Tomb Raiding: I’m Here to Mend the World

It's not a long Tomb Raider fanfic, but overall it's okay. There's no cp, and the system doesn't bully the heroine. She's very good at using cheats, and her character is quite interesting. She's not the kind that's full of love and affection. There are cheats, so she doesn't suffer much physically. It's pretty good, except for the second half where the heroine is really aggrieved and sad when she's cheated. The system did this intentionally, but I feel that the heroine has also grown mentally. After all, everything went smoothly in the past. The plot progressed very quickly, and it also changed the fate of some people. The ending was a bit rushed, and it was a bit regretful. In the end, everyone forgot about the heroine, so there was a little friction, but forgetting is okay, and the heroine can go home well. The bad thing is that the long dialogues are not marked with quotation marks. It is really uncomfortable to read. Sometimes I can't tell whether it is an inner drama or a dialogue between characters. Although it does not affect the understanding of the plot, it is just uncomfortable to watch. It is the first time I read a text without " " in the dialogue hahahaha

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Ok ok ok

The narrative of the story is relatively complete, but the language is a bit confusing. The plot is probably pretty good, but it would be better if the writing was better.

Wonderful content and good-looking