The Author Uses a Secret Identity to Play Matchmaker in a Harem-Lit Novel

It's the same familiar theme! I really like this style~ Author, keep up the good work! (ง ˙O˙)ว Remember to update on time every day, I've been waiting for you for so long 😢 Finally! 😢

Great reviews!! 😳 Finally, a new story is starting! [Currently working on the draft] It's still a familiar theme.

Overall, I think it's okay, but author, it seems like you haven't filled many plot holes. It's kind of weird. Before, Bai Luojing was rescued by that disguised "toilet beauty," and afterwards, he stayed behind to cover their retreat. Later, Bai Luojing was worried and wanted to go back to find him.

I love it! It's so good! This kind of theme is quite novel for me; I rarely see anyone write this kind of story so well. I highly recommend it; you won't regret it! It's super good, the characters are very well-developed, and the plot is excellent. Actually, I really want the protagonist and Li Xing to be together. The Venerable and the Protector are just too adorable!

For me, this book's theme is very novel. I just don't know when the protagonist will develop feelings for the other male leads. The story focuses too much on the protagonist's relationships with the other male leads. Anyway, I'm looking forward to the later developments where the male leads are pursuing their female leads. The author writes very well, and I'm really looking forward to the later developments.

So far, it looks pretty good, hehe. I'll give the author a good review first, keep it up!

The writing is excellent, especially the beginning, which was quite engaging. However, I was a bit shocked when the protagonist's character fell apart later on. The ending felt rushed. I think not having children is also a good thing (this is just my personal opinion, please don't be offended, author).

The plot and romance are fast-paced and the story moves quickly; the love triangle is quite enjoyable. However, the later parts feel a bit out of character and strange. Everyone seems to forget that Chen Yanze is the Demon Lord and that he was nerfed to an extreme degree to avoid collateral damage. Initially, it seemed like a strong-strong dynamic, but later on, Yanze became quite spoiled. Still, it's a very good read! These are just my personal opinions; the later parts are really sweet.

It's clear this is the author's first book, and it's quite good for a first attempt. Keep up the good work! However, those who are particular about writing style might want to consider this; the author could definitely improve their writing. The content is all things I enjoy reading. It's alright, but there's a lot of room for improvement! (❁´◡`❁)*✲ﾟ*

Overall, it's not bad, but the romance feels a bit strange. In the secret realm, based on the description, Bai Luojing seemed to have some feelings for "Toilet Flower," but later, after leaving the secret realm, she fell for her junior brother, even though they are the same person, but Bai Luojing didn't know it, which felt a bit odd. [What?]