
National Fate: Choose Teammates from the Start? I Choose Duanmu Yan!
国运:开局选队友?我选端木燕!
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It's so touching. The author once again made me see what is the most terrifying thing about a straight man selling sex. This faint sense of happiness and the feeling that you are the only one in the world that can catch my eye are the lifelong pursuits of us fellow women! Thank you so much, author. I will write a fanfic right away. I am going to be enlightened. Thank you so much! [Almost crying]
The character design is great, and the most important thing is that the second dungeon gave Hongmao and the others the best ending to make up for the regrets. There were really too many regrets in the original plot of Hongmao, and these regrets were all made up by the author [Like]
Five stars for Nava World. The world view is a bit big. I don't know if I can grasp it. According to the current information, everything the protagonist has experienced is a game of gods and a classic trolley problem, but the perspective is put into a very large dimension. In fact, I personally don't like this kind of plot. It seems that the protagonist and the person who sacrificed for it are clowns. To put it nicely, it means actively sacrificing for the sake of righteousness. But to say it worse, who will die if you don't die? If you don't die, you can't do it. If you don't die, you can't follow the plot. This type of plot makes me feel a little uncomfortable watching it [facepalm], but the author still has good control over other aspects. Yangyangshu, I look forward to finishing Taijian [Like]
This is my favorite armor fanfic. The protagonist is gentle and strong. Duan Muyan and Ye Xian's cp is very interesting, but I only like the armor part, so I skipped reading it. It's really perfect, the feelings are delicate, the writing style is funny, it's explosive when it should be, the characters are unbreakable, and the values are positive. It can be called the pinnacle of the same series of Kai fan fiction. There is no bullying, only the bond between brothers, correcting evil and returning to the right. Righteousness, responsibility, decisiveness, choice, the inner world of the protagonists 1 to 3 and the supporting characters described are very rich. They are not paper characters but flesh and blood. It can untie the knot and give everyone a better ending.
This book is good and has great potential. As a 3000-hour kid, this book is quite fun. The author starts with the plot of Armor Nava, and relies on the popularity of Duan Muyan on Douyin to attract readers. Later, the popularity of Rainbow Cat, Blue Rabbit, and Hei Xiaohu, a licking dog, on Douyin attracts readers to this book again. It is really good. I guess the author also watches Aze on Douyin. Of course, this book has some flaws, and the development of supporting characters is a bit lacking. There are also some typos. Nothing else.
After seeing Chapter 139, let me talk about the advantages first. The characterization and plot arrangement are okay, some quotes and jokes are just right, and the protagonist's personality is also good, but I want to complain. Yes, in Kai 2 King Peel, the plot is forcibly reversed. First, he cannot defeat King Peel, and then the protagonist himself cannot upgrade the Shura armor. Then it fails again, letting Duanmu upgrade, hanging King Peel up and beating [face covering] [face covering]. It's really hard to collapse, I feel forcibly moved. And there are those gods, who belongs to you, it is destined, what if Ye really dies? It felt messy, so I chose to skip it. In the end, this is still a good book, and the author also listens. The above only represents my personal opinion [Love] [Love] [Love]
It's quite interesting. I hope the author can write more. Besides, the protagonist and Duanmu are a bit on the same page [laughing]
Finished reading. Generally speaking, it is very interesting, very interesting, and it is very refreshing when it is refreshing. The whole text is implemented in the beginning of Duan Muyan's book title. It is really difficult to end without Ye Xian and Duanmu getting married [laughing], but Ye Xian always sacrifices himself to make me feel numb, and I feel sorry for Duanmu every day. Ye Xian is also a succubus, with strong personal charm and cuteness, and his interaction with Duan Muyan is also very loving [shy]. The group portraits in the later stage were also well written [laughs], nothing particularly OOC. It's just that there's too little written about the world and it's not enough to read [crying]
It's well written, relaxed and full of socialist brotherhood. The most important thing is that there is no so-called heroine. Just upgrade it and it's over. Multiple women will be very troublesome.
Beautiful MAX! ! ! The author please update as soon as possible! The protagonist and Duanmu are so at odds with each other, maybe they will get married later (bushi), I hope they can go to Nava World in the future!