Slave System: My Days as a Master in Japan

If the storyline could be made more coherent, it would be great for an H-game. 🤭

It's very enjoyable. It's a classic urban fantasy novel with a focus on showing off and getting revenge, but it focuses on everyday life, which feels very natural. Everything the protagonist does is right, which makes it even more satisfying. The first two chapters weren't handled well, but for a seasoned reader like me with full tolerance, it's not a big deal; I can just skip them quickly. However, it might be very discouraging for many new readers. The rest of the time is pure bliss.

Wasn't it supposed to be a slave system? It doesn't feel like a slave system at all; it's more like a conquest system, and even then, it doesn't feel like a conquest system. It's more like a romance system or a woman-collecting system, and not even a goddess-collecting system. There's no sense of dominance whatsoever.

This is really well-written, I love reading it! Thank you so much, author! @ However, for the remaining 11 people out of the 26 in the system, if you have time, could you please write a second book or a side story to finish it? The ending feels a bit rushed, and I really want to see you finish it all!

The rushed and absurd ending is a major flaw, but it doesn't affect the plot except for the last chapter. After all, the writing about the Japanese is stress-free and enjoyable for readers. There are indeed many women, and each of them has her own distinct strengths, which demonstrates the author's good skill. Keep it up!

It's really good! The plot is fast-paced and you can't put it down once you start watching.

From the perspective of overall patriotism, it is worth recommending!

This book is great! The logic is clear, the content is concise, and it's a rare gem among Tomato Novels' works. I hope the author continues to do well! I saw the author mention that some people gave negative reviews after reading the first two chapters, but those are just haters. The author doesn't need to pay attention to them; at least to me, there's nothing wrong with them!

It feels like a beginner's impromptu writing, so we can't expect too much from a newcomer. There are some scenes that you might skip. To be honest, it's okay as a light read, but for future chapters, I suggest using a main storyline to develop subplots, create some plot holes, and build suspense. For a new book, it's not bad. Hopefully, the story will become more concise later on, and some unnecessary parts should be removed.

Author, please keep updating! Don't stop updating! Damn, some novels just disappear while I'm reading them.