Disaster! The White Lotus Is Trying to Seduce the Aloof Immortal Lord

The setting of the female protagonist is quite novel. At first, she calculated that the male protagonist would help her. It was very interesting, a bit like a black lotus. Later, the delicate and enjoyable writing was too much, and she occasionally felt a little uncomfortable. The setting of the male protagonist was very good. So far, the overall plot is pretty good, and the fight between the male and female protagonists is also very interesting. Watching the two of them get along really makes me laugh. It feels a bit archaic during the Cold War, but it's still acceptable. However, I feel that a lot of things have been deleted, and many places are incoherent, which somewhat affects the viewing experience (reading the comments, it is said that a lot of large-scale content was deleted?). Another thing is that there are too many descriptions of the heroine's psychology, and each time it is a long paragraph. When reading a novel, I feel like I am being preached. They keep giving me opinions, which makes me tired. At the same time, it seems that the heroine is very tangled and twisted. Maybe it is because I want to write about the heroine's thoughts. She is trying to find a balance between the concepts of modern society and the values ​​of the world of immortality, but she does not grasp it very well. The character is not established yet and it seems that she is hypocritical, but it is understandable. The most uncomfortable thing is that she is not good or bad, and her thoughts are always wavering.

Good-looking, good-looking, Book friends, I feel that the author's writing becomes more and more evident in a point of view: the heroine is not just independent, but needs to rely on herself. She wants everything around her not to be owned by me but to be used by me. We can be independent but we must also be good at using the people or things around us. Think about it, there are too many short videos or other information around us. The channels are all conveying that big women should be independent and do what they want, but what is more important for us must be good at using people or things around us to achieve our own needs. Are the big men around us just to be alone? Of course not, they are men who are more calculating and will use everything around them to satisfy their own interests, so of course we must use our strengths and avoid weaknesses I think the author's writing is super good, I like it, and each short story is well shaped. It just made me cry. The part where Ruoruo left the male protagonist in the middle was very well written. We are not dodder flowers. We Ruoruo may be a petty spirit when we usually get along with the male protagonist, but When there is no male protagonist, there will be times when our Ruoruo can stand alone. She is a very independent girl. Her independent thinking when facing those things enriches Ruoruo's writing. It is not flat at all. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhish usaaaaar. Please update soon, the author is great

She is really, really good-looking. The heroine is like a white lotus flower (not in a derogatory sense) and is really kind-hearted. She is not just pretending. Almost all of the heroine's thoughts are used on the male protagonist! ! Anyway, it is very beautiful. The author will update qwq soon.

It's super good-looking at the moment, like a combination of articles about cultivating immortals and articles about super-beautiful green tea thighs. It feels super good~! Write more meat, it depends on the actual meat [laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh]

Sink in vain and eat hard! ! ! I chased for a long time. I also gave up for a long time in the middle. I couldn't put it down and came back to watch it again. Because I'm not willing to give in! ! ! Bai's first half is very good, not a virgin, independent, deeply favored but not deep. In the middle part, Bai suddenly had an incomprehensible view. The author wrote a lot of her inner thoughts. I understand that the author wanted to express Bai's inner thoughts, but it was very contradictory. Well, people are full of contradictions... Now I feel like I have to eat it without any hardship! ! The two little ones are suffering so much. Torture for purpose. Of course this is your novel, you can write it however you like! But the reader's life is not life? If you are unhappy with the readers' complaints, you can lock up the book and write it yourself for your own appreciation! (-"-Anger) Can it be sweet?? Ang?? What is so bitter and cruel?! Ang??????? A little sorry. It's strange, I felt miserable after watching the whole show. The world view of this book is quite large. It's not easy to write it either. I am not good at writing, so to put it simply, this book is a sugar-coated glass romance novel. To put it in detail, at first it was sweet and sweet, and then the little abuser started to cut and cut with sweet and sweet, and then tortured the male protagonist, all kinds of knives, all kinds of things. It was about to be reunited, and suddenly it stopped abruptly, and the female protagonist "gave up" (of course she came back to life later, and the female protagonist seemed to "die" three times. The male protagonist had the sequelae of PTSD in the end.) The last one is he. There is lightheartedness and comedy. There is broth. There is sweetness. More depression, entanglement and anxiety! ! ! (To put it rudely: The whole text is full of nonsense!!! It's sugar-coated!!!) [Crying] Finally, the author writes very well. Four stars because my eyes were swollen from crying. [Smile]

It's really beautiful! I hope Shura Field will come soon! But I don't want the heroine to take the initiative to hook up with others, just because others like the heroine and the hero is jealous. (Personally, I feel that the character of the heroine is a bit too weak, and she has to cry and rely on the hero for everything. It was very sweet at first, but if there are too many plots, the ending is a bit bad, and it can be reduced a little.) Overall, it looks good, and I look forward to the update! Looking back, you will fall in love with the heroine. She is a resolute and kind-hearted person, but she is also cunning and uses tricks to achieve her own goals. This kind of person is very smart. And she also really loves the male protagonist. Although there are some tricks in the process of getting it, she really gives her love. She is willing to give up some boring time in order to let the male protagonist stand at the top.

It's really white lotus. In fact, people don't hate kind people, but they are afraid that kind people will pity even bad people. Although the heroine is kind, she doesn't have to be kind in everything. Although pity must be pitiful for people who have done bad things, the heroine pities him, but she doesn't think that the bad things he did can be eliminated. I think this looks very appropriate. The heroine does not use the hero's things to help others. Such a hero is really good, and such a heroine is also really good, which is very satisfying.

The emotional line progresses very quickly, the soft little master ✘The reserved little uncle is so cute. She lures him step by step to fall, but he still falls after seeing the trick. He can tolerate all her bad things, because he has other intentions for her, and he wants her. She is really good-looking. I hope that the subsequent emotional lines will always be sweet, but sometimes there may be missing words.

Looks good! ! I watched it last night and it immediately tied the knot. I saw that at 2:30 in the morning, the heroine was not a dodder flower! ! ! Although she was very weak and incompetent in the early stage and needed the help of the male protagonist, after she cleansed her spiritual roots, she no longer relied on the male protagonist. Mainly, she didn't have the strength to rely on herself! Why don't you hug me if you have thighs? She also knows that she cannot let the male protagonist indulge in love and delay his cultivation. The male protagonist wants to save the world, and the female protagonist asks the male protagonist to put the world before her! She is really nice! ! !

It's really, really good [I'm about to cry]. From the beginning, the heroine is calculating and attached (of course she's a little tempted) to being patient and strong [loving] [loving] [crying] Immortal wood spirit root, dark willows and bright flowers [almost crying] [crying] It's really not easy for baby Ruoruo, and everything she gets is worth it The author's character creation is really good, he is a multi-faceted and three-dimensional person, and the plot is not laggy at all! Really, after getting through the previous point, our heroine will arrive even though she is late! Ruoruo is a proud but strong delicate baby. Although she has plans, why can't she be kind? She helps others by herself, and there is also an explanation in the article about the need to help others to upgrade outside the space. So can some people not be so angry? This is not the Holy Mother, but a small kindness that a normal modern girl would have. [Love] I like it so much, thank the author for writing such a good meal [Crying] [Almost crying] Come on, ball ball, code word wow, an emo girl was saved [Love] [Love]