Subway: Merchant Is Just One of My Many Identities

Overall it's alright. I usually skip the scenes set in the real world, so it's watchable.

Does Tomato have any other Metro fanfiction? I finished the Metro series around Chinese New Year and then came looking for fanfiction, but I couldn't find any good ones. This book is not bad, but unfortunately it has too few words.

The author hopes to gradually build a multinational corporation, acquire advanced technology from other game and film worlds, and establish a private army, such as the formidable army in Blackwatch.

One of the few good subway-themed fanfictions on Tomato Bookstore 😋👍

The protagonist should establish power towards the Red Line and the Fourth Kingdom, or subdue the Rangers, expand their business, and create new glories.

I followed them all the way from next door, using two phones: one old version of Tomato (which could show the recommendation list), and one new version that could post pictures. I only found out I switched to Tomato by seeing the recommendation list on the old version.

That's great; creative designs for subway stations are quite rare. Further discussion reveals that only the subway scene and the goods trading section are somewhat interesting; the female lead's romantic storyline and the protagonist's family background are completely uninteresting, and the portrayal of female characters feels abrupt.

It's well-written, with no logical errors or plot holes, and the main storyline of the subway is progressing smoothly.

Not bad, but author, when are you going to give the protagonist some absolutely loyal bodyguards? Otherwise, if he's always alone, people will start to feel something's off.

The recreation is quite good, but the main character's screen time is only about 60%.