The Maidservants' Characters Come First

It is a book that suits my taste. It is suitable for people with high drug tolerance [face covering] (about 85 chapters). The first chapter has a slow narrative pace, with a lot of filling in the world view and foreshadowing. The second chapter speeds up the pace accordingly. It promotes the plot while avoiding a lot of easily repetitive academy plots. It is detailed and appropriate (I was very surprised when I realized such a decisive narrative method at the time). In the second chapter, you can clearly feel the changes in the characters, making some of the main characters instantly more three-dimensional (it feels like your own children have grown up), and the viewing experience is much more comfortable than in the first chapter. Generally speaking, when reading this novel, it feels like watching their story vertically from the long river of time from the perspective of a bystander. The plain narrative makes people feel comfortable, and the occasional passion makes people feel happy~ It can be said to be a rare and good book. I'm really looking forward to the next story, best wishes, author. [Laughing]

This is the only book that I feel I can't finish [face covering] Each chapter has more than 10,000 words, and I still have more than 200 chapters that I haven't read yet. OK! Top! [Cover face] The characterizations are particularly delicate, vivid and charming, especially Yu'er! [Love] I especially want to see the scene where Yu'er meets other people after Mido's rule of passive silence is removed. It's interesting to think about it! [Laughing evilly] I want to ask... Are there any knives in the later stages? [Laughing awkwardly] Will there be a happy ending for Lain and the others? [Crying] So far, we have seen that Ellie brought Lain, Yu'er and others to the Luosheng Empire and went south to the sea. There are more than 200 chapters left. I will work hard and continue reading! [Laugh]

The writing is very nice. Keep up the good work. [Love] Some of Rhine's actions were too indulgent. The same goes for Cuculin. He deceived Princess Zhou and almost had a bad incident happen. The protagonist didn't react at all? Brother, the protagonist is physically cold, not mentally cold.

Nice. I'm writing a story well. It feels like reading some stories in paper books when I was a child. I think the part separated from the weir is great. The protagonist is like a bystander? As he said. Just a passerby in my life. Watch first. Come on author Jessica's part. God is with you. But he said he couldn't stop it. It feels weird. In the end, byd succeeded. Just speaking from personal preference. I can't accept Jessica's ending.

After reading it, I can just say a few words. The novel has a good feel to it, but the plot in the early stages has a lot of poisonous points. If you want to perfect Rhine's character, there is no need to sacrifice the character that looks good to readers (I'm talking about Xiao Linyu). Even Jessica can accept it, but the plot between Xiao Linyu and Lai Yin is really poisonous (for me) There is also too little plot in the later college plot of Youcha (the real protagonist). Although the plot of Rhine is okay, the amount of interaction between Rhine and Youcha is obviously much less. I don't know if the author wants to change Rian's character in this part of the plot (well, Rhine's transformation is still worthy of praise. It is not that abrupt but it feels like damn it is still damnable) If you can resist the early poisonous points and survive until the end, overall this novel is highly recommended.

It's a very good otherworld novel. The overall pace is slow, so all aspects are well-shaped, and there will be more sense of life. It may also be that the books I read are generally longer, but I like this kind of slow pace. The characters have their own distinct positions, especially the various aspects of the character formation and growth of Rhine and Kukum. The original "evil boy" and "eldest lady" gradually become a qualified and responsible person. Rhine was indeed evil at first, but from his "education" to Xiu En, we can understand the special environment in which he grew up, as well as some indulgence and isolation. Well, he will still be very poor later. Although Youcha and Dorn have big goals, and the world as a whole is quite miserable, Youcha has indeed gradually changed the surroundings, and the various daily thoughts and people are still quite enjoyable. This is a group portrait article full of life, education and changes. I have read the latest version in two weeks. I like it very much. I can't get enough. Come on, the author [crazy]

It's a very good book, but a few poisonous points are too poisonous. It's not that the plot is unreasonable, but it doesn't fit the readers' perception. And I'm not the only one who thinks it. Everyone in the comment section basically agrees with me [laughing]. Apart from these few poisonous points, this book is still very good. A score of 9 or above is enough to prove that this book is still very good. I hope the author can work hard.

Logical group portraits, different characters have different characteristics, unlike some novels that cater to the protagonist's personality. Characters determine their character because of their experiences, act because of their character, and act because of their actions to promote the plot. Daily life is the finishing touch, giving flesh and blood to the characters. The characters' thoughts and personalities are seen from the behavioral plot, rather than abrupt narration. I think this can be done with re0 and Game of Thrones. The timeline has complete historical legends, a clear worldview, no combat or economic collapse, and diverse influences from forces. It will not be as outrageous as the forces in some popular works. No one knows about the forces before they come out, and everyone knows about them once they come out. There is no God's perspective on the characters, and different characters have different opinions. Unlike some articles, everyone knows it once the narration says it. The plot has overt and hidden lines, and the character lines of different characters. The characters will collapse and become stronger due to the changes they experience. There are no nameless characters with experience in the article. Characters who had conflicts in the early stage also socialize and are good friends with some of the main characters. In reality, there is no clear supporting role and everyone is the protagonist. For example, the bread store manager will appear a second time and be described again. The bread store manager has a nephew who is a believer of the Guanghuang (or Guangming) cult, and then enters the cult from that believer. Then the saint behind the cult is an ordinary person at the beginning, and has a close connection with the protagonist group. Then the old nun of the Guangming (still Brilliant) Cult met the priest and influenced the priest. The priest later traveled around the world and influenced many people... Like complex relationships in real life. For example, who is my best friend, but he made a friend when he went out to play and influenced his new friend's life to become better, but I didn't know his new friend. Then his new friend's cousin was my classmate, and then I became a passerby with a name, but my best friend would change others because of me. Such a plot. A true group portrait. It has the same flavor as Jobless Reincarnation, but has more characters, more main plots, and is full of hidden plots. At the same time, the foreshadowing is long-term and the timeline is good. As time advances, the story situations of a bunch of characters in the world are changing, affecting the protagonist's adventure. The article will not suddenly pop up a new powerful figure in order to advance the plot, and the plot will advance in a traceable manner. Anyway, the author Megumin is cute

The world view is great, and the characterization is even better. The first part is dark in style, while the second part is more relaxed and cheerful. It is recommended to watch the second part directly (those with poor receptivity should not be brave and watch the first part). The first part is currently being read.

After reading the latest chapter, I finally dared to post a book review ps: This is the first time I have read a 2 million word book non-stop on Tomato Let me talk about the whole thing first, it is wonderful, really wonderful. The main line is very clear, and the small daily details mixed in are also very warm. It is a very good group portrait article. Next, let's talk about the shortcomings. The nearly 600,000 words at the beginning are really poisonous, although it's fun to watch Tea Kill Rhine. The plot does not have the sense of depression that the author may want to create, but only anger. The conversation with Mido and Youcha's occasional cuteness seem to be the only mediators. I simply can't imagine that the students at the Magic Academy in the capital of the Rashomon Empire would be so bad. It's similar to the local talents of a school in the capital of a country (analogous to the noble children in the Rashou Empire) doing things that can only be done in professional schools. I couldn't believe it when I saw Lin Yu being bullied. The sole heir of one country was almost raped in another country. All I feel is anger and hopelessness for the next generation of this country. Of course, it was really hopeless in the end. If you survive until the chapter where Rhine begins to change, then you can witness the transformation of a bad playboy, the change of a spoiled slave girl, you can witness a slave who has lost his human rights find his own hope in life, and you can see the inheritance of a country. The performance of a person acting alone, you can see the actions of a black cat who is looked down upon by everyone to resist fate, and you can see the powerlessness of a god who is almost omniscient but not omnipotent... This is the wonderful thing about this book. Everyone, even passers-by, is well portrayed, and there are many knives, so I won't go into details. At the end of the first volume, 1.95 Million words of foreshadowing led to the final explosion. Rhine also faded away from his past and ushered in a new chapter. Looking forward to Huihui's new story~