Anime Crossover: Even a Couch Potato Can Have Dreams

To the largest bacterium among bacteria: "Author Bacteria," hello! Here are my personal suggestions for this book (in my opinion): I think after a few dozen chapters, the protagonist will have slimmed down, and the emotional foundation will be laid enough. It's time to write a sweet harem romance! It's almost chapter 300 and there's still no information about her successfully losing weight. I'm thinking of letting the book sit longer, kids.

The character interactions are good, that's about it. The pacing is too slow, most people can probably feel it. With only one storyline per day over the weekend, each storyline lasting ten or more chapters, and multi-person storylines stretching to twenty or thirty chapters, it feels like they're writing every weekend. This leads to more problems.

The beginning was okay, but when it came to Jiaxi, who was Jiaxi to the protagonist? Was she his ancestor? Why not just kill her off? Why bring her home? If she doesn't change her personality, she'll cause a lot of trouble later, and the protagonist will have to clean up the mess, or the protagonist will be misunderstood as a lolicon by the female protagonists in crossover anime. That's just my opinion, don't worry about it.

Overall, it's well-written. I enjoyed the story of the protagonist gradually improving from being overweight. I deducted one point because of the appearance of a demonic character that felt very out of place in a slice-of-life anime, especially since it was from an anime I hadn't seen. This negatively impacted the viewing experience.

The slice-of-life stories are heartwarming and the characters are all well-developed. It's one of the best-written crossover anime books I've ever read; it's full of jokes and cleverly uses them, and every joke feels natural and engaging. [Please update more frequently!] The beginning is good, don't follow the updates, the later parts are just a rambling account 😠

The interactions between the protagonist, Eriri and her mother, and Yukinoshita were all well-written. It's a pity I don't know Kashi; I stopped reading after Kashi appeared, and the corrupted system from the beginning was completely removed, which is a real shame.

It's pretty good. The male lead's chubby and hunched posture is actually a distinctive feature that makes him easy to remember. Honestly, those stories that portray their male leads as incredibly handsome end up being rather formulaic and unremarkable, but this one avoids that. The slice-of-life scenes are also well-written, and the system is subtly integrated, preventing it from feeling padded. 👍

This is truly a gem unearthed from a pile of tomato-filled poop. The author's control over the character development is quite good, and the pacing and writing of the daily life are also very well done. It doesn't have that "the protagonist is invincible from the start" kind of story; instead, it writes the heartwarming slice-of-life story I've been wanting to read in a crossover anime.

The only downside is that the protagonist only briefly loses weight at the beginning, and then there's no further depiction of that. It's not required that the protagonist be thin; he doesn't need to be incredibly handsome or comparable to other male leads, but at least he should be slim.

It's a pretty interesting crossover anime/manga story. The protagonist's overpowered abilities aren't too exaggerated. The downsides are that it's too short, and it often includes content I haven't read before. Could you tell me the names of those manga? I'd like to check them out.