Star Rail Simulation: The Forgotten Past

I really don't know it until I see it, and I'm shocked when I see it. This book is the best of all the fanfics I have ever read. It can be said to be a masterpiece. I sincerely recommend this book. There are several points worthy of praise: 1. The plot is contagious and deeply touching, the plot is coherent and smooth, and the characters are three-dimensional, as if they are alive. 2. The author's writing style is also good, with appropriate wording and exquisite narrative techniques. 3. The author used a few words in the game and boldly imagined to construct the plot of this scene. Although the logic is not rigorous, he has also put in real effort. Finally, I hope the author will not mess up the work, otherwise I will send you the razor blade [smile]

Good book, exquisite writing style. Of all the Bengtie fanfics I've read, this is the only one that made me cry! ! ! ! [Almost crying] Recommended: "Kafka" is best read late at night

After watching it for a long time, I must be too sensitive in my heart. I couldn't stand it anymore in the early stages. I just wanted to see a good ending as soon as possible. Even if they were separated in the end, I also wanted to see them see each other for the last time. Unfortunately, this is probably a sad story, right? The best decision I made at night was to read this book, because it really affected me and was imprinted in my mind. The worst decision was to read it. Its story was not suitable for me... It is a good book, but until the plot I want to read comes out, I should keep it. Come on, don't stop.

It's not bad, the writing is delicate, but the transition after the simulation is not very good, which makes the two simulations disconnected and feels like reading prose. I feel like the author has not written an outline or the outline is not detailed. I have written two books before. I would like to give you some suggestions. 1. While the character design is still out, find some suitable and philosophical wallpapers to perfect the character. 2. If you want to increase reading, you need to create a small climax. For example, if you update ten chapters a day, you need to create the first half of a small climax in these ten chapters. The last chapter of the update will be snapped. If you want to see the follow-up, you can only wait for the next chapter, which is called broken chapter. (Don't break it too much, otherwise I will send you the blade(▼plate▼#)) 3. Regret is "Maybe the destiny only allows us to meet each other, but not to be together forever." And "I have already plunged into a pool of blood with both feet. If I don't move forward in blood, the way back will be equally boring." Regret is called regret because it cannot be undone. There is no need to deliberately pursue a happy ending and affect the progress of the plot (knife, I want a knife) 4. It is best if this book has no heroine, or only one heroine, not multiple heroines (unless you consider yandere) 5. Intersperse some funny plots and jokes in daily life, or sprinkle more sugar to prepare for the knife, just like Beng Beng Beng ✧(≖ ◡ ≖✿) In the end, I originally wanted to give you four stars, but I saw that you were making your debut, so I gave you five stars. I wish you will get better and better at writing books in the future.

The author has a good grasp of the reader's emotions (it makes my stomach hurt when I read it), but the author is not too detailed about the protagonist's emotions. This is mainly based on the fact that the protagonist does not have much emotional description of people other than the heroine (in fact, there are not many people). The author can decide whether to fast or slow based on some plots. (If you are not afraid of being stabbed in the back, it is better to write according to your own mood.) I have read the author's first two books This book is still a big improvement compared to the first two books. I hope the author can stick to it. In the first two books, it can be seen that the author wants to recruit more readers. But in this software, the readers are different. You may be scolded for fast-paced writing, and others will be scolded for slow-paced writing. So don't care too much about other people's opinions. In my personal opinion, author, your writing is considered very good in this software. If you are willing to stick to it, there should not be too few readers. Also, I hope you, the author, can continue writing happily (you'd better give me two more chapters every day, otherwise I'll look for you in the middle of the night) Punish the author to become a cat lady

I think simulation should be like this. I think it is the most beautiful simulation I have seen so far. The protagonist looks like a human being like this. How can other things be written like this? My friend, you are really untainted in the mud. Come on, come on, come on!

Hi hi hi, overall it's pretty good. There are just too many knives, buddy, you wouldn't combine The Lost City of Wild Beasts with MiHoYo, would you? How can a book be so sharp? And the setting of this system makes me feel quite novel, and I can also complain about the protagonist. Pretty good, keep up the good work.

(Personal opinion) The author's introduction describes the differences between Xi'er and Fu Xuan, but in fact every paragraph is quite good. The main reason is that the author has a good grasp of details. It is easy to exaggerate the atmosphere when writing about this kind of subject matter. Some chapters really made me unable to hold my breath. I think the author will definitely achieve better results if he decides on the outline before writing on this subject. The ending at the end of the main text is very hasty, and the extra chapter doesn't explain many details. In the early stage, I thought I wanted to leave this part blank, but in the end, I gave some extras and opened a few short stories in several timelines. It would be so beautiful if I could finish it here.

Now that I have read Chapter 48, it is generally good. The character of the protagonist is also quite good and not so... Outrageous. Secondly, the content in the simulation is also written in quite detail, but it is better to compress it. For example, 20 to 30 chapters are enough for a simulation. Too many simulation chapters will not be good for the senses. I will give it a four-star rating now. I will come back and make changes after Xi'er's simulation is completed to see how it goes [Chigua] I don't know if it's a foreshadowing or something. Lao Yang knows the protagonist, and he also said that he can be called the protagonist's father. The protagonist's life experience from the world of Beng 3 is also a mystery. I don't know if it will be revealed in the follow-up [Chigua][Chigua]

I am a fan of the author's old books. From the first book to the current one, the writing style is still as good as ever and the plot is also very interesting, but I always feel that something is weird. The same is true for the first Genshin Impact, but the author's books are really good to read. Come on!