Hey, Old Man, Look! Our Makeshift Sect

Very nice! The relationship between them is really interesting! There are five ethnic groups, and everyone has a little bit of fun in them. They get along so "lovingly"! I hope there will be more updates, there are too few, and you will never encounter someone like me who is easy to deceive again •᷄ࡇ•᷅ [Love][Love] Great support for writing and updating!

Ahhhhhhhh it's really beautiful! Big Brother, I'm a real group favorite! Although the senior brother said he disliked him, he did not hesitate to use his lifespan, and he still thought about helping Yuyu recover the golden elixir [send heart]. The relationship between the sects was funny and warm, and Mo Yuan, don't love him too much [learned] ~ The sect's warmth index is also rising sharply today! Although this is a male video, this book is really cool about CP from the perspective of a female video [crying] [crying]

It's actually pretty good-looking, and the main character doesn't have to be invincible or have a golden finger or something. And the author marked it as not invincible. Very funny! The second senior brother and the first senior brother are really easy to get along with.

The language and writing are very charming. When I clicked in, I thought it would be a long time to watch the 7.4 Rating, but I didn't expect it to look like my ideal dream five-person team. I can only say that time is fate.

It's really beautiful! There is a junior sister in Wu CP, but she is not the kind of junior sister who is in love, she is the kind of funny one. It's the feeling of Lin Daiyu pulling up the weeping willow. And the plot is very interesting! Anyway, the development is unexpected. Highly recommended! It's worth watching! ! !

I give you five stars. Although some parts of the book are really inappropriate (it's shocking/I summarized it from the comments and my own feelings), but I really like to watch the interaction between the protagonist and Mo Yuan, and it feels CP, so I can still read it. I hope that the subsequent plot development will be better and better.

It's a wonderful group scene, each character has a distinct and vivid personality, and the characters all stand up. The writing style is relaxed and humorous, the writing is smooth, there are almost no poisonous points or urine points, the three views are correct, and there is no water injection. The foreshadowing in the early stage has basically come true in the follow-up - this is something that most online writers cannot do. I am a sufferer of severe anxiety, and there are not many novels that allow me to see the ending, and this is one of them. It must be given a five-star rating. I hope the rating of this book will increase again. It should be 9.5 To be normal. Those bad articles have higher scores than this one, which makes me feel unhappy. [Cover face]

The world view is not big, but the story is very good. This book is a group portrait. The protagonist has a very low force value, and the system sometimes works well. The whole plot is relatively relaxed, there are no knives, and there is no bitterness or hatred. It is not a traditional way of killing monsters and upgrading. The clues in the book are very clear and all kinds of pitfalls are basically filled in. The length is not long, so it may be easier to control when writing. The writing style is consistent from beginning to end, so as to avoid falling into the matryoshka doll of blindly expanding the world view just for the sake of writing. The switching between various parts of the map is smooth and there are no abrupt turns. No heroine. It's considered a masterpiece on Tomato, and it manages to tell a good story.

I feel that the plot is good, it is reasonable, but it is unexpected. My overall expression of the plot is that the plot is good. Of course, it may be that I do not have high expectations. I have finished listening to it. For me personally, the emotional ups and downs are not great (it may also be a problem with my personal emotions), but it is not boring. And there are some subplots that slightly raise my blood pressure. For example, I add seasonings to a plain and not boring dish to make it more flavorful. In summary, his shortcoming is obvious, that is, it is too beautiful, so beautiful that only a few good plots can happen. Its advantage is that it is not really boring or plain, and sometimes it makes you wonder whether it is shredded potatoes or shredded ginger. (Personal opinion only)

The author writes well! ! This is my first time watching it. I am already looking forward to it when will you create a group? The masters are very "harmonious" and the master is very at ease. I hope there will be more plots between Master and Shimen [Thoughts] No cp, the unity of the division is not brainless [rolls eyes]. Recommendation is not just a matter of brushing it off [blowing kiss]