After Failing My Tribulation, I Was Reborn in a Martial Arts World

Although it hasn't been read by many and the reviews aren't great, this kind of slow-burn, non-satisfying cultivation novel is destined to have a limited audience. Many might not like the protagonist's detached and indifferent personality, but for those who enjoy this type of cultivation novel, it's still a very good book.

I met a 30-year-old woman online. We chatted for over half a year and got along very well. Today, she suggested meeting up. I hesitated, saying that she had a family and it didn't feel right, but she said it was fine and we could just be friends. So I agreed and asked for her photos. She looked quite pretty. She lived not far from my city, and we arranged to meet at a bubble tea shop.

Very good. Cultivating immortality should be natural and unrestrained, unlike some fantasy novels where people are quick to kill and settle scores. It's about being unburdened by worldly affairs, uninvolved in karma, observing the world without leaving a trace of dust, carefree and at ease. Fighting and killing are due to too much karmic entanglement, lacking any intention of tranquility and non-action.

It looks good so far, and I'm looking forward to the later parts. I think the author could draw inspiration from "Eternal Wandering" and "Fantasy: Starting as a Blind Man, Beginning with Erhu Playing (A Fallen Journey in the Martial World)" in terms of how they portray the protagonist's personality and image. Of course, they have their own outlines, and it's best to write it according to the author's own wishes. This is just a suggestion (please don't criticize if you disagree 🍉).

In his past life, he was a ruthless killer; in this life, he saves lives and heals the wounded.

So far, the protagonist seems quite low-key, with few instances of him feigning weakness to deceive others, and no harem. I think it's still worth reading. I suggest writing more about the protagonist's extraordinary encounters, like in the Burial Valley. I believe the Tianyi Sect might need cultivation resources from the protagonist; otherwise, they wouldn't have so many experts lurking in the Burial Valley. The martial arts world and Jianghu of mortals are just a joke to cultivators.

Chapter 50 so far is pretty good, except for the protagonist's somewhat unpredictable personality, being both righteous and evil. I'll give it five stars as encouragement.

It has some minor flaws, but it's still more interesting than some mindlessly high-scoring ones 🥺🥺 But why is the rating only 6.6? [Staring][staring] It got boring after that, so I quit.

It's good... Although it's not a wish-fulfillment story, it's definitely an invincible story. It's not about the protagonist pretending to be weak to outsmart others; it's more like the author is too lazy to pretend, just doing whatever they want. The slice-of-life scenes are well-written. It's just that there aren't enough of them...

I want to read stories where I don't eat beef, and not stories where the main character is an old man turned nanny.