Peach and Poplar, Drunk on Spring Breeze

First of all, I would like to thank the author for spending a lot of time to bring Guofu, and it is also my favorite Guofu article after the original work. I don't like to watch rebirth and time travel. I can't write the feeling of the original work and I waver in Yang Guo's writing, weighing kindness and love. This book avoids it. In the opening chapter, Yelu Qi returns to Meng, and Xiao Longnu returns to Yaotai. There are grievances and grievances, but there is no attempt to discredit any of them. After sixteen years of writing, both Guo Fu and Guo Fu have grown up in their own way. The author writes Guo Fu very well. It is obvious that the author has read the original work and is not a fan of the drama. There is no filter of the TV series. Let's talk about the advantages first. Each character has a distinct personality and Guo Fu's portrayal is great👍🏻I personally think that the second volume is better than the first volume. I read it through and found that there was no strong sense of excitement or conflict. It was a simple story with good writing and no flaws. Overall, it was very good. The author said it is he, you can look forward to it

Once I see an article with profound writing skills in Tomato, I will cherish it and read it carefully. When I find a blank page in 🍅 that I want to read but can't find, I will not only cherish it! I have to cry [crying] [crying] [crying] Do you know how deeply regretful the relationship between master and apprentice was after Shen Diao Yuan Guofu CP was complained by readers? Do you know the meaning of the old man deliberately leaving blank in Yitian after his melon was forcibly twisted? Today, the blank space was filled by the author in the most reasonable way. Thank you to the author! D book friends who are passing by, don't blame the author for his whims, this is a lucky reward! I can't believe you didn't notice that the old man left so many introductions! Why does Guo Xiang hate her sister whenever she mentions it? That's jealousy! Why would I rather wander around than go back to Xiangyang to help my parents protect the city? This is an egoist who doesn't love her parents and the people. She doesn't want to face her sister and even complains about her parents' favoritism! I have argued for thousands of times that Guo Fu is Yang Guo's eternal white moonlight, and Yang Guo is the unspeakable lovesickness tears in Guo Fu's heart. Thanks to the author, this is the real story of the Condor Heroes and the Lost World👍

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh picking up my knees! ! ! ! It really feels like it connects the gap between Shendiao and Yitian. It adds a lot of foreshadowing and is not obtrusive. It is really not easy to see such a well-written and reasonable plot in Tomato. Wow, wow, wow, I will support you, author... I can't bear to finish reading [I'm about to cry] Never mind 99!

Guo Fu is very well written. Yang Guo and Guo Fu's emotional line is developed step by step. In the early stage, Yang Guo was a bit abused. The author is obviously a true love heroine. The emotional lines are written very delicately and the writing skills are very good. I like this kind of slow writing very much, hahaha, it seems like a kind of enjoyment. The perspective of Yang Guo's thoughts is simply amazing, which shocked me so much that no one commented on it. I saw someone commented that the early writing of Guo Fu was too detailed, skipping a few chapters in the beginning, and then quietly making up for it once it was even.

Thank you to the author for bringing such a beautiful piece of Guofu. You can easily find poems, lyrics, and poems. The writing is brilliant and the descriptions are vivid. Even the minor supporting roles are very vivid. The author's writing style is really delicate. This is the full text of Guofu. It is really rare that each character is fully developed, elegant and vulgar. , Each character has a distinct personality, and in The Legend of Yitian Slaying the Dragon, I really have no regrets in my life. The author really put his heart into it 👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻, especially the last three chapters when Xiangyang City was destroyed. No wonder the author said it was uncomfortable to write. It is the most sadistic in the whole novel. It has a sense of history. I saw someone commenting on the abuse of Yang Guo, but I didn't think it was abuse. Guo Fu dared to love, understood love, and knew how to love. They both firmly chose each other and protected each other together. I took advantage of the Spring Festival to read like crazy. For me, Guofu is the perfect one. Guofu is the terminator. Thank you very much to the author! ! !

I am a fan of Fu, and the author is a fan of Fu, so I still read this article. The reason is very simple. This book has no bloody drama. All the Yingying and Yanyan around the two people were cut off by the author, which is great. Writing about Yang Long and Qi Fu in Guo Fu is simply more disgusting than eating noodles with nostrils. This article has no poisonous points. It directly writes the story of Guo Fu and Qi Fu, as plain as water. I still like to read fast-paced and refreshing novels, and I have always wanted the author to write refreshing novels [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying], but to be honest, no one wants to write the original novel and then connect it to Yitian's Guofu. They just write about rebirth and time travel and then start to mess with it. This is why I have never given up on writing. From the end of the original work, the Tomb-Sweeping Day, to the destruction of Xiangyang City, the story slowly unfolds in a short time. I write it bit by bit, and the relationship comes true step by step. This article does it. The writing of Yang Guo in the early stage was too frustrating. Although it is not a domineering force in my mind, it does match the character of the original work sixteen years later. The whole text is about Guo Fu's growth line, but it is a bit exaggerated about Guo Fu. There is something to say, the writing is good and antique. Almost everything in "The Legend of Heaven and the Dragon Slayer" is connected. At the end, Huang Rong wrote a final letter to Fumei and cried to death. At the end, Yeluqi knelt down and shouted that Fumei was beaten by Yang Guo. It was really satisfying. The Last Extinction Jianghu should be said to be the best read in the whole text, hahaha, you can read the text directly to the finale, saving you the process [laughing]

The writing style is good, and the literary skills are top-notch among Tomatoes. It's just that the details are not appropriate. There are lengthy descriptions of scenery, food, etc. One chapter describes the chess game and has several pages. If the above categories are appropriately shortened, the writing will be smoother.

The distinctive or obscure character traits in the original work are well expressed in this article. Guo Fu has a complete growth line, and Yang Guo's early stage is consistent with the original work, with protection and competition. All other characters are consistent with the original work. What is worthy of special mention is the author's solid and profound writing skills. There are both concise and lively short sentences that the author can outline a lifelike picture with just a few strokes, and there are also beautiful and delicate long sentences. After the wedding, Guo Fu is warm and touching, and every chapter is full of surprises and touches. Of course, gold is never pure, and this article is not perfect. The connection of some plots seems a bit stiff, and the rhythm control of some content can be optimized. I really like the couple in it. From the early stage of getting to know each other to the later stage of staying together, the two are stationed in Xiangyang. They have a long love for their children and the righteousness of their family and country. It is connected with the story of Heaven and Dragon Slaying. The latest chapter is Heaven and Dragon Slaying. The only regret I feel is that it didn't write about Little Dragon Girl. I also wanted to see Yang Guo's battle of wits and courage with Little Dragon Girl after descending from Huashan Mountain, and how Yang Guo finally slayed the dragon. There is only one sentence in the article that mentions Little Dragon Girl, hahahaha, I am not a fan of the drama. I wonder if the author is willing to write a side story about dragon slaying. I really want to read it. The perspective of Guo Fu in this article is very obviously biased towards Guo Fu. It can be said that Guo Fu is capable of literary and military skills, and she is indeed the world-famous Miss Guo. I think Guo Fu is still exaggerated and Yang Guo is underestimated. The author said that the ending will be the destruction of Xiangyang City, so I hope it will not be tortured. Let's comment first and wait for the ending to see how it goes.

I have read several books, but this one is the one that suits me the most [Shy] The whole story is almost free of abuse. Except for the ending, I was eating candy in the early stages. The ending brought me back to reality. After all, Xiangyang City cannot be defended [I almost cried] I vaguely remember watching The Legend of the Condor Heroes when I was a child. My parents always talked about Fu. I argued with them at that time and didn't understand where the point was. Looking back now, it turns out that they understood it a long time ago. I felt that I was so naive before [facepalm]

The original story of Xiang Guofu, the ending of Xiangyang city is destroyed, Guo Fu is in trouble, it's good to watch The ending is nice and satisfying.