Tomb Raiding: What to Do When Your Clients Are Always a Handful

It's not a nanny story about following the protagonist as a nanny, nor is it the kind of story where someone with a little bit of ability can forcibly insert themselves into the main plot. There are suspicions, pulls, and ambiguities, but the writing is actually pretty good. You can use it appropriately in daily life, and the interaction with the system is actually quite fun. It doesn't matter as long as it doesn't take up a lot of space. It also helps to enrich the character. If the protagonist in the whole story has no daily tasks to do, he will wait for the protagonist to follow him into another tomb after going to one tomb. That's no different from alternative nanny writing. There are eight out of ten Tomato Tomb Raiders and Nanny books. . I'm tired of watching it. The restoration of the characters in this book is not to say how good it is. But at least it looks comfortable. Come on.

I like it very much and the setting is very interesting! The main character is a bit silly and cute! He is powerful, and what he wants has no conflict of interest with the original protagonist group. Even if he can play with the protagonist group on the side, he can also live well by himself! I like this kind of thing, it's not like I can't live without the protagonist group! He has a mysterious past, unknown origins, good skills, powerful strength, and good looks! As an NPC who came to the world of tomb robbers, his body is also different from that of a normal person. You can already expect the pleasant fake knife and the imagined scene later. I like this kind of beauty, strong and miserable, miserable or disguised. Whether it is a powerful mysterious guest or a miserable little pitiful one, it is a delicious thing! ! !

The writing is nice and the protagonist talks to the system quite cutely. However, I felt that the whole book did not highlight the protagonist's ability. I didn't write about the protagonist's paper-tying ability. I hope it can be added later.

Give a long review ~ four stars to prevent the book from crashing. I've read a lot of fan fiction, and it's a mix of good and bad, and this book is one of the best-written ones I've ever read. From my personal point of view (for reference only) I am a hardcore person, and I read fandoms mainly for the cp. In terms of the atmosphere alone, this book has already won a lot of articles. The emotional line is not awkward and blunt. It is a slow and steady process from purposeful approach to uncontrollable concern. Although the chapter is not long, the author has a good grasp of this point, and there is no sudden emotional development. The one who has the most contact with the protagonist in the article is Heixiazi. I think the character's emotions are pretty good (although the two are still in a trial and error situation at the moment). At present, there is nothing surprising in this aspect. Please keep this pace ꒰ *•ɷ•* ꒱. Then there's the setting. It's the first time I've seen this kind of setting. It's quite novel. From the infinite flow to the world of stolen pens, I tried my best to polish it so that it's not a noob and it's not exactly Long Aotian. A little bit of growth flow will not make people feel anxious because of the long growth path of the protagonist. The relationship between the protagonist and the system is very loving, and it warms the heart of everyone watching it. But chatting between two people might feel awkward. And I think after all, the protagonist's predecessor was Mugenliu, and he must have seen a lot of things, but he was too optimistic in the article? I think proper construction of the dark side will make it more three-dimensional. I looked through the comments and found that someone said that we should focus more on the plot? In fact, this fanfic is more of an entertainment nature, and after all, I don't want to read the original text again when I read it. In addition, the plot points are described very well every time. I think this is not a big problem. Moreover, the plot of this fanfic is mainly about crows seeking a living, and their bodies are getting better and better through accumulated experience. This is actually the progress of the main plot. But it does feel a little delayed sometimes? Keep up the good work, because I'm looking forward to the next plot~ Finally, baby, you must take supplements and stop reading. I am exhausted.

It's pretty good to watch, but I'm not that group-favorite. In fact, I really want to see the protagonist pretending to be cool. There are a lot of scenes with the blind man, so I'm going to blame the blind man and the protagonist. I'm curious, isn't the protagonist the owner of a paper-making shop? So why isn't there that kind of derivative skill?

It's quite interesting, and there are basically no areas that hit my mark. It's not a nanny story, it's not a story about systematic human trafficking and host abuse, and it's not a love at first sight (love at first sight) story.

The teacher's writing is very good. Both Xiaoji and the baby Crow Crow are very cute. The interaction between one person and one person makes me feel soft. I really like that the protagonist does not follow the protagonist group all the time, but has his own things to do, and the teacher updates very frequently. I originally wanted to wait until the tie is tied before writing a review, but it is so good that I can't help but post it first. Come on, teacher, and look forward to the follow-up development [Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts]

Baby, you are a good fighter. I like to see the interaction between the protagonist and the system. I hope the author will give you a lot of support [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

Looks good!😍Speaking of which, can the protagonist return to Infinite Flow and get some colleagues? I'm very curious about the types of colleagues, and the time in the grass basin, are they the fragments of the protagonist's colleagues? When will the protagonist change the bones? (There are a lot of questions, let's go back to the review time) The logic is clear, the structure is complete, the content is very attractive, and it makes people curious. Well... Blind is very emotional and his expressions are on point. I will give him extra money (performance fee) and hope that the two centenarians can get along well with the protagonist. The writing is very good and the little sacrifice is also very cute. I am very curious about what the purple snake looks like. It should be very beautiful, right? Should the founder of the paper shop have a follow-up relationship with the crow? I'm very curious. Ahem, let's go back to the review time. Hmm... The content is vivid and vivid, the characters are three-dimensional, rich and full, Xiannian is really... He can't be OOC no matter what he does [face covering] [laughing evilly]

Although some of the words are not fluent, the plot and writing style are still very good and attractive, and the protagonist's character is not too interesting. You can try it in the book world [laughs]