After the System Disappeared, I Got Together with My Love Rival

I'm very interested in this kind of love rival turning into a lover. But because of this setting. I felt very uncomfortable reading the first ten chapters. Part of it was skipped. It looks great coming out of System 101. There is a lot of sexual tension between the two of them. . They are also very gentle and strong at heart, licking each other's past. They are the perfect match. Our Qi Xia is also very powerful and has regained control of our body. The author also portrayed Qi Xia very well. He is a very ordinary person. He is not a good person, but he is not particularly bad either. We, Ye Qin, are also two ignorant babies. We like each other and want to be together. All young couples 99 [send heart]

Let me ask you, foreign persimmon, why don't you recommend this book? Tell me, look in my eyes! Why! I like the fierce rush of the two powers! These two people are really good at fighting. I am particularly cute about this. How can I put it that way? It feels like fighting and fighting... (No) The characters are very three-dimensional and not black and white. What's surprising to me is that the teacher's view of love is conveyed very well. I haven't seen a healthy view of love here for a long time. In the early stage, I may feel that the plot is too cumbersome. But it was actually laying the foundation for the future. At that time, it was very exciting for the two people to fight against each other secretly. The old enemy is the old enemy... You don't have to mind the close interaction with the villain in the early stage, because (minor spoiler) it all depends on the favorability gained by the plug-in. After being purified, there is no real emotion left, and Chocolate (Geng) almost collapsed with one shot.

It's really super pretty! Both of them have good mouths and IQs, they are a little bit groupy but they are really good-looking. Although the threesome was a bit shocking to me in the early stage, everything is for a reason! Don't give up! Teacher Xu is really a very good and guiding lover. He taught Mr. Lei how to love. He gave Mr. Lei a sense of security without hesitation. Mr. Lei also really respects every choice of his lover. Although his past experience did not teach him how to love and what love is, the moment he fell in love with Teacher Xu, all his actions would be driven by love.

Why is the score so low? The little girl has already finished her second brush. Love rivals (forced) become lovers, and the two of them go from being like pre-set characters at the beginning to becoming themselves, just like the paper figures come to life and start their own lives. The author's portrayal was at the same time as the two men breaking free from their restraints, allowing me to see the joys, sorrows and joys behind breaking away from the framework of a domineering male protagonist and a gentle second male protagonist who compete tit-for-tat for the "protagonist". The emotional line between the two parties from discovering "something is wrong" and becoming allies, to being attracted by the core of the other party beyond the "set", and gradually falling in love with each other, is very clear. The plot is very powerful in shaping each character. The "protagonist" is not just for profit, but also has the so-called "true love" at the beginning. The whole novel is very well completed, and it is very smooth to read. It is really enjoyable to read it without any lag. It's very beautiful, why can't the rating go up? [Petrochemical] I've already finished it, and I'm looking forward to the follow-up episode [Sending Hearts]

The writing is quite good, and the complete plot design of the whole story is also very interesting. Maybe the story is too complete and logically clear, and it does not meet the taste of most readers of the Tomato platform. I think the score is not high, maybe because people are used to fast food, and they don't have the patience to wait for a dish that you made using eighteen processes. But this book is really well written. The writing is online and the process is explained from beginning to end. It is a story that is told step by step.

The pull between the two when they are not together makes me, a lover of both strong characters, ecstatic. I love the characters of Mr. Lei and Teacher Xu so much. The author really writes it well. The family of three is so warm😘😘😘 It's so sweet (real person)

Wow, wow, how do you rate this novel? I actually rarely read novels (for me, this length is really considered a novel), especially the novels of Tomato. Most of them are good in the early stage, but a little weak in the later stage. This article is good from beginning to end (PS the first dozen chapters may be a bit frustrating? I feel that the low score may be that some readers have not survived these chapters). The relationship between the two male protagonists, the daily life of raising cubs, and the shaping of other characters are all online! Maybe I'm not used to the author's narrative techniques, and sometimes I feel a little confused, but are the flaws fair? No matter, it's really good-looking. You must try it. If you feel bored at the beginning, just skip it. The rest is really fun! !

It's beautiful, and the characters are really delicious! ! ! Maybe some characters are controversial but! ! ! It is precisely because of this complex human nature that people can feel the tenderness and happiness of the ending even more! ! ! ! Super super strong pile! ! !

Very good, there are a bit too many sub-CPs, and they all seem to be in the first part of the year. I only watched the main CP in the second part of the year. I don't like the first part of the year. I felt a little uncomfortable watching this, so I reluctantly finished it with the mentality that it was almost finished. ,, But it's also very good. (˘̩̩̩ε˘̩ƪ)❤️Ww

The shaping of both sides of CP is very touching, a typical pairing of two powerful characters. I think the most exciting part of the story is when Lei and Xu work together to solve the dual crisis of the system and the company. The kind of fighting side by side relying on themselves and each other touches me very much. However, the development of the story in the early stage was slow. The influence of the time traveler and the system began to be eliminated in Chapter 30. Lei and Xu Cai communicated with each other about half way through the total chapter, and the pace picked up later. There is a lot of blank space in the ending of the sub-CP, but you can guess it after reading the main text. Some are happy and some are regretful. It depends on the reader's interest. There are entertainment industry elements and real-life background, but maybe the story development is more attractive to me, and there is almost no sense of creativity.