Anime Crossover: Even a Couch Potato Can Have Dreams

The biggest bacterium among bacteria: Hello "Author Bacteria"! The following are my personal suggestions for this book (in my personal opinion). I think the protagonist can lose weight after dozens of chapters, and the emotional foundation is almost laid. It's time to write a sweet harem love! It's almost 300 chapters and there is no relevant information about weight loss success. I'm going to raise books for my children.

Fortunately, I can continue to listen to it. When it comes to Jiaxi, who is the ancestor of the protagonist? If such a character is not killed in one shot, why would he take it home? If such a character does not change, it will cause a lot of trouble in the future, and the protagonist will be wiped out, or the protagonist will be misunderstood by the female protagonists in the variety show as a lolicon. This is my opinion. Don't worry about it.

The character interactions are good, and that's about it. The pace of the plot is too slow, and most people should be able to feel it. There are two days on the weekend, one plot a day, and a plot of more than ten chapters. The multiplayer plot can reach twenty or thirty chapters, and I have to write it every weekend. Based on the above, more problems have arisen, and the main attraction of losing weight has been seriously weakened. It has existed in the form of a fat house for more than 300 chapters, basically discarding this attraction. The female character is not attracted by any charisma at all. In other words, the protagonist, a pig man, has no charisma at all. It all depends on system skills and the identity created by copywriting. Since each character's plot is slightly longer, some characters don't appear much. Yukino hasn't appeared in seventy or eighty chapters. So someone asked, Yukino already has a lot of plots. Is there any character who is more reliable than him? Some brothers, some. Chika Fujiwara who has over 100 chapters, the former prison king Eri, and our prison boss Kaki, are they too much to even mention? Brothers who want to eat meat may die in this life. The author has been suppressed by Shen He's divine power all year round, and he has set up the protagonist who wants to open a harem. He will not touch it unless everyone's favorability is increased. So brothers, you're in luck, you can see the fat house who can't be replaced at all use the power of the system to conquer your favorite anime characters😄 Still a mess, I really thank the author, Akaashi has flavor.

Overall, the writing is good. I like the story of the protagonist starting from being fat and getting better step by step. One point was deducted because there were characters from the demon world that were very inconsistent with the daily drama, and it was a drama that I had not watched, which affected the perception. Personally, I suggest that the author should write more characters from popular dramas. I don't know how you would feel when you see characters from dramas you haven't watched appear in fanfics. Anyway, I will skip them... Personally, I think that the presence of characters that readers don't know about in the novel greatly affects the sense of immersion for fans. This is why most authors like to write about popular characters.

It is not impetuous and is very warm in daily life. Everyone's personality is well described. It is also one of the most brilliant books among all the comics I have read. It has jokes and can play jokes. Every interesting story is not too abrupt [please update] The front looks good, don't keep up to date, the back is full of rubbish [angry]

The interaction between the protagonist, Eiri and her daughter, and Yukinoshita are well written. It's a pity that I don't know Kahi. I haven't watched Kahi much since Kahi appeared. Moreover, the corruption system at the beginning is completely offline. It's a pity.

It's pretty good. The male protagonist is fat and has a low head, which makes it easy to remember. To be honest, those movies where the male protagonist is handsome as hell are unimpressive and stereotyped, but this one doesn't. The daily writing is also very good, the system is downplayed and not too watery [Like]

The real gold dug out of the pile of tomato shit is that the author has good control over the personality of each character, and the writing and control of daily rhythm are also very good. It doesn't have the kind of invincibility of the protagonist right from the beginning, but it writes the warm and daily life of a variety comic that I want to watch. The encounters with various heroines are not so abrupt, and the writing is very reasonable. This is really a big plus. Also, it took me so long to think of rating it. And the last thing I want to say: Author, how do you manage to sleep at your age? How did you manage to sleep! ? Get up quickly and give me an update! I want to read a new chapter, I want to read a new chapter! If you don't watch it anymore, you will really feel like there are ants crawling all over your body!

The only shortcoming is that except for the description of the protagonist's slight weight loss at the beginning, there is no description at all later. There is no requirement for the protagonist to lose weight. No matter how handsome he is, he can be comparable to those male protagonists, but he must at least lose weight.

It's a very interesting comic. The protagonist's story is not that exaggerated. The shortcoming is that it's too short, and there are often some contents that I haven't read. For example, you can tell me the names of those comics. I want to watch it.