Honkai: Star Rail: I’m Just an Ordinary Clerk

Although I haven't watched it for long, and I haven't had an in-depth understanding, I just think from my current point of view, it was poisonous in the early stage. I didn't watch it later, but judging from other people's comments, it is better than now. This is normal, but I really want to say that the contract of betrayal may not be anything to others, but it is a very poisonous point to me. I can even stand the white snake, but this It's hard to accept a contract of betrayal (maybe due to my personal personality, if you can't get it, please leave). The growth type can understand it but it's hard to accept it. In fact, you can change the description a little and don't say it so harshly. But people like me, what they want is someone with a clear mind, so just don't look at it. This is just my personal opinion. If you think your idea is more correct, please look elsewhere.

It's very nice and sweet\(//∇//)\The characters are well described, but I like to read the main plot and hope it can be written faster (dog head) Cheers for you! ! ! ! ! ! ☆ * . ☆ . ∧_∧∩* ☆ * ☆ (∀)/ . . ⊂ ノ* ☆ ☆ * (つ ノ .☆ (ノ The author believes me, writing that the protagonist endorses Soda Bean Juice will definitely make the author popular. Will you say another sentence about drinking when the time comes? If the soda bean juice is so sweet, you will be invincible [laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

Aha means you are having so much fun [laughs evilly] The language and writing style used in the novel are very beautiful, and it is smooth and enjoyable to read. The words are just right and can accurately express the emotion the author wants to convey. Aha: It's so much fun (doge)

The writing is in good condition, and the author's mental state is stable (currently doubtful). I read it in one sitting and said it was very satisfying.

The author actively interacts with readers in the group and jointly decides on some content. The writing style is also very good, and the emotional drama is well described. Moreover, it is not a cool novel, but a slow-burning novel.

Remember to add more [smile][smile][smile] As a heroine, Esta is quite rare as a single heroine, and the writing is not bad.

Generally speaking, this book is okay. It is the only book I have seen so far that has Esta as the heroine. It may look a little bit toxic in some parts at the beginning, but the writing in the back is okay. And generally speaking, the author is still making continuous progress. It is much better than what he wrote at the beginning. I hope the author can write better and better, and don't forget to write about the sword.

It's still very good, the plot is very thoughtful, and the protagonist and Xingqiong are set up. I hope that in the future the plot can be polished more, new ideas added, and not too rigidly stuck to the original plot. The writing style is a bit lacking. There seems to be nothing amazing about the whole article. I hope that the writing can be more gorgeous and elegant in the future.

The book is very good. Keep up the good work!

The author is rewarded with five stars for his good life