Big Brothers, I Just Want to Go Home!

It's very beautiful, but please, the author, please let the heroine go home in the end. A girl who is with her family is the happiest little girl 😘

I hope the heroine will return home successfully in the end. Don't Yan be the male protagonist. The fear he brings to the female protagonist cannot be ignored. I hope the author will cherish the female protagonist he writes.

It's very interesting and the writing is very good. This article is written using flashbacks and interludes, which can arouse a lot of interest. The heroine is very smart. Only later did I realize that the heroine has gone through a lot of things to grow up to the step-by-step strategy she is now. I feel sorry for what she and Lin Mo, a fellow traveler, have experienced in this cannibalistic era. I hope they can go home quickly and return to their own era. Cheers to the author!

It is very well written, and the story is told in a narrative way. The three characters are interspersed with each other. There are some typos, but it does not affect the overall reading. It will be a bit confusing at first because the plot is introduced while talking, so it will be a bit confusing at the beginning. If you stick to it, it will be very clear by the second character. So looking forward to it! The heroine has a growth process, which is well written and progressive. Looking forward to the follow-up plot. One update a day is a bit rare, but there are also few people watching. With more people, there will probably be two updates 😘[Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss] Very good-looking. Super good-looking. I will follow it. The author said that the heroine will go home in the end. I must see the episode where the heroine comes home 🧐 [currently being drafted]

I saw the heroine wearing a necklace before being found, and when I learned that the necklace belonged to her dead lover, I wanted to cry. Later, when I recalled seeing Lin Mo appear on the scene, I thought of it. Two people who had known each other since childhood, encouraged and accompanied each other, and met again in this different world. Seeing each other 😢 I sincerely hope that Lin Mo can come back and they can meet again and go home together.

Overall, it's not bad, but can Lin Mo not die? 😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢 It's okay to fake death to escape. Even if he becomes the female protagonist, Master, if possible, it's okay to turn him into the male protagonist. Please, please make Lin Mo the male protagonist. 😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢 😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢

Yes, I really like Lin Mo and Yan Xining. I feel a bit like White Rose and Red Rose. Although Lin Mo's portrayal is not as detailed as Yan's, it is very regrettable. It feels like Lin Mo's story has not been finished yet. Does the author want to write a sequel?

It's very interesting, but it will lay some foreshadowings and leave some questions, but it's not particularly confusing, it's a bit suspenseful, but the plot is not confusing, which is good, and the plot can also catch this reader. It's pretty good, and the writing is okay.

I haven't read it in depth yet, but I feel very good so far. I'm afraid I'll forget it later. I'll give it a five-star review first. I don't have any feelings for the male characters. I don't think I like them very much, nor do I find them annoying. But the heroine's portrayal is quite interesting, and she's also quite vivid and three-dimensional. The writing style is also good, and the wording is also quite sophisticated. Fragrant seedlings! 💕[Understand][Laugh] The writing style is completely natural and self-contained. There is a wonderful sense of limitation of the third person. It seems to know, but also does not seem to know. It is a bit like a useless junior sister on the PO (nph). In short, it feels like a shining treasure that has not been discovered yet [laughs][laughs] How to say? When I look at the back, I feel that the heroine at the beginning is a bit too heavy. . . How to say? Or the one at the back is more mature and calm?

It's very well written (^v^)/. This article uses a reverse order method. The heroine was just a silly sweet girl when she first came here. Later she experienced people and things, saw a lot of scenery, and grew up a lot! Finally, I made it home successfully! [Blows a kiss] Lin Mo is here too!! [However, the plot of Nanjiang Guoshi was not detailed enough (personally, I was very careful in the later stage), and only the stories in the two countries of Beiming and Donglin were carefully described. I haven't explained the details about Nie Yuan, Yan Xining, Yan Chun, Zhu Ming, Cheng Shiqing... I'm also very curious about the follow-up situation 🥺 Can you write a side story about modern daily life? After the ending, I still feel there are some shortcomings///I want to see the if line (quietly beeping)]