Who's the Boldest on the Magic Continent? I Build Cannons and Become the Demon King

The single heroine Effie is overall a good little novel. It can always ensure that its own technology is crushed across generations. There is no stupid thing like the result of labor and management's hard research and development with just a word of magic engineering. It is a wonderful collision of magic and technology in a sense. But the shortcomings are also obvious. First of all, the plot and character creation in the first 60 chapters are a bit confusing, but after the rhythm is grasped, the perception becomes better; then in some chapters, the name of the character is wrong, and you can see the protagonist inexplicably running to the opponent to beat him; finally, the protagonist is a bit too kind in some aspects. For example, Rajya knocked down black powder, exploded nitrocellulose, and joked about phosgene. It was a bit confusing and not very well designed. Another example was that the defeat of the Naga Queen's army attracted the enemy. No one stopped her on the way to the weapons testing site. She unilaterally announced an equal alliance in front of others without issuing a statement to clarify... In short, the story has a lot of minor flaws, but when you are unhappy and want to relax, you can try it. Maybe you can have fun, right?

It's a rare good book. Why is the rating so low? It must be because it has not accepted all kinds of girls for so long [laughing]

I have read about 40 chapters now, and so far there are no major problems. The plot is good and the writing is quite satisfactory. It's a pretty good book, worth reading. It's just that the rating is a bit low. I don't quite understand this. Maybe it's because there are too many books of the same type. Anyway, cheers for the author!

It seems that the male protagonist must have at least seven or eight wives. Anna, Priest, Female Merchant Captain, Second Princess, Wood Elf🧚‍♀️Sisters . . . . . . . . Although I don't like reading romance The other plots are quite interesting

It's funny to say it's funny, but these aristocrats don't look like aristocrats. The author wrote that the fourth princess and the second princess were half-mothers, and later they were half-mothers, and then they were half-sisters. Occasionally, some characters were written incorrectly. The fourth princess of the kingdom was written as the third princess, and the grand master of the sword master of the empire was written as the magister. The high elf side is written as sea elf, then high elf, and then sea elf. It changes back and forth. Sometimes it makes people confused when I look at it -_-||. If it can be changed, it will be four/five stars.

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This book can be called a masterpiece in this genre. The world view is very grand and the characters are very vivid and impressive. Moreover, the pace of this book is very comfortable, and the technological combat power has not collapsed. I think this book should score 9.3 Or above. It's really a pity to publish a book like this on Tomato

The structure is quite satisfactory. If you start it early, you will get angry. I didn't catch the train.

The plot is coherent, the logic is scientific, and the basic knowledge is solid. Five-star praise is given. Cheers to the author [blowing kiss]

Is it a problem with the new book? Why is the rating only 7.1? The rating is too low. The farming development of this book is very attractive to me. If you are interested in the farming lord article, please don't make a mistake. There are some minor flaws, but they are innocuous. Worth a look