I Transmigrated into a Game World, but Started as a Lizard

The story is good, and the worldview is okay, but too many personal thoughts and descriptions of the author are inserted, and there are too many spoilers, which leads to a serious loss of expectation and sense of substitution. In fact, it can be explained and revealed slowly at the end of the plot. There are some places in the story description that are seriously under-described, such as the causes and consequences. Why is this happening? You have to read the author's own explanation later. This is not good. You can describe it carefully in the story. Of course, except for these aspects, other places can be said to be advantages. Of course, people who can accept PC narration can also read it. I can't adapt to it. Goodbye, come on, author [Like]

The themes raised through crowdfunding are really good The settings of the two-headed lizard and the world are good But after about 50 chapters, I didn't want to read anymore (the reason for not wanting to read is just my personal opinion and has nothing to do with the author's writing level) There are too many PSs and there is nothing exciting in the later part. The only interesting thing in the early stage is the part where the elf Tangsa realizes that he is now a lizard. It becomes very boring later on and the despair of change. Emmm. Maybe it is the reason for crowdfunding or the different pleasures of each person? When I first read it, the setting of the two-headed lizard and the world was very attractive, but later on, the transformation was shaky, and Liya cheated all the way in the fight, and there was no interaction after that. Maybe the author's transformation was to a lizard instead of a gender change? I used the skills of an astrologer to watch a movie with supplementary settings and a lot of supporting characters. Maybe what I wanted to see more was the daily life between the two protagonists, so I fast-forwarded for a while, but because it was crowdfunding, there were many supporting characters' stories. It's not that the stories of the supporting characters are not good, but I just didn't see what I wanted to see. The stickiness between the two protagonists and the passionate battle or the growth of the protagonist. The fun after the players come. The subject matter is very good. Good luck to the author.

The protagonist is portrayed as too weak. The impression he has in my mind now is that of a weak and arrogant high-level intellectual. So far, I can't see the slightest bit of fighting power of the protagonist. At a glance, I feel like he died of happiness. He was born in sorrow and died in happiness. Or is it because this place is too fairy tale? The only threat comes from the hyenas. There is no threat from the indigenous people, not even Vasolya. I don't see the hope that the protagonist will become stronger. Is it possible to completely abandon the previous life and become a complete indigenous magic scholar? Are all the insights and knowledge in his mind for reading magic books? In the final analysis, the protagonist is just a player, a player who has abandoned all his knowledge/strategy/sight/force. In this book, even any ancient general is more useful than the protagonist. Vasolya raised him too well. If it continues like this, the day Vasolya realizes that they are not the same person, it will be the death anniversary of the protagonist. Born in sorrow, died in happiness. The previous life could barely be regarded as sorrow, but the present life is truly peaceful.

How can I put it this way? It's a very good novel with a relatively complete worldview. The shortcoming is that the author will only comment on some settings. The protagonist's personality is a little bad in the early stage, but becomes a little more normal in the later stage, but I surprisingly like the growth type. Moreover, there are so many interactions between the author and the perpetrators that it would fill several chapters. I also like some of the character descriptions, such as the elf teacher. You don't know how happy I am when Nao Deng, the author, gives strength to the protagonist. In the past, if I felt a little dissatisfied while reading a novel, I would just scold it. However, after I tried to write a novel, I realized how difficult it is for authors. So now when I read such novels, it's like finding gold in shit. Finally, I hope that the author can write the most perfect novel in his mind without being affected by the opinions of a small group of people, which is the so-called survivor bias.

So far, it's okay. I kind of hope that the author will kill the elves that have no value. Creatures that have no effect have no value in survival at all. This elf was really a bit queasy when I watched it. But whether it should be written or not depends on the author's wishes. I'm just giving an opinion.

Love to look good! If I draw a picture of the protagonist and it doesn't look good, I can slap him hard! The front is very good, it suits my taste But After the protagonist obtains a profession, too many characters are added in a short period of time, which makes readers very confused. The most uncomfortable thing is that there are too many PS! ! ! It seems that I want readers to understand more clearly and keeps adding PS explanations. But part of the PS is more confusing. In addition, as Hemingway said about the iceberg theory, it will be much better to read without explaining everything clearly. All in all! Even though it's a bit toxic, it's still NICE! Because the protagonist is really too much, too much to my liking! ! ! !

It looks good, although I can't understand it because of the large number of author's PS and the long timeline, but the characters are well drawn and the world view is complete. I also like this setting, especially the Vasso Lizard. And willing to ask Sarafa and Vasolya to have some sparks of love [laughing evilly]

I felt that the story was very good, but the writing was messy. Vadasi and Ferrari are obviously the protagonists, but in the next few dozen chapters they have very few scenes. I understand that the author wants to write about many characters, but can you not leave the protagonist alone? (When you have a new love, you forget about the old love, right? QAQ) There are other books that center on the protagonist and push the plot out bit by bit. This book will drag you out once you start writing the plot. It leaves absolutely no room for imagination. Finally, I originally thought that the main plot was for the protagonist to explore ways to save the world, become stronger along the way, and then prevent the destruction of the world. As I was reading it, I suddenly realized that this article suddenly deteriorated and turned into a casual sweet article. Vadasi was the one who finally destroyed the world + was invincible + doted on "himself" (Ferrari). Ferrari can change the past + predict the future + complete tasks and get rewards. So, to save the world, just let Ferrari hold Vadaci back. Abyss Rift can be killed in the game line, and it is nothing. So what is the main line? Save the sages? Although Ferrari doesn't know the reason why Vadasi became [desperate], he has been looking for a solution. But the author said that [Despair] is just a title and has no impact on the world. I was confused when I saw it.

This protagonist is really useless and has no self-awareness. Moreover, the author's layout always adds a lot of brackets and PS to the article, which makes people look messy and affects the perception. Otherwise, it should be posted in the comment area. To be honest, when the main force is separated, the interest is much less, and it is almost the same as other books. Maybe it's because I prefer the "fighting, fun!" Or "quiet years are good" style. There are fewer fighting scenes, and after the protagonist is separated, it feels less interesting.

The plot looks good. But it's a bit uncomfortable to read. The author doesn't throw out settings in the plot, but says in PS that this point is really relevant. If this continues, it will become a collection of settings. Also, can the author's comments about PS comments not be placed in the main text? Wouldn't it be better to put content that has nothing to do with the main text in the comment area?