Enough Already! The Chosen Ones Are Going Bald from All the Scheming!

Let me tell you what I think about this book. I think this book is very good. It can be set in any setting. However, I also have a small opinion, because according to the original text, the cultivation in this world is only formed by the infusion of spiritual energy after the collision of different worlds. In other words, it is a different world. It has been developed for I don't know how many years. Even according to the realm of martial arts that a cultivator has not yet reached its peak, he can live hundreds to thousands of years. Thousands of years are guaranteed. After all, he is still young and has lived for 500 years. By this calculation, he has not maintained a middle-aged attitude. Its lifespan is at least over 1,000 years. Judging from the fact that a high-level martial world that has only developed for no more than 500 years can meet this standard, what will happen to those other worlds that have developed for who knows how many years? How powerful will it be? The high-end combat power that is much more powerful than this world must be many levels higher, so I suggest that it is a reasonable act for the author to expand the world. Of course, it is up to the author whether you adopt it or not. After all, you are God. At least in this book, you are God to me. I have been a bookworm for 20 years, almost 20 years ago, because I started recording novels in 2009, and I have been in trouble for 15 or 16 years. I would like to make a suggestion, that is, according to my understanding, you should have imitated some of the cultivation realms in Dou Po Cang Qiong, but changed the Dou Gai to martial arts practice. The essence is still the same, and you can clearly see it by comparing it. Fighters fight with the spirit of fighting, and lose. Great fighting masters, fighting spirits, kings, emperors, and sects. Dou Zun. Fighting saints and fighting emperors. When you compare the cultivation systems of this world, you will find that they are very similar, but it doesn't matter, because you have changed one word, it doesn't matter, even if you don't change it, it doesn't matter, it's just that the cultivation systems are similar, so it doesn't matter if they are similar, because the world view is also completely different, and there is an extra time traveler. No problem, what am I trying to emphasize here? It is emphasized that people are fighting to break the sky, but there is a big master, right? And you? There is also a different world, which just corresponds to the world of the Great Overlord. Do you think what I said is right? What are the benefits of just corresponding to the big domination world? The good thing is that logically speaking, your world has only developed for 500 years, and its high-end combat power should be very strong, and it is much stronger than this world, at least there are strong people in the Martial God realm. Let's talk about what is the Martial God Realm. There are many high-level martial arts training systems, and the Martial God Realm is the pinnacle. But I feel that if you follow this theory, at least the Martial God Jin is not the pinnacle, because you have developed a strong Martial Saint Jin in 500 years when two different worlds collided, right? People have already broken through to an incredible realm in dozens of epochs. I call this realm the Supreme Realm. There are many divisions that are not. You can even divide it even further, but it doesn't have to be set like this. You can set it to the martial arts immortal realm, right? To paraphrase a realm from Taoism, the martial arts immortal breaks the void.

Overall it's pretty good, you can read it, but it also has some bad points. He disliked his own system twice like a white-eyed wolf. Without a system, he is nothing. Maybe he was joking. . . The protagonist of the rebirth stream may spend tens of millions to buy food, but he actually thinks it's okay. Is he sure that the protagonist has traveled through time? ? . . . . There are some other

As for this book, I think it is okay, but I would like to give some advice to the author. Don't make too many appearances of the Son of Destiny, otherwise it will make you very tired. I am speaking here. I will comment after reading all the chapters so far.

The writing is very good, but I don't want to watch the plot of military service. I can just become a doctor in the army. That dean secretly inquired into other people's privacy. It's very impolite. At least, please explain it in advance. Do you have any objections from the male lead? What the hell.

It's no longer possible to describe the son of destiny in this book. It's almost better to describe it as abstract [laughing and crying]

Only after reading it did I realize why the rating is so low

Real: I want to make money $_$ False: My rank is not high enough! Crickets are just too poisonous [I'm about to cry]

I watched it suddenly take off, flying around randomly.

Overall it's pretty good, and the future is promising, but the writing still needs to be improved.

It feels okay so far!