The God of Luck in Love Apartment

I was attracted by the dual heroines Nuolan Yumo, I really like them in Aiyu, they are the most feminine. It's a pity that there aren't many written about them [laughing awkwardly][laughing awkwardly]

I have finished reading all the updates so far and gave it 4 stars. Let me tell you my opinion. First of all, there are two female protagonists, Yu Mo and Nuo Lan. I like this very much [Blowing Kiss] [Flowing Kiss] [Flowing Kiss]. These two not only poke my xp, but also can restore everyone's youth without breaking up the original couple. But there is a problem, that is, there are too few scenes between the male and female protagonists, and there is no emotional push at all, and it is very stiff. The second point is that the author restores the original work too much, which makes it feel the same whether there is a male protagonist or not. And for someone like me who has read Love Apartment 1-4 no less than 20 times, I know all the plots, and I still jump through many of them because I can even recite the lines. For example, regarding the legend of Guan Gu, his arrival can be written as the male protagonist asking for something from Lu Ziqiao, so he joins forces to trick Guan Gu Miraculous, and this request can be to learn from Lu Ziqiao how to date girls, which happens to be applied to Nuo Lan or Yu Mo. Then the next chapter can be about the male protagonist's love battle. You can write about the original plan to use Lu Ziqiao's anti-friction, but Hu Yifei found out and insisted on using his own method. The male protagonist disagreed, but Yifei interfered with it and tried to find a way to get involved. Then there was a big oolong, and finally the relationship between the male and female protagonists was strengthened. Writing this way can, to a certain extent, make the male protagonist more integrated into the big family of the iPartment. Finally, I hope the author will work hard and don't give up. I also want to see the good ending of Yu Mo Nuolan [Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss]

The low rating is just because there are too few updates. The starting score for the third update should be at least 7.0 Or above, and if you have four updates every day, you should get a score of 8.5 Or above. In addition, some people say that the plot is no different from that of a TV series. You can intersperse some of your own writing in the love apartment, such as going out to sea, fishing, and camping at the beach. There are also wild luxury hotels where you can cultivate your mind and nature in the mountains. You can also go to the antique street to open up rough stones and buy jade and the like. All of these can be written about. The protagonist is not short of money. Others can go along with them and follow them for free, but you can take them with you when traveling back and forth. After all, there are many people and it is lively, and everyone is not short of money later. Zeng Xiaoxian won 5 million and a villa, Guangu published comics, and his family is a famous cooking family. Zi Qiao also has his own business (seriously watch a video 9.9, A huge profit business), and has a large audience. He also has a good godfather and a rich little mother. Everyone in the love apartment is not short of money. If you accept the love of the protagonist in the early stage, you can pay it back later. We open up our minds. If we don't know how to write, we just watch some TV series or variety shows and write down some interesting and interesting things. I hope the author will consider it and add more [Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts] as the rating will rise quickly.

Mainly because I like the two heroines [laughing awkwardly]

I feel like it could be changed to three female protagonists, adding Zhuge Dali. Zhang Wei already has Jian Ning. And the reason is already there, Zhuge Dali must be very interested in the male protagonist's koi physique [Thinking]

The heroine Nuo Lan, Yu Mo, is lucky if she doesn't have any cheats, and her writing is okay. The fan fiction is basically the same, and it's difficult to change her mind according to the plot. What is more distinctive is that Zhang Wei's daughter-in-law was changed to Jian Ning, the daughter of the white-haired old lady who Zhang Wei only won as a lawyer. There are very few fanfics written and some of them are mostly eunuchs that have been completed. Five-star reward

I can't be the only one who steps into the trap

Overall, it's okay. It's not much different from the original drama. The descriptions are basically in place. It can also be seen that I'm trying to write some of my own things bit by bit. However, there is a small problem. This kind of word is often used at the end of the characters' dialogues. This kind of word causes the effect presented to be inconsistent with the context at that time. As for the question of whether you know the plot, it's actually okay. You can selectively ignore it.

This feels good. I like the two female protagonists. I haven't watched the fifth season and I don't like it. I hope the author will update more. Come on

It's pretty good, a little bland, but okay...