesting to give him a copy of the Daqianlu when he comes to open the barrel.