Lord of the Ferry

After reading so much, I would like to share my personal opinions or suggestions. First of all, the novel is well conceived. There is not a lot of ink at the beginning to describe the background and environment of the story, but the relationship between the characters is rather vague and unclear. For example, after watching it for so long, I still don't understand how realms are divided [face covering] [face covering] [face covering] I thought the peak of the Nine Palaces realm was a very impressive realm, but it turned out there were realms above it. I thought the beginning was the peak, and the result was the starting point. Then, let me tell you, the paragraph is too long, long, long, long, long, long, long, long, long, long, long, long, long, long, long, long, long, long, please the author to divide the paragraphs, add a comma [face-covering] [face-covering] [face-covering] Some of the readings are difficult to read, adding a comma will make it smoother. Next, let's talk about the story itself. The story is unconventional, but the protagonist still has the standard equipment. [Laughing evilly] My suggestion is to maximize the hero's force value directly, and then go to various planes [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] Hehe, you know the answer The world view of the novel is very grand. It can be said that it does not belong to the cult of immortality. It is a bit similar to the ancient world, and a bit like an outsider. Wumian sometimes seems like a superior god, without sadness or joy, watching the changes in history and the change of dynasties, but to be honest, the highest glory is to enjoy loneliness. Although I don't know whether Wu Mian reached the top of the plane in the end or returned to his original nature and returned to ordinaryness, but his feelings are very light, so light that you almost have to dig deep or pay attention to his micro-expressions to discover his feelings. Of course, it is also possible that he is not good at expressing, so he wraps himself up tightly, but I think it may be difficult to tempt someone like Wumian, who has seen life, old age, illness, death, rise and fall, honor and disgrace. One more thing, I really like Hoshimi's [Shy][Shy]. Can the author make Hoshimi the heroine? I don't want the kind of friends who don't want to give in, and lovers who don't dare to feel the kind of regret, please [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] I like Miss Wangshu, I don't want her to have unrequited love.

There is a hidden edge in the pattern of the heavens, and the young master of Bafeng lost his sword and fell into the mortal world. The alchemy craftsmen each show their magical powers, there are many sects with undercurrents surging, and the opportunity for nirvana is hidden in the desperate situation. The opening chapter is full of fate and full of foreshadowing.

Crossing the three realms in a small boat, the Taoist hero felt regretful for nine days. Machiavellianism and immortality are intertwined, the characters are vivid, and the plot is ups and downs, showing the passion and weirdness of the world of immortality. The plot is compact and the intention is lofty, making it a hearty read.

This novel uses chess as a boat to cross the heavens! Zhao Wumian, the young master of the pinnacle family, imprisoned himself in the mortal world for a game of chess, and insisted on his swordsmanship in the annihilation of the world. The writing is vigorous and delicate, and the machinations and immortal ways are intertwined. It has both the majestic pattern of the ancient times and the coldness and alienation of an outsider. The plot is ups and downs, the characters are vivid, and the opening chapter is full of a sense of fate. It is a rare spiritual epic in traditional fantasy. The more you watch it, the more you get addicted! Worth recommending.

After practicing in the mortal world, he finally became an immortal, Zhao Wumian, the master of swordsmanship. The author starts with chess and depicts an epic of spiritual practice. The writing is vigorous and powerful, and the emotional descriptions are delicate. It is a rare good book!

A good novel, I like it, keep going

The writing style is smooth and delicate, the story is wonderful, the plot is full of ups and downs, Mrs. Mrs. Mrs. Is so beautiful, I highly recommend it.

The plot of the novel is very well written, and the characterization is also very vivid. I hope the author can keep writing it. I highly recommend everyone to read it. It is a very good book. I follow it regularly!

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